Part 1
Examinador
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Candidato
I like UH-2 casual things in like a genius, uh, T-shirt. It's a simple things by colorful, uh, uh, clothes, uh, because it is very, umm, comfortable in the very chic and stylish one, Yeah.
Examinador
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Candidato
Yes, I prefer to wear a comfortable and scheduled clothes because it's very umm, umm, easy to umm, movement and a very simple tube shoes and a chance to, uh, get it in, uh, from anywhere. But the smart clothes is very difficult to to choose and it's very important.
Examinador
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Candidato
It's dependent to situation, uh, for example, when I want to go with my friends to hang out, I like to get AT shirt or wear the T-shirt. It's very comfortable and very, uh, calm for me. And I think it is very umm, yeah, It's uh, it's comfortable, yeah.
Examinador
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Candidato
I think it's the bound to the situation because I I feel sometime uh, faced umm, difficulty to choose, especially when I want to go to work or to go to the uh, special celebrate. But when I want to go the hangout with my friend is very simple to you choose any uh clothes yeah.
Examinador
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Candidato
Yeah, it's very different from the weekday and weekend because in weekday it's all as a as a, as a work in our company. So I choose some formal clothes. But in weekend, I like you wearing the traditional clothes in related to the harmonic clothes, yes.
Examinador
What colour clothes do you like?
Candidato
I really like 2 colors. It's black and white and I think it's very simple to, to find it. Uh, but sometime I, I work low, uh, degree or uh, color and because it's very, umm, calm to, to content my eye.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Puntuación: 48.0Sugerencia: حسّن وضوح إجابتك بتجنُّب التردُّد والكلمات غير الضرورية، واستخدم جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم تفاصيل قصيرة محددة. ركّز على الترتيب: نوع الملابس، السبب (راحة/مظهر)، وصف محدد (ألوان/قَصَّة). استخدم ربطًا بسيطًا مثل 'because' أو 'and' لتماسك الإجابة.
Ejemplo: I usually prefer casual clothes, especially plain or colorful T-shirts. They are comfortable and easy to wear, and they often look stylish without much effort.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: استخدم جملة مباشرة توضح تفضيلك ثم قدّم سببًا محددًا واحدًا أو اثنين. تجنّب التكرار والكلمات المرادفة غير الضرورية، واذكر مثالًا عمليًا (مثل أحذية) باختصار.
Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow easy movement and are practical for everyday activities. For example, I often wear sneakers and a simple T-shirt when I go out with friends.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Puntuación: 52.0Sugerencia: ابدأ بجملة واضحة تحدد متى تلبس التيشيرت ثم أضف سببًا محددًا واحدًا؛ تجنّب التكرار والوقوف على كلمات مثل 'uh'. استخدم ربطًا مثل 'for example' أو 'because' بوضوح.
Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. For example, I like to wear a T-shirt when I hang out with friends because it is comfortable and keeps me relaxed.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: استخدم هيكلًا واضحًا: اعطِ إجابة مباشرة (نعم/لا أو 'it depends') ثم اشرح حالات محددة مع أمثلة واضحة (العمل/حفل/خروج). قلل من التردُّد واذكر تفاصيل عن الاختيار (مثل الملابس الرسمية مقابل الكاجوال).
Ejemplo: It depends. I take more time choosing clothes for work or special events because I need to look professional, but I choose quickly for casual outings with friends.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Puntuación: 58.0Sugerencia: قدّم جملة موضوعية توضح الفرق ثم صف بوضوح ما ترتديه في كل حالة مع أمثلة محددة (formal clothes, traditional or casual). تجنّب العبارات المبعثرة واذكر سببًا واحدًا على الأقل للفرق (المتطلبات العملية/الراحة).
Ejemplo: Yes, I dress differently. On weekdays I wear formal clothes like shirts and trousers for work, while on weekends I prefer traditional or casual outfits because they are more comfortable and suit family gatherings.
What colour clothes do you like?
Puntuación: 56.0Sugerencia: اجب مباشرة عن الألوان المفضلة ثم اشرح السبب ببضع كلمات واضحة (بساطة، سهولة التنسيق، مظهر هادئ). تجنّب الكلمات غير الواضحة مثل 'work low degree' وقدم أمثلة عملية لكيفية استخدام هذه الألوان.
Ejemplo: I mostly like black and white because they are simple and easy to match with other clothes. Sometimes I also choose light pastel colors because they look calm and pleasing to the eye.
× I like UH-2 casual things in like a genius, uh, T-shirt.
✓ I like casual things like a jeans T-shirt.
The noun 'things' is vague and 'a genius' is incorrect; likely intended 'jeans' (singular/plural confusion). Use correct singular/plural noun and proper noun order. Suggestion: use 'casual clothes' or 'a jeans T-shirt'. Note: ensure noun forms match meaning.
× It's a simple things by colorful, uh, uh, clothes, uh, because it is very, umm, comfortable in the very chic and stylish one, Yeah.
✓ They are simple but colorful clothes because they are very comfortable and also quite chic and stylish.
Adjectives must agree in number with nouns (simple -> simple clothes). Use 'but' for contrast rather than 'by'. Use plural verbs 'they are' for plural 'clothes'. Place adverbs like 'very' before adjectives. Suggestion: match adjectives and verbs to noun number and use appropriate conjunctions.
× Yes, I prefer to wear a comfortable and scheduled clothes because it's very umm, umm, easy to umm, movement and a very simple tube shoes and a chance to, uh, get it in, uh, from anywhere.
✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they make movement easy, and simple shoes can be found almost anywhere.
Subject-verb agreement and noun forms: 'clothes' plural requires 'they' not 'it's'. 'Scheduled' is incorrect adjective; likely 'casual'. Remove redundant 'a' before plural nouns. Use base verb 'move' or 'make movement easy'. Suggestion: use plural pronouns and correct adjectives.
× But the smart clothes is very difficult to to choose and it's very important.
✓ But smart clothes are very difficult to choose, and they are very important.
Plural noun 'clothes' requires plural verb 'are' not 'is' and plural pronoun 'they'. Remove duplicate 'to'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns.
× It's dependent to situation, uh, for example, when I want to go with my friends to hang out, I like to get AT shirt or wear the T-shirt.
✓ It depends on the situation; for example, when I want to go out with my friends, I like to wear a T-shirt.
Use 'depend on' not 'dependent to'. 'Go out' not 'go with' for hanging out. Use 'wear a T-shirt' instead of 'get AT shirt'. Suggestion: learn common verb-preposition collocations like 'depend on' and 'go out'.
× It's very comfortable and very, uh, calm for me.
✓ It's very comfortable and makes me feel calm.
Adjective 'calm' describes a person, not the shirt; use phrase 'makes me feel calm'. Use verbs to link subject and sensation. Suggestion: convert adjective to appropriate clause.
× I think it's the bound to the situation because I I feel sometime uh, faced umm, difficulty to choose, especially when I want to go to work or to go to the uh, special celebrate.
✓ I think it depends on the situation because sometimes I find it difficult to choose, especially when I need to go to work or to a special celebration.
Awkward structure 'the bound to the situation' incorrect; use 'depends on the situation'. Use 'sometimes I find it difficult' for clarity. 'Special celebrate' should be 'special celebration'. Suggestion: simplify clauses and use correct noun forms.
× But when I want to go the hangout with my friend is very simple to you choose any uh clothes yeah.
✓ But when I want to go hang out with my friends, it is very simple to choose any clothes.
Word order and extra pronouns incorrect ('to you choose'). Use 'go hang out' or 'go out' and plural 'friends' if applicable. Suggestion: simplify sentence to subject + verb + object structure.
× Yeah, it's very different from the weekday and weekend because in weekday it's all as a as a, as a work in our company.
✓ Yes, weekdays and weekends are very different because on weekdays I work at the company.
Pronoun 'it' and phrase 'in weekday' incorrect; use plural 'weekdays' and preposition 'on'. Remove redundant filler. Suggestion: use correct time prepositions 'on weekdays' and clear subject.
× So I choose some formal clothes.
✓ So I choose formal clothes.
No article needed before 'formal clothes'; plural noun stands alone. Suggestion: omit unnecessary articles with plural uncountable clothing.
× But in weekend, I like you wearing the traditional clothes in related to the harmonic clothes, yes.
✓ But on weekends, I like wearing traditional clothes that reflect my culture.
Use 'on weekends' not 'in weekend'. 'I like you wearing' is incorrect; should be 'I like wearing'. 'Related to the harmonic clothes' unclear; replaced with clearer phrase 'reflect my culture'. Suggestion: use clear adjectives and correct verbs.
× I really like 2 colors. It's black and white and I think it's very simple to, to find it.
✓ I really like two colors: black and white, and I think they are very easy to match.
Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to two colors. 'It's' incorrect for plural. 'Find it' unclear; 'match' or 'coordinate' better. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun referent.
× Uh, but sometime I, I work low, uh, degree or uh, color and because it's very, umm, calm to, to content my eye.
✓ But sometimes I wear low-saturation colors because they are calming to my eyes.
Phrase 'work low degree or color' unclear; 'low-saturation colors' conveys intended meaning. Use plural agreement 'they are'. 'Content my eye' should be 'calming to my eyes'. Suggestion: use standard collocations like 'calming to the eyes' and correct plural forms.