Teachers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "She is the best motivator for me" and "She always helps her students and cares about their education"). Use a linking phrase to connect ideas such as "For example" or "In particular."

Ejemplo: Yes. My favorite teacher is Irumba Dwell Azad. She is the best motivator for me because she always helps her students and cares about their education. For example, she organizes extra study sessions and gives personal feedback on our essays.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then explain clearly and concisely. Fix grammar ("Yes, I do"; "I am studying for a PhD to become a university professor"). Use a linking word like "because" to show reason and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I am studying for a PhD to become a university professor because I want to inspire students like my teacher did. In particular, I want to provide the same encouragement and support she gave me.

Sugerencia: Be specific and concise. Say who the teacher was and give one clear detail about them. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use a linking phrase such as "I remember" and then a reason or example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I remember my Russian language teacher from school because she was very kind and patient. For example, she would spend extra time explaining grammar until everyone understood.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a concise reason without hesitation. Use a linking word like "because" and a clear temporal phrase. Correct small grammar: "I moved to another city" and "we have lost contact."

Ejemplo: No, I'm not. After school I moved to another city, so we have lost contact and I haven't kept in touch with my primary school teachers.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence and one or two specific examples of help. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing ("When I was doing my master’s, she offered to work with me and mentored me"). Use a linking word like "for example" to introduce specifics.

Ejemplo: She helped me a lot when I was doing my master’s: she invited me to work with her on research and mentored me. For example, she taught me research methods and reviewed my thesis drafts.

Sugerencia: Provide a clearer reason and finish the thought. Use a linking word such as "because" and explain how stability affected your relationship (e.g., "I stayed in one school, so I built a closer relationship"). Avoid trailing off and keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I preferred my primary school teachers because I studied in one city and stayed at the same school, so I built close relationships with them. In contrast, I changed schools frequently later, which made it harder to form such bonds.

× Yes I do. My favorite teacher is Irumba Dwell Azad.

✓ Yes, I do. My favorite teacher is Irumba Dwell Azad.

Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken punctuation; no pronoun error here but maintain name as subject. (This sentence is acceptable; ensure proper punctuation.)

× She's uh, best motivator now for me.

✓ She is the best motivator for me right now.

Use the definite article 'the' with superlative 'best' and place time adverb 'right now' at the end for natural word order. Also avoid filler 'uh' in written form.

× She always helping for her for her students and caring about their good education.

✓ She is always helping her students and caring about their education.

Use the progressive form 'is helping' with subject 'She' and remove redundant 'for her' and redundant 'good'. 'Care about their education' is more natural.

× You say you do.

✓ Yes, I do.

Examiner asked 'Do you want to be a teacher...?' The student's reply should be affirming 'Yes, I do.' 'You say you do' is incorrect referencing.

× Actually I'm studying at university for PhD program to be PhD to be professor in university.

✓ Actually, I'm studying at university in a PhD program to become a professor.

Use 'in a PhD program' and 'to become a professor' for correct infinitive and natural phrasing. Add commas for clarity.

× I'm also want to be like my teacher which me which motivate me and care about students.

✓ I also want to be like my teacher, who motivates me and cares about her students.

Use 'I also want' (not 'I'm also want'). Use relative pronoun 'who' for people. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'who motivates' and 'cares'. Add 'her' for clarity.

× I remember for my Russian language teachers in my school years, uh, sweet to no speak of Nah, and but not there's they are was so, uh, good teachers.

✓ I remember my Russian language teachers from my school years; they were very good teachers.

Remove incorrect prepositions and filler words. Use 'remember my ... teachers from my school years' and past tense 'they were'. Simplify to clear sentence.

× No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because, uh, after, after school I went to the other city and there is no connection now.

✓ No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because after school I moved to another city and we have no contact now.

Use 'moved to another city' instead of 'went to the other city' and 'we have no contact' for natural present result. Remove repeated 'after' and filler 'uh'.

× My favorite teacher in university when I studying for my master degree Lazar API, she said come on with me we will work together, I will help you and you can do all things.

✓ My favorite university teacher, during my master's studies, Lazar API, said 'Come with me; we will work together. I will help you and you can do everything.'

Use 'during my master's studies' for correct noun phrase. Insert reported speech punctuation and correct phrase 'come with me'. Use 'do everything' rather than 'do all things'. Maintain past tense 'said'.

× Yes I do. I like my primary school teacher more than my high school teacher because for my primary school I studied at one city and after that each one or two year I changed my schools and.

✓ Yes, I do. I like my primary school teacher more than my high school teacher because I studied in one city for primary school, and after that I changed schools every one or two years.

Use 'studied in one city' not 'at one city'. Use 'every one or two years' for frequency and plural 'years'. Finish the sentence; remove trailing 'and'.