Teachers— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), use correct verb forms and provide one specific example of how she helped. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher is Manpreet Kaur. She is very intelligent and has guided me through both academic challenges and personal problems. For example, she helped me improve my grades in mathematics by giving extra lessons twice a week. Because of her support, I became more confident at school.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, reduce repetition and filler words, correct grammar and clarify intentions with a concrete reason or plan. Limit to 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to be a teacher in the future. I want to teach because I believe education helps build the nation and I enjoy helping others learn. For example, I plan to offer free tutoring to students from low-income families so they can succeed academically.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'one of my teachers', 'he helped me'), and give one specific memorable example of how he helped. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still remember one of my teachers, Laprade Negi. He explained difficult topics very clearly and helped me understand calculus by giving simple real-life examples, which improved my confidence in class.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct awkward phrasing and inappropriate words (e.g., 'do some gossips' is informal). Mention how you communicate and give a brief reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am still in touch with my primary school teachers. We stay connected through social media and I sometimes call them to catch up. For example, I recently spoke with my favourite teacher about my university plans.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and then one or two specific examples of help (academic, financial, emotional). Avoid vague phrases and fillers; use linking words like 'for example' to introduce specifics.

Ejemplo: My favourite teacher helped me in many ways, both academically and personally. For example, she tutored me in science after school and also arranged a small scholarship when I had financial difficulties, which allowed me to continue my studies.

Sugerencia: Make a clear comparison with correct grammar and specific reasons. State your preference directly, then support with one or two concrete differences (e.g., emotional support vs. academic focus). Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases.

Ejemplo: I prefer my primary school teachers more because they were very caring and helped me build confidence when I was young. In contrast, my high school teachers focused more on exams and less on emotional support, so I felt closer to my primary teachers.

× She is very intelligent as well as she guide me in every aspects of my life whether it is related to my academic or my other problems.

✓ She is very intelligent, and she guides me in every aspect of my life, whether it is related to my academics or other problems.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'she guide' is incorrect because third person singular needs 'guides' (Third person singular, ID 2) and 'every aspects' should be singular 'every aspect' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Also 'my academic' should be 'my academics' or 'my academic life'. Suggestions: use 'she guides', change 'every aspects' to 'every aspect', and use 'academics' or 'academic matters' for clarity.

× Uh, she admires me very in a good way.

✓ She admires me in a very good way.

Word order and adverb placement: 'very' must modify 'good way' not appear between verb and preposition. Place 'in a very good way' after the verb. Also 'admires me' is odd if intended 'she admires me' is fine; if meant 'she admires me a lot' use that.

× if I get the chance, I definitely want to become a teacher because, uh, as you know that the teacher is a nation builder and, uh, I want to help the student, those who are belongs to our family and I want to, uh, give them education for free

✓ If I get the chance, I would definitely like to become a teacher because, as you know, teachers are nation builders, and I want to help students who belong to our community and give them free education.

Multiple issues: 'the teacher is' general statement should be plural 'teachers are' (Incorrect use of the definite article/number, ID 17 and Singular/plural ID 1). 'the student, those who are belongs' has pronoun and verb errors: use 'students who belong' (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12 and present tense/verb form ID 6). 'I definitely want' is acceptable but 'would like' is more natural for hypothetical future. Suggestions: pluralize general nouns, use 'students who belong', and use 'give them free education'.

× I want to, uh, give them education for free as well as, uh, whatever I do, uh.

✓ I want to give them education for free in everything I do.

Awkward pronoun/reference and redundant filler words. 'Whatever I do' is vague; rephrasing to 'in everything I do' clarifies intent. Also remove extraneous 'uh'.

× Definitely one of my teacher, his name is Laprade Negi and he cleared my all the concepts in a very good way as well as he uh, also help, uh, help my in my other problems.

✓ Definitely one of my teachers is Mr. Laprade Negi; he clarified all my concepts very well and also helped me with my other problems.

Plural/singular: 'one of my teacher' should be 'one of my teachers' (ID 1). 'his name is' ok but punctuation needed. Verb forms: 'cleared my all the concepts' is ungrammatical; use 'clarified all my concepts' (verb choice and word order, IDs 13 and 26). 'help my in' should be 'helped me with' (pronoun and preposition, IDs 12 and 11). Use past tense 'helped' because referring to past.

× Uh, uh, he explained each and every topic in a very clear way and also help the.

✓ He explained each and every topic very clearly and also helped me.

Tense consistency: 'explained' is past, so 'help' must be past 'helped' (Past tense issue, ID 5). Word order: use adverb form 'clearly' instead of 'in a very clear way' for conciseness (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). Also the sentence ended incomplete 'help the' — corrected to 'helped me' (pronoun error, ID 12).

× Of course I'm in touch with my old school teachers because we are connected through the social media and also sometimes I call my teacher and do some gossips and because she is my favorite teacher.

✓ Of course I'm in touch with my old school teachers because we are connected through social media, and sometimes I call my teachers and gossip with them because one of them is my favorite.

Pronoun and number issues: 'my teacher' vs 'my teachers' must match plural 'old school teachers' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'do some gossips' is incorrect; use 'gossip' as an uncountable verb or 'have gossip' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice, ID 13). 'the social media' should be 'social media' (Article error, ID 22). Clarify reference to favorite teacher.

× Well, there was a lot of ways in which my teacher helped me, such as in my academic purposes as well as in my other problems such as like, uh, if there is, uh, I have a financial problem, she also helped me and all the other concept.

✓ There were many ways in which my teachers helped me, such as academically and with other problems; for example, if I had a financial problem, she helped me and explained other concepts as well.

Multiple errors: 'there was a lot of ways' should be 'there were many ways' (subject-verb agreement and singular/plural, IDs 27 and 1). 'my academic purposes' should be 'academically' or 'my academic matters' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Tense consistency: use past 'had' and 'helped' (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'all the other concept' should be 'other concepts' (Singular/plural, ID 1). Sentence restructured for clarity (Sentence structure errors, ID 26).

× Well, according to me what teacher have their own importance for if I talk about my primary school teachers, they are really attached to me and also they have me a lot in my academic salaries and all other other works.

✓ According to me, every teacher has their own importance. If I talk about my primary school teachers, they were very close to me and helped me a lot with my academics and other activities.

Multiple problems: 'what teacher have' should be 'every teacher has' (Subject-verb agreement and singular/plural, IDs 27 and 1). 'they are really attached to me' better as 'they were very close to me' for natural phrasing and past reference (Tense issue, ID 6). 'they have me a lot in my academic salaries' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'they helped me a lot in my academics' (Incorrect word choice/adjectives/adverbs, ID 13 and 26). Removed duplicated 'other'.

× So I really into my primary school teachers.

✓ So I am really fond of my primary school teachers.

Incorrect verb/structure: 'I really into' is missing the verb 'am' and should use 'fond of' (Sentence without a verb/incorrect use of prepositions, IDs 23 and 11). Use 'am really fond of' or 'really like' to express preference.