Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, correct grammar, and directly contrast everyday clothing with special-occasion clothes. Use one clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and avoid repetition. Fix tenses and vocabulary (e.g., "party wear" not "party wears").

Ejemplo: I usually wear jeans and casual clothes because they let me move freely and are more comfortable. For special occasions I choose more formal outfits, but for daily activities I prefer practical, easy-to-wear items.

Sugerencia: Organize the answer: start with a clear preference, then give specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and correct sentence structure. Mention climate as a reason succinctly.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are usually more breathable and suit our warm climate. For example, lightweight cotton shirts help me stay cool and travel easily during the long summer season.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise reasons. Remove hesitations and awkward phrases; use correct terms (e.g., "crew-neck" instead of "round knuckle"). Be specific about features you like.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts, especially crew-neck styles, because they are comfortable and allow easy movement. Also, their fit is modest, so I feel confident when bending or reaching.

Sugerencia: State the answer clearly and explain the reason with specific details and an example. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (e.g., "I don't get much variety"). Mention what you do to solve the problem (online shopping, tailoring).

Ejemplo: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because there is limited variety for plus sizes in my area. Therefore I often shop online or visit several stores to find items that fit well and suit my style.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer, then contrast weekdays and weekends using linking words (e.g., "however," "while"). Be concise and avoid fillers. Clarify what you mean by "formal" (uniform for class).

Ejemplo: Not really, but sometimes I change styles: while I usually wear my school uniform on weekdays, I tend to dress more casually when I go out with friends at the weekend.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly, give specific reasons for your preference and avoid vague statements. Correct grammar and remove rhetorical questions that confuse the point. Explain how white affects your appearance with one or two concise reasons.

Ejemplo: I prefer white tops with blue jeans because white looks fresh and makes my face appear brighter. For example, wearing a white shirt often gives a cleaner, more positive first impression.

× I prefer to wear jeans and casual kind of wears so it can make me move freely and it's more comfortable for me.

✓ I prefer to wear jeans and casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and are more comfortable for me.

The original uses 'kind of wears' which mixes singular 'kind' with plural 'wears' (nonstandard). 'Wears' is not correct for clothing; use 'clothes' (plural). Also 'it can make me move freely' mismatches subject; use plural 'they allow me' to agree with 'jeans and casual clothes'. Use 'because' instead of 'so' for clarity.

× The party wears all those things are for special occasions so I normally want to.

✓ The clothes people wear to parties are for special occasions, so I normally do not choose them.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'The party wears all those things' misplaces subject and verb. Recast to 'The clothes people wear to parties' and clarify intention; 'I normally want to' is incomplete and needs an object or negation; likely meaning is 'I normally do not choose them'.

× Comfortable clothes are in sense of uh more breathable.

✓ Comfortable clothes are, in a sense, more breathable.

The phrase 'in sense of uh more breathable' is incorrect word order and missing articles; use the idiom 'in a sense' followed by the comparative 'more breathable' to describe comfortable clothes.

× The materials should be breathable in some.

✓ The materials should be breathable in some climates.

'in some' is incomplete; it needs a noun like 'climates' or 'situations'. Adding 'climates' makes the meaning clear: breathable materials are important in some climates.

× I live in India so it most of the time we just have one season.

✓ I live in India, so most of the time we have one season.

Original contains extraneous 'it' and awkward word order 'it most of the time we just have'. Remove 'it' and 'just' for clarity and use present simple 'we have' to state a general fact.

× It's summer so more breathable clothes are more preferable and easy for us to travel.

✓ It's summer, so more breathable clothes are preferable and make it easier for us to travel.

'More preferable' is redundant; 'preferable' suffices. Also 'easy for us to travel' lacks a subject-action link; use 'make it easier for us to travel'.

× They are, I prefer like round knuckle T-shirts, which uh, makes me uh, more comfortable while moving.

✓ I prefer round-neck T-shirts, which make me more comfortable when moving.

'They are, I prefer like' is redundant. Use 'I prefer' then 'round-neck' (correct term) and 'which make' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. Use 'when moving' rather than 'while moving' for concision.

× Uh, even if I'm taking something from down, uh, it won't show anything vulgar and it is more comfortable and I think it's good.

✓ Even if I'm picking something up from down low, it won't show anything inappropriate and it's more comfortable, so I think it's good.

Replace 'taking something from down' with 'picking something up from down low' for natural phrasing. 'Vulgar' is better replaced with 'inappropriate' in this context. Combine clauses for smoother flow.

× I do spend a lot of time for choosing my clothes as I'm a plus size person.

✓ I do spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I'm a plus-size person.

Remove unnecessary 'for' after 'time' ('spend time choosing' is correct). Use 'because' instead of 'as' for clarity and hyphenate 'plus-size' as a compound adjective.

× I want my I doesn't get much of a variety of dresses in my area.

✓ I want more variety, but I don't get many dress options in my area.

Original mixes pronouns and verbs incorrectly ('I want my I doesn't get'). Rephrase to express desire for more variety and lack of options using correct subject-verb forms.

× So I choose and pick and pick. Little bit of picking and I go and choose.

✓ So I choose carefully and pick a bit, then I decide and go buy what I selected.

Original repetitions are awkward and ungrammatical. Provide a clear sequence using verbs with appropriate adverbs: 'choose carefully', 'pick a bit', 'decide', 'go buy'.

× Not necessarily, but sometimes, uh, during weekends we go out where with my, uh, with my friends and also we, I wear more casuals and during weekdays when I'm having classes, I wear formal dresses like uniforms, which is appropriate for the occasion.

✓ Not necessarily, but sometimes during weekends when I go out with my friends, I wear more casual clothes; during weekdays when I have classes, I wear formal clothes like uniforms, which are appropriate for the occasion.

Remove filler words and correct pronoun/verb agreement: 'we go out where with my' is incorrect; use 'I go out with my friends'. 'Casuals' is informal—use 'casual clothes'. 'Uniforms' is plural so use 'are appropriate'.

× I honestly like white color dress with jeans, blue jeans.

✓ I honestly like a white dress with blue jeans.

'White color dress' is redundant; use 'white dress'. Specify article 'a' and place adjective before noun. Combine 'blue jeans' succinctly.

× So according to color theory, why can make a good impression on the first impression?

✓ According to color theory, white can make a good first impression.

Original is ungrammatical and repeats 'impression'. 'Why can make' is incorrect; correct subject 'white' and clear clause 'can make a good first impression'.

× So I prefer white more and my face somehow lift while wearing white so.

✓ So I prefer white because it somehow brightens my face when I wear it.

Original repeats 'so' and has wrong verb forms: 'my face somehow lift' should be 'it brightens my face' or 'my face looks brighter'. Use 'when I wear it' to refer back to the color.