Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use simple linking words (for example, because, so, therefore) and correct verb forms and prepositions.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I hate feeling disorganized, so I tidy my home every evening. For example, I put books back on the shelf and hang up clothes immediately, which helps me relax and find things quickly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear past habit statement, then give a brief reason and a specific example. Use correct past tense and avoid slang or informal contractions like 'gonna'.

Ejemplo: No, I didn't. My mother usually tidied my room for me when I was a child, so I didn't learn to put things away. For example, she would arrange my toys and clothes every weekend, and I often left items on the floor.

Sugerencia: Be specific and accurate about actions you take. Use correct vocabulary related to study/work items and clear linking words. Keep answers under five sentences and avoid unclear or incorrect words.

Ejemplo: I keep my desk tidy by using organizers and a filing tray. For instance, I put pens in a holder, store loose papers in a folder, and clear my desk at the end of each day so I can start work quickly the next morning.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion then support it with one clear reason and a brief example. Use precise language and avoid contradictory phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it saves time and reduces stress. For example, when everything is labeled and put away, I can find documents quickly instead of searching for them and losing time.

× Yes, I like to get things tidy because I can't stand is going my speech messy.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy because I can't stand my space being messy.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and word order ('is going my speech messy' is ungrammatical). Replace 'get things tidy' with 'keep things tidy' for natural wording, and use the noun 'space' instead of 'speech'. Use the gerund passive 'my space being messy' to describe the state that the speaker cannot stand. Suggestion: say 'I can't stand my space being messy.'

× I hate the feeling of being disorganized so I usually tidy up everything evening and putting back in the play.

✓ I hate the feeling of being disorganized, so I usually tidy up everything in the evening and put things back in place.

Problems: missing preposition 'in the evening' and incorrect verb form 'putting back in the play'. Follow the coordinating conjunction with a main-clause verb form: 'I usually tidy up... and put...'. Use the noun phrase 'things' and the idiom 'in place'. Suggestion: use parallel verbs after 'so' and correct prepositions and idioms.

× No, actually we're gonna try my mom do all the thing for me and keep my room tidy and arrange other things so I'm not put all the things the right place and see always complain about that.

✓ No, actually my mom used to do everything for me and keep my room tidy and arrange other things, so I didn't have to put things in the right place and she would always complain about that.

This sentence has tense and modal/form issues. 'we're gonna try' is inappropriate; the past habitual is needed for childhood: 'used to'. Also pronouns and auxiliary verbs are incorrect: 'my mom used to do everything for me' and 'she would always complain'. Use 'didn't have to' to express lack of obligation in the past. Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits and maintain correct subject-verb forms and pronouns.

× I feel motivated and inspired when I keep my desk and study speed tidy because it's helped me feel comfortable and makes it easy to fight him.

✓ I feel motivated and inspired when I keep my desk and study space tidy because it helps me feel comfortable and makes it easy to focus.

Multiple errors: 'study speed' is incorrect — should be 'study space'. 'it's helped me' mixes tenses; present habitual requires 'it helps me'. 'makes it easy to fight him' is meaningless; likely 'focus' or 'get things done'. Replace with 'focus'. Also ensure parallel present-tense verbs for habitual actions.

× For example, I keep pan in the holder and sauce paper into forest.

✓ For example, I keep pens in the holder and scrap paper in a folder.

Original sentence uses wrong nouns and prepositions: 'pan' and 'sauce paper into forest' are incorrect. Likely intended 'pens' and 'scrap paper' and 'in a folder'. Use 'in' with container nouns. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and use 'in' for placement.

× I can quickly remember where everything is.

✓ I can quickly remember where everything is located.

Sentence is acceptable but can be improved for clarity: add 'located' to emphasize place. Original is not strictly ungrammatical; this suggestion enhances precision. Suggestion: use 'is located' for clarity.

× Of course, it's necessary to keep all the things tidy, because if you can't remember where everything is, it's easy for you to find other thing you need in just in case.

✓ Of course, it's necessary to keep things tidy, because if you can't remember where everything is, it's not easy to find the things you need when you need them.

Problems: redundant 'all the things', awkward clauses 'it's easy for you to find other thing you need in just in case'. The intended meaning is the opposite: if you can't remember where things are, it's hard to find them. Use 'not easy' and 'when you need them'. Also correct plural 'things' and remove unnecessary words. Suggestion: streamline and ensure logical coherence.