Clothing— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitation, correct small grammar issues (e.g., “it suits me” not “suits me too much”, “clothes” not “cloth”) and give one specific reason plus a short example. Use a linking word like “because” to connect ideas. Practice short, fluent sentences (max 4–5).

Ejemplo: I usually wear athletic clothes because they are comfortable and practical for my daily exercise. For example, I often choose a breathable T-shirt and joggers when I go running because they dry quickly and let me move freely.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer comfortable clothes.”), avoid repetition (“comfortable” used too often), fix grammar (use “they suit me” not “suit me too much”), and add a concise supporting example using a linking word such as “because” or “so”.

Ejemplo: I prefer comfortable clothes because they let me move freely. For instance, I wear a loose T-shirt and shorts when I exercise in the park because they are lightweight and breathable.

Sugerencia: Give a brief direct answer, avoid filler words and contractions like “wanna” in formal test, and provide one specific detail (colour, style) with a linking word such as “for example”. Keep to 2–4 sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and comfortable. For example, I have many colorful T-shirts that match my jeans, and I usually pick one quickly when I go out because they make me feel relaxed.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, avoid filler phrases (“you know”), correct grammar (e.g., “my sister’s advice”), and give a clear reason plus one example. Limit to a couple of coherent sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes because I care about my appearance. For example, before going out I usually ask my sister’s advice to make sure my outfit looks good.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear contrast sentence using linking words like “but” or “however.” Fix grammar and reduce repetition. Complete thoughts — avoid trailing off. Give one specific example of weekday vs weekend outfit.

Ejemplo: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal clothes for work, such as a shirt and trousers, because I need to look professional. But on weekends I wear casual clothes like a T-shirt and trainers when I go to the gym or meet friends.

Sugerencia: State your preference briefly, avoid repetition and fillers, and give a clear reason plus a specific example. Use linking words like “because” and limit to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite colour is blue because it makes me feel calm and confident. For example, many of my T-shirts and jeans are blue, and I often choose blue outfits when I want to feel comfortable and stylish.

× I usually prefer to wear athletic clothes because, umm, it's uh, suits me too much and I feel extremely comfortable with this kind of cloth and, uh, because I do exercise, umm, every day, umm, almost.

✓ I usually prefer to wear athletic clothes because they suit me very well and I feel extremely comfortable in this kind of clothing, and I exercise almost every day.

The student used 'it's suits' which mixes a contraction with a verb incorrectly and uses singular forms 'this kind of cloth' instead of plural/uncountable 'clothing'. Use third person plural agreement 'they suit' for 'clothes' and 'in clothing' for correct preposition and noun form. Also change 'too much' to 'very well' for naturalness and move 'exercise almost every day' to a clearer position. Suggestions: use subject-verb agreement for third person (they suit), use uncountable noun 'clothing' or plural 'clothes', and correct preposition 'comfortable in'.

× Of course, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I really feel comfortable in it and and also they suit me too much and you know, when I go to the gym or run in the park, it's very comfortable for me to wear.

✓ Of course, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I really feel comfortable in them and they suit me very well; when I go to the gym or run in the park, they are very comfortable.

The singular pronoun 'it' was used to refer to plural 'clothes'; use 'them'. 'They suit me too much' is unnatural — use 'very well'. Also avoid 'it's very comfortable for me to wear' and use 'they are very comfortable' to match plural subject. Suggestions: keep pronoun number consistent with its antecedent and choose natural adverbs ('very well' not 'too much').

× Sure, I love to wear T-shirts and I have a lot of T-shirts with a lot of variety of colors and, uh, whenever I wanna, umm, go outdoors, I, I choose one of them easily and then it's, it's suits with my jeans and I feel relaxed, uh, when I, umm, wear it.

✓ Sure, I love wearing T-shirts and I have many T-shirts in a wide variety of colors, and whenever I want to go outdoors, I can easily choose one, and it suits my jeans and I feel relaxed when I wear it.

Use the gerund 'wearing' for likes ('love wearing'), replace 'a lot of T-shirts with a lot of variety of colors' with 'many T-shirts in a wide variety of colors' for correct adjective/adverb use. 'It's suits' is wrong: remove contraction and use 'it suits'. Maintain pronoun consistency 'it' for 'one'. Suggestions: use concise adjective phrases and correct verb forms ('suits' with singular 'it').

× Absolutely. You know, when I want to go outdoors, umm, it takes me a lot of time to choose the best, uh, clothes. And sometimes I use my sisters advice to umm, wear the best clothes and umm, and I know you know, it's too important for me to be the best.

✓ Absolutely. When I want to go outdoors, it takes me a long time to choose the best clothes. Sometimes I use my sister's advice to help me choose, and I know it is very important for me to look my best.

Use the possessive form 'sister's advice' not 'sisters advice'. 'It takes me a lot of time' is acceptable but 'a long time' is more natural. 'To umm, wear the best clothes' changed to 'help me choose' for clarity. 'It's too important' implies excessive importance; use 'very important' or 'important' to express degree. Suggestions: use possessive apostrophe, avoid redundant fillers, and choose appropriate adverbs ('very' not 'too').

× Yes, of course. And on weekdays I usually wear formal clothes because I go to my work and I should be so stylish and smart. But on weekends I go to the gym and I go outdoors and I'm I hang out with my friends and I.

✓ Yes, of course. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes because I go to work and need to be professional and smart. On weekends I go to the gym, go outdoors, and hang out with my friends.

Remove unnecessary 'And' at sentence start and correct 'go to my work' to 'go to work'. 'I should be so stylish and smart' is informal; use 'need to be professional and smart'. The final clause was fragmented and repeated 'I' — combine actions with parallel verbs. Suggestions: use concise coordinated verbs and avoid fragments and repetition.

× Blue is my favorite color and I prefer to have umm, blue clothes and umm, for example, my, all of my T-shirts and jeans are blue and I uh, feel calm and umm, very stylish when I and put on umm blue clothes and it suits me well and.

✓ Blue is my favorite color and I prefer to wear blue clothes; for example, almost all of my T-shirts and jeans are blue, and I feel calm and very stylish when I put on blue clothes because they suit me well.

Use 'wear' instead of 'have' for clothing preference. 'My, all of my' is redundant; 'almost all of my' or 'all of my' is better. Remove extra 'and' and fillers. Use plural 'they suit me well' to agree with 'clothes'. Suggestions: use correct verbs for clothing (wear), avoid redundancy, and ensure pronoun agreement.