Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence saying your general style, then give two specific supporting details (fit, sleeve length) using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Ejemplo: I prefer form-fitting shirts that show my shape. For everyday wear I usually choose short sleeves because the climate is hot, and I avoid oversized tops except for hoodies when I want comfort.

Sugerencia: Good structure and relevance. Improve fluency by reducing fillers (like, gonna) and use a linking phrase to contrast choices. Correct minor grammar (plural/singular).

Ejemplo: It depends on the occasion: for errands or coffee I wear comfortable, casual clothes, but for university or fashionable events I choose smart outfits to look more put together.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and correct small errors. Give one clear reason and one concrete example linked with a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like T-shirts because they are easy to maintain and very versatile. For example, I often pair a simple T-shirt with jeans and add a scarf or jacket to create a more fashionable look.

Sugerencia: Organize ideas and remove repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence about spending time choosing clothes, then give specific reasons (variety, coordination with hair/makeup) using linking words. Avoid informal fillers and incorrect phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer not to repeat outfits and I like trying new styles. Therefore I carefully plan what to pair with each item and check whether it matches my hair and makeup.

Sugerencia: Clarify the main idea and fix unclear phrase 'A1 style'. Use linking words to contrast weekday/weekend habits and give a concise example. Remove hesitations and fragmented sentences.

Ejemplo: Usually I don't change my basic style, but it depends on activities: for quick errands I wear casual clothes, whereas for a full day at fashionable places I choose a more stylish outfit.

Sugerencia: Avoid repetition and improve grammar and word choice (e.g., 'bring out my eyes', 'make me look pale'). Give one clear reason and a brief example of preferred colours using linking words.

Ejemplo: I prefer dark colours because they suit my skin tone and bring out my eyes. For instance, I often wear black or deep brown because light colours tend to make me look pale.

× I have a type where whatever goes to my mind I'll wear it.

✓ I have a style where I wear whatever comes to my mind.

The original uses 'type' and 'goes to my mind' awkwardly. Replace 'type' with 'style' (word choice) and use 'comes to my mind' for natural phrasing. Also change word order to 'I wear whatever comes to my mind' for clarity.

× But mostly I love shirts that are stick onto my stomach onto my body.

✓ But mostly I love shirts that stick to my stomach and body.

The verb 'stick' should be followed by the preposition 'to' not 'onto' in this context. Also 'stick onto my stomach onto my body' is redundant; combine as 'stick to my stomach and body.'

× I don't like oversized shirts unless it's a hoodie.

✓ I don't like oversized shirts unless it's a hoodie.

Sentence is acceptable but pronoun 'it' refers to 'an oversized shirt'—no change required. No correction given.

× Yes I do wear an oversized hoodie but since that my country is really hot I love to wear a short sleeve shirt that is stress.

✓ Yes, I do wear an oversized hoodie, but because my country is really hot I prefer to wear short-sleeved shirts that are comfortable.

Original has incorrect connector 'since that', awkward phrasing 'short sleeve shirt that is stress' (likely meant 'comfortable' or 'less stressful'). Use 'because' for reason, plural 'shirts' to match general preference, and adjective 'short-sleeved' plus appropriate adjective 'comfortable.'

× So if I'm going for like an everyday errands or like a grocery shopping, I'd wear a casual comfortable clothes.

✓ So if I'm going for everyday errands or grocery shopping, I'd wear casual, comfortable clothes.

Use plural 'errands' without 'an', omit 'a' before 'grocery shopping', and remove 'a' before 'casual comfortable clothes'. Add comma between adjectives.

× Or like if I'm gonna go grab a coffee, comfortable is the way to go.

✓ Or if I'm going to grab a coffee, comfort is the way to go.

Use formal 'going to' instead of 'gonna' and noun 'comfort' fits better as the subject complement. Alternatively, 'comfortable clothes are the way to go.'

× But for smart clothes or like going to university or like a fashionable event, I would prefer to wear smart clothes.

✓ But for smart occasions, such as going to university or a fashionable event, I would prefer to wear smart clothes.

Avoid repetition of 'smart clothes' and restructure with 'such as' to list examples. Use 'occasions' to generalize contexts when smart clothes are appropriate.

× Yes I do because T-shirts are really easy to maintain where I can pair them with whatever I want, like adding a scarf, even if it was like a basic shirt with basic jeans, I feel like I can make it even a fashionable clothing.

✓ Yes, I do because T-shirts are really easy to maintain and I can pair them with whatever I want, like adding a scarf. Even a basic T-shirt with basic jeans can become a fashionable outfit.

Replace 'where' with 'and' to connect ideas properly. Use past 'was' is incorrect; use present 'is' or rephrase. 'Clothing' is uncountable; use 'outfit' for a single set. Break into two sentences for clarity.

× So I feel like AT shirt can be like a fashionable, uh, outfit, not just a plain shirt.

✓ So I feel like a T-shirt can be a fashionable outfit, not just a plain shirt.

Replace 'AT shirt' (typo) with 'a T-shirt' and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'fashionable outfit.' Remove filler 'uh.'

× Yes, because I, it all depends.

✓ Yes, it all depends.

Original has extraneous comma and pronoun 'I' incorrectly inserted. Remove the extra 'I' to form a complete, grammatical sentence.

× Because I really can't repeat the clothes I wear in my country.

✓ Because I really can't repeat the clothes I wear in my country.

Sentence is understandable but 'repeat' is awkward; consider 'repeat outfits' instead. No grammatical change required per list, but stylistic suggestion: 'I really don't repeat outfits in my country.'

× I love trying out new stuffs and where I compare them, really just myself with my mind.

✓ I love trying out new stuff and comparing them to what I imagine.

'Stuffs' is nonstandard; use 'stuff' (uncountable) or 'items.' The clause 'where I compare them, really just myself with my mind' is awkward; simplify to 'comparing them to what I imagine' for clarity.

× So I have to like really focus on what I'm gonna pair them with and how am I gonna wear it and if I'm gonna actually love it and if it's gonna go with my hair, my makeup.

✓ So I have to really focus on what I'm going to pair them with, how I'm going to wear them, whether I will actually like them, and whether they will go with my hair and makeup.

Avoid informal 'gonna'; use 'going to.' Maintain consistent plural 'them' referring to clothes. Use 'whether' for alternatives and parallel structure in the list.

× Not really 'cause I already have A1 style, but all depends as I said on where I'm going.

✓ Not really, because I already have a specific style, but it all depends, as I said, on where I'm going.

'A1 style' is unclear; replace with 'a specific style.' Add commas for clarity and correct 'all depends' to 'it all depends.'

× So if it's like a quick. Thing to do, I would wear something really casual, but it was like a full day where I'm gonna meet a lot of people and I'm gonna go to a fashionable place.

✓ So if it's a quick thing to do, I would wear something really casual, but if it's a full day where I'm going to meet a lot of people and go to a fashionable place, I would dress differently.

Remove erroneous period after 'quick' and replace informal 'gonna' with 'going to.' Use conditional 'if' consistently and finalize with 'dress differently' for clarity.

× I like dark colors because it goes with my skin tone and it can pop out my eyes.

✓ I like dark colors because they go with my skin tone and can make my eyes stand out.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with 'colors.' 'Go with' is correct; 'pop out my eyes' is unidiomatic—use 'make my eyes stand out.'

× I don't really like light colors because it makes me look makes me look pale, so I really don't like that.

✓ I don't really like light colors because they make me look pale, so I really avoid them.

Use plural 'they' to agree with 'light colors' and remove duplicated phrase 'makes me look.' Replace 'I really don't like that' with 'I really avoid them' for concision.

× I feel like black and brown goes well with my skin tone.

✓ I feel like black and brown go well with my skin tone.

Subject 'black and brown' is plural, so the verb should be 'go' not 'goes.'

× And yeah, it looks more fit.

✓ And yeah, they make me look fitter.

'Looks more fit' is awkward; use comparative adjective 'fitter' and refer to 'colors' or 'clothes' with 'they' or 'they make me look fitter.'