Part 1
Examinador
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Candidato
My favorite uh, cloth I like is a dessert because it's make me comfortable and feel umm, feel not uncomfortable, umm, more. I use the way it is to go to hang out with my friends and family.
Examinador
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Candidato
I prefer when MMM cost low because this glue make me feel comfortable and I can uh based with other uh clothes. This is easy for me than smart clothes.
Examinador
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Candidato
Yes I do because the T-shirt is uh in the my country is cheaper and make me feel comfortable. They also can easy to make with their other item like uh chains and when I have to wear a smart clothes.
Examinador
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Candidato
Oh, you talk about the time I tossing my clothes too much because when to talk to hang out with my friend, I choose the the clothes that umm, comfortable and beautiful for me this day.
Examinador
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Candidato
Oh not really because the start of the week, day and weekly is off to send. Uh. I told the 3rd order T-shirt on the Wednesday to go to school on the weekend. I go. I wear a dress to make comfortable.
Examinador
What colour clothes do you like?
Candidato
So I like a blue because it's a lot. It's a color of the ocean and the umm and and the sky. So it's make me I feel, I relax when I wear it and it's already easy to mix with the other item.
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và chính xác từ vựng (ví dụ: "dress" chứ không phải "dessert"). Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó nối thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể về lý do và hoàn cảnh sử dụng. Tránh tiếng ồ, à và lặp từ. Ví dụ cụ thể cần nêu chất liệu, phong cách hoặc khi nào mặc.
Ejemplo: I prefer wearing dresses because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I often choose a cotton dress when I hang out with friends or visit family because it is breathable and looks neat.
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Trả lời trực tiếp là "comfortable and casual clothes" hoặc "smart clothes" rồi giải thích cụ thể lý do. Tránh lỗi phát âm/nhầm từ như "cost low" hay "glue"; dùng từ như "cheaper", "comfortable" và nêu ví dụ so sánh. Dùng liên từ (because, so, therefore) để mạch lạc.
Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they are usually cheaper and more practical. For example, I often wear jeans and a T-shirt because they match many items and are easier to move in than smart outfits.
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
Puntuación: 50.0Sugerencia: Cần cấu trúc rõ: trả lời Yes/No + lý do chính + ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn và dùng collocation đúng ("pair with other items", "smart clothes"). Thêm chi tiết về khi nào bạn mặc T-shirt (ví dụ: đi học, gặp bạn bè) để tăng tính cụ thể.
Ejemplo: Yes, I do. T-shirts are affordable and comfortable in my country, so I wear them a lot. For instance, I usually pair a plain T-shirt with jeans or a jacket when I go out with friends.
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Trả lời nên rõ ràng về tần suất và thời gian bạn dành ra (e.g. "Not much"/"Sometimes I spend..."), sau đó nêu lý do và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh câu dài lộn xộn, dùng linking words như "because", "so" để mạch lạc.
Ejemplo: Not really, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. Usually I pick something comfortable and pretty quickly because I want to be ready in time when I go out with friends.
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích rõ ràng. Tránh câu lắp và số liệu không rõ ràng. Nên nói cụ thể ví dụ: thứ mấy mặc gì, tại sao khác hoặc giống nhau. Dùng linking words để nối ý.
Ejemplo: No, I don't wear very different styles. On weekdays I usually wear T-shirts and jeans to school, while on weekends I might choose a dress or nicer clothes for going out.
What colour clothes do you like?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: Trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác: nêu màu và giải thích bằng lý do cụ thể. Tránh điệp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng. Có thể thêm ví dụ về món đồ màu xanh bạn thường mặc và cách phối đồ.
Ejemplo: I like blue because it reminds me of the ocean and the sky, and it makes me feel relaxed. For example, I often wear a blue shirt because it matches well with jeans and other accessories.
× My favorite uh, cloth I like is a dessert because it's make me comfortable and feel umm, feel not uncomfortable, umm, more.
✓ My favorite clothing is a dress because it makes me comfortable and not uncomfortable.
Error: Using 'cloth' (singular count noun) instead of uncountable 'clothing' or the countable 'dress'. Also 'it's make' has subject-verb agreement error; should be 'it makes'. Suggestion: Use 'a dress' for a single item or 'clothing' for general; ensure verb agrees with singular subject (adds 's').
× I use the way it is to go to hang out with my friends and family.
✓ I wear it when I go out to hang out with my friends and family.
Error: 'I use the way it is' is ungrammatical and unclear. The verb 'use' with 'the way' causes sentence structure error. Suggestion: Use 'I wear it when I go out' which correctly matches subject and verb and fits the context.
× I prefer when MMM cost low because this glue make me feel comfortable and I can uh based with other uh clothes.
✓ I prefer clothes that are low cost because they make me feel comfortable and I can match them with other clothes.
Error: Missing articles and incorrect singular/plural forms: 'MMM cost low' should be 'low cost' and 'this glue' is incorrect; also subject-verb agreement: 'they make'. Suggestion: Use plural 'clothes' and relative clause 'that are low cost'; use 'match them with' instead of 'based with'.
× This is easy for me than smart clothes.
✓ These are easier for me than smart clothes.
Error: 'This' refers to plural idea 'casual clothes' but uses singular; degree comparison needs comparative adjective 'easier'. Suggestion: Use plural demonstrative 'these' and comparative form 'easier'.
× Yes I do because the T-shirt is uh in the my country is cheaper and make me feel comfortable.
✓ Yes, I do because T-shirts in my country are cheaper and make me feel comfortable.
Error: Incorrect use of definite article 'the my country' and singular 'T-shirt' when speaking generally. Also subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts... are'. Suggestion: Use plural noun for general statements and 'in my country' without 'the'.
× They also can easy to make with their other item like uh chains and when I have to wear a smart clothes.
✓ They are also easy to match with other items like chains when I have to wear smart clothes.
Error: Incorrect pronoun and verb forms: 'can easy to make with their other item' is ungrammatical. 'A smart clothes' mixes article with plural. Suggestion: Use 'are easy to match with other items' and 'smart clothes' without 'a'.
× Oh, you talk about the time I tossing my clothes too much because when to talk to hang out with my friend, I choose the the clothes that umm, comfortable and beautiful for me this day.
✓ Oh, if you mean the time I spend choosing clothes, I spend too much time because when I go out to hang out with my friends, I choose clothes that are comfortable and beautiful for me these days.
Error: Incorrect verb forms: 'tossing' should be 'spend choosing' and tense mismatch. 'when to talk to hang out' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions ('I spend'), 'go out to hang out with my friends', and plural/time phrase 'these days'.
× Oh not really because the start of the week, day and weekly is off to send. Uh. I told the 3rd order T-shirt on the Wednesday to go to school on the weekend.
✓ Oh, not really. The start of the week and the weekend are different. I usually wear T-shirts during the week and wear a dress on weekends to be comfortable.
Error: Sentence is largely incoherent with wrong word order and incorrect nouns ('weekly is off to send', '3rd order T-shirt'). Suggestion: Rephrase to clear contrasting idea between weekdays and weekends and use habitual verbs 'usually wear'.
× I go. I wear a dress to make comfortable.
✓ I wear a dress to be comfortable.
Error: Extra fragment 'I go.' and incorrect infinitive 'to make comfortable'. Suggestion: Use 'to be comfortable' to express purpose and avoid fragments.
× So I like a blue because it's a lot. It's a color of the ocean and the umm and and the sky.
✓ So I like blue because it is the color of the ocean and the sky.
Error: 'a blue' incorrectly uses article with uncountable/color noun; 'it's a lot' is unclear. Suggestion: Use 'blue' without article and a clear description 'the color of the ocean and the sky'.
× So it's make me I feel, I relax when I wear it and it's already easy to mix with the other item.
✓ It makes me feel relaxed when I wear it and it is easy to mix with other items.
Error: Incorrect verb form 'it's make', awkward phrase 'I feel, I relax', and singular 'item'. Suggestion: Use 'makes me feel relaxed' and 'mix with other items' for natural phrasing.