Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and fix repetition and small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating the same words (e.g. “sweat/sweats”) and complete unfinished phrases.

Ejemplo: I like wearing cotton clothes because they are breathable and comfortable. For example, cotton absorbs moisture well, so I don’t feel sticky when I exercise, and it shows less sweat than synthetic fabrics. Therefore I usually choose cotton, especially in hot weather.

Sugerencia: Good structure and clear contrast. Improve accuracy by correcting small grammar mistakes (subject-verb agreement) and tighten language. Use a linking phrase for contrast and one brief specific example of smart clothing.

Ejemplo: I usually wear comfortable, casual clothes because they help me relax. However, for formal events like job interviews or competitions, I wear smart clothes such as a shirt and blazer to create a professional impression.

Sugerencia: Make the answer shorter and correct word order and extra words. Give a clear topic sentence then one specific reason and an example. Remove redundant phrases like “only” and fix pronoun errors.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable for long walks. For instance, when I travel with family I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans so I can move easily and stay comfortable all day.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct short answer, then give one clear reason. Remove hesitations and repetition, and correct grammar (e.g. “I’m not” → “No, I don’t”). Use one linking word and a short example if needed.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I value comfort over style. For example, I usually pick whatever is clean and comfortable from my closet and don’t worry about matching every day.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence stating the difference, then provide one or two specific examples. Fix word order and repetition, and use linking words like “usually” and “however” for contrast.

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually dress differently. On weekdays I often wear casual home clothes unless I have meetings or events when I need something smart, while on weekends I tend to wear relaxed outfits for leisure activities.

Sugerencia: Keep the answer concise and correct grammar and awkward phrases. Start with a clear statement, then give one reason and a brief example. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like “do beer for a day.”

Ejemplo: I don’t have a strong preference for colour; comfort matters more to me. For example, I’ll wear whatever colour is clean and comfortable from my closet, whether it’s dark or light.

× I prefer clothes made of cotton because it absorbs sweats well and sweat.

✓ I prefer clothes made of cotton because it absorbs sweat well.

The noun 'sweat' is uncountable, so use singular 'sweat' not 'sweats'. Also the verb 'absorbs' correctly refers to cotton (third person singular). Remove the repeated word 'sweat' to avoid redundancy.

× Cotton also feels comfortable on my skin, so I usually choose garment made of.

✓ Cotton also feels comfortable on my skin, so I usually choose garments made of it.

The phrase 'garment made of' is incomplete; it needs an object ('it' referring to cotton) and 'garment' should be plural or match context. Use 'garments made of it' or 'garments made of cotton' for a complete sentence.

× I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes most of the time because they makes me feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable casual clothes most of the time because they make me feel relaxed.

Subject 'they' is plural, so the verb must be base form 'make' (no -s). Change 'makes' to 'make' for correct subject-verb agreement.

× I do, in fact most of the time I prefer to wear T-shirts and jeans only and if I have any plans with my family or friends like long travel, I would prefer to wear T-shirts and jeans where we I can walk for a long time and it will not make me uncomfortable.

✓ I do. In fact, most of the time I prefer to wear only T-shirts and jeans, and if I have plans with family or friends, such as a long trip, I would also wear T-shirts and jeans because I can walk for a long time and they will not make me uncomfortable.

The original is a run-on with unclear phrasing ('where we I can walk'). Break into sentences and reorder for clarity. Use 'only' before the items, 'plans with family or friends' without 'my' repeated, 'long trip' instead of 'long travel', and 'they will' to refer to clothes.

× No, I'm not, because I'm not the per some kind of person there spend lots of time to choosing a clothes because garment is about what, uh, garment is about making our body feel comfortable and relaxed.

✓ No, I don't, because I'm not the kind of person who spends a lot of time choosing clothes; for me, clothing is about making the body feel comfortable and relaxed.

Multiple issues: 'I'm not' is inappropriate answer to 'Do you spend a lot of time' — use 'I don't'. 'per some kind of person there' is ungrammatical; use 'the kind of person who'. Use 'spends' for third person singular ('who spends'). Use 'a lot of time' not 'lots of time to choosing a clothes'. 'Choosing clothes' without article is correct. Rephrase to clarify.

× Spending too much time on choosing clothes. It's unnecess, unnecessary for me.

✓ Spending too much time choosing clothes is unnecessary for me.

The original fragments created sentence fragments and a misspelling 'unnecess'. Combine into one complete sentence and use 'choosing clothes' (no 'on') and the correct adjective 'unnecessary'.

× Yes I do and it's well very depends on my schedule because on mostly on the week weekdays I do have some plans.

✓ Yes, I do, and it very much depends on my schedule because on weekdays I usually have some plans.

Remove redundant words 'well' and 'mostly on the week'. Use 'very much depends' or 'depends a lot on'. 'On weekdays' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I might have plans with my friends or family where I have to go with the go with some formal attire.

✓ I might have plans with my friends or family where I need to wear formal attire.

Phrase 'go with the go with' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use 'need to wear formal attire' to express necessity and simplify structure.

× In week days I usually prefer to do some home attire only.

✓ On weekdays I usually prefer to wear casual/home clothes only.

Use 'on weekdays' (preposition + plural noun) and 'prefer to wear' rather than 'prefer to do'. 'Home attire' is unnatural; use 'casual clothes' or 'home clothes'.

× To be honest, I don't mind any colour because all I can focus is about the clothes that makes my body comfortable and relaxed so I don't give so much time or thoughts about choosing what colour I want to do beer for a day.

✓ To be honest, I don't mind any colour because all I focus on is clothes that make my body comfortable and relaxed, so I don't spend much time deciding which colour to wear for a day.

Several problems: use 'all I focus on' instead of 'all I can focus is about', 'clothes that make' (plural subject 'clothes' requires 'make'), and 'spend much time deciding which colour to wear' is natural. 'do beer' is incorrect — likely 'be better' or 'wear' so corrected to 'to wear'.

× Instead of that I just go with whatever that has in my closet.

✓ Instead, I just wear whatever I have in my closet.

Use 'instead' not 'instead of that'. 'Go with' is informal but acceptable; 'wear' is clearer. 'Whatever that has in my closet' wrongly uses 'that' and passive structure; use 'whatever I have in my closet'.