Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 전반적으로 이해되지만 문법 오류와 중복 표현이 많습니다. 주제문으로 직접 답하고(예: "I prefer..."), 과거와 현재를 비교할 때 간결한 문장으로 나누세요. 불필요한 말(MMM, such as other things)을 줄이고 구체적인 예시(예: A-line skirts, floral tops)를 하나 추가하면 더 자연스럽습니다. 연결어(“when I was in middle school,” “now”)를 적절히 사용해 일관된 흐름을 만드세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer wearing feminine clothes now. When I was in middle school, I often wore jeans and T-shirts because they were practical for sports, but now I like skirts such as A-line skirts and simple blouses for a more polished look.

Sugerencia: 답변이 의도는 전달되지만 문장 구조와 시제 사용이 혼란스럽습니다. 주제문으로 'I prefer...'로 시작하고 현재 선호를 명확히 밝히세요. 중복된 단어(‘and and’)를 피하고, 이유를 하나 제시하면 설득력이 커집니다(예: it makes me feel confident).

Ejemplo: I prefer stylish clothes at the moment because they make me feel more confident. Although I used to choose casual, comfortable outfits, I now often wear skirts and blouses for a smarter appearance.

Sugerencia: 좋은 구성이지만 채우기 소리(uh)와 중복('but' 반복, 'or or')를 줄이세요. 상황에 따른 선호를 제시한 점은 좋습니다. 연결어를 사용해 이유를 더 명확히 하고 문법(‘I would rather wear T-shirts’)을 수정하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do, but I usually prefer blouses when I go out because they make me feel more confident. However, I wear T-shirts at home or when I quickly go to the supermarket because they are much more comfortable.

Sugerencia: 주제에 대해 직접 답한 것은 좋지만 문법과 어휘 선택 오류가 많습니다('their office', 'shooting clothes'). 이유를 구체적으로 정리해 말하세요(예: many options, matching colors). 한두 문장으로 간결하게 표현하고 연결어('because', 'so')를 적절히 사용하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I often take a long time because I have many clothes and find it hard to choose items that match each other. As a result, I usually try several combinations before I leave.

Sugerencia: 대체로 명확하고 적절한 답변입니다. 다만 문법(‘I would rather wear’)과 전치사 표현(‘during the week’ 또는 ‘on weekdays’)을 고치면 더 자연스럽습니다. 추가로 주말에 입는 스타일을 구체적으로 하나 언급하세요.

Ejemplo: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform, but on weekends I prefer stylish outfits, like a skirt and a nice blouse, when I hang out with friends.

Sugerencia: 의견은 분명하지만 말의 반복('black black', 'is the is the')과 문법 오류가 많습니다. 간단한 주제문('I prefer black')으로 시작하고 이유를 하나만 명확히 설명하세요(예: flattering, easy to match). 친구 의견 언급은 한 문장으로 깔끔하게 정리하세요.

Ejemplo: I prefer black because it flatters my skin tone and is easy to match with other items. My friends also say black suits me, so I often choose it.

× MMM, it's a quite interesting question compared when I was in middle school.

✓ MMM, it's quite an interesting question compared to when I was in middle school.

The phrase 'compared when' is incorrect; use 'compared to' for comparisons. Also 'a quite interesting' is awkward; use 'quite an interesting'. Suggestion: use 'compared to' and 'quite an' before a vowel sound noun phrase.

× I used to like wearing some jeans or other T-shirts that it is convenient for doing sports, but now I'm a high school student, I would rather wear some beautiful clothes such as skirts or other things.

✓ I used to like wearing jeans or T-shirts that were convenient for doing sports, but now I'm a high school student and I would rather wear more beautiful clothes such as skirts.

Mixes past and present without correct tense forms. 'Used to' requires past form 'were' for 'convenient'. Remove redundant 'some' and 'other' and the unnecessary 'it is'. Use 'would rather' with base verb 'wear'. Suggestion: keep past context consistent and simplify nouns.

× Actually, I used to prefer wearing casual and the clothes that are comfortable and and nowadays I love to wear stylish clothes such as skirts or other blouse that makes me more beautiful.

✓ Actually, I used to prefer wearing casual, comfortable clothes, and nowadays I love to wear stylish clothes such as skirts or blouses that make me look more beautiful.

Inconsistent plurality and verb agreement: 'blouse that makes' should be plural 'blouses that make' to match. 'Casual and the clothes that are comfortable' is wordy; combine as 'casual, comfortable clothes'. Also remove duplicated 'and'. Suggestion: ensure noun and verb number agreement and concise phrasing.

× Uh yes I do, but I prefer wearing other stylish clothes such as blouses that make me more confident when I'm hanging out with my friends.

✓ Uh yes I do, but I prefer wearing other stylish clothes such as blouses that make me feel more confident when I'm hanging out with my friends.

Missing word 'feel' after 'make me' to complete the expression 'make me feel confident'. Suggestion: include a complement after 'make me' (feel, look, etc.).

× But when I just stay at home or or going to supermarket and nearby my home, I would rather wearing T-shirts because it is comfortable.

✓ But when I just stay at home or go to the supermarket near my home, I would rather wear T-shirts because they are comfortable.

After 'would rather' use the base verb 'wear' (not 'wearing'). 'Going to supermarket' needs 'go to the supermarket'. Pronoun agreement: 'it is comfortable' should be 'they are comfortable' for plural 'T-shirts'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms and plural agreement.

× To be honest, yes. And I think it is the most common problem that happens with girls because actually we have so many clothes, but we think their office that match with the color, but we hardly can match the perfect outfits.

✓ To be honest, yes. I think it is a very common problem for girls because we have so many clothes, but we don't know which office outfit matches the color, and we can hardly match the perfect outfits.

Sentence is confusing and has wrong words: 'their office that match' unclear; likely 'which outfit matches the color'. 'Hardly can match' is unnatural; use 'can hardly match'. Maintain tense and clarity. Suggestion: replace incorrect phrases with clear alternatives and correct adverb order.

× So we spend a lot of time shooting clothes.

✓ So we spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Wrong verb 'shooting' used instead of 'choosing'. Use 'choosing clothes' to express selecting outfits. Suggestion: choose verbs that fit context.

× Actually, I usually wear school uniforms when I go into school in the week time and in the weekend I would rather wearing some stylish outfits and hanging out with my friends.

✓ Actually, I usually wear school uniforms when I go to school during the week, and on weekends I would rather wear stylish outfits and hang out with my friends.

Use 'go to school' not 'go into school'. 'In the week time' should be 'during the week' and 'in the weekend' -> 'on weekends'. After 'would rather' use base form 'wear' and parallel verb 'hang out' (not 'hanging out'). Suggestion: maintain correct prepositions and parallel verb forms.

× I prefer by wearing black black clothes because I think the color that most fits with my skin color is black and also my friends told us that black is the is the best color that match for me and I also I personally like black.

✓ I prefer wearing black clothes because I think the color that suits my skin best is black, and my friends told me that black is the best color for me. I personally like black too.

Remove redundant 'by' after 'prefer'. Avoid duplicate words 'black black' and 'is the is the'. Pronoun 'told us' should be 'told me'. 'Match for me' should be 'for me' or 'suits me'. 'Most fits with my skin color' -> 'suits my skin best'. Suggestion: simplify and correct pronouns and collocations.