Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答总体直接，但有语法和词汇不准确（如 this 应为 things/it，which 改为 that，need to use 可简化为 need），句子略长可分两句；可以用连接词丰富衔接并提供一个简短例子。建议注意代词使用和简洁表达。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. When my home is tidy I feel more comfortable, and I can find what I need quickly. For example, if my desk is organized, I can start studying straight away.

Sugerencia: 内容能回答问题但存在较多语法和词汇错误（rot teddy, clean my new 等不合适），句子结构混乱。需改正短语和时态，用具体细节说明频率和原因，使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often kept my room tidy because my mother taught me to put toys back after playing. She always asked me to clean up, so it became a habit.

Sugerencia: 回答包含要点，但有明显用词和语法错误（proper position -> in their proper place；fires? 应是 files or few items；make me came concentrate -> helps me concentrate）。建议用清晰的短句并举一两个具体做法，注意动词形式一致。

Ejemplo: I usually put things back in their proper place after using them and keep only essential items on my desk, such as a laptop and a notebook. This helps me concentrate and reduces stress because I can find things quickly.

Sugerencia: 观点明确且有理由，但表达可更自然（keeping tidy -> being tidy；less stressful -> less stressed；save their time -> save time；keep perfectly -> be perfectly tidy）。建议用连接词衔接对比并给出短例或妥协意见。

Ejemplo: To some extent, yes. Being tidy makes people feel more comfortable and less stressed because they can find things quickly and save time. However, I don't think everyone needs to be perfectly tidy; as long as it doesn't affect daily life, a relaxed level of tidiness is fine.

× If I keep this tidy I will feel more comfortable and I can find the things which I need to use quickly.

✓ If I keep this tidy, I will feel more comfortable and I can find the things I need to use quickly.

句中并无现在分词错误，但存在多余的关系代词"which"用于指代"things"时可省略，使句子更自然流畅。建议在日常口语中将关系代词省略以提高表达自然度。

× Yes, when I was a child I often kept my rot teddy.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I often kept my red teddy.

原句包含拼写错误"rot"应为"red"（表示颜色），此外动词"kept"用于表示过去习惯是可以的。本条主要修改拼写以符合语义。建议写作时检查拼写，儿童玩具的颜色用形容词修饰名词。

× This is because my mother taught me how to clean my new and she required me put things back when after using them.

✓ This is because my mother taught me how to clean and she required me to put things back after using them.

原句语序和结构混乱："clean my new"不是正确短语，应删去多余词；动词短语"required me put"缺少不定式标记"to"；"when after using them"有冗余，二者只能选其一，改为"after using them"更自然。建议注意不定式用法（require sb to do sth）和时间状语的正确表达。

× I often put things back on their proper position after use and I just put essential things or fires on the desk.

✓ I often put things back in their proper positions after use and I only put essential things or files on the desk.

原句介词使用错误：应使用"in their proper positions"而不是"on their proper position"，且名词应复数以对应多项物品；"just"在此处更自然用"only"，"fires"为拼写错误，应为"files"（文件）。建议注意介词搭配、单复数一致及常见拼写。

× This make me came concentrate on my work and feel less stressful because I can find things quickly.

✓ This makes me concentrate on my work and feel less stressed because I can find things quickly.

原句存在主谓不一致：主语"This"应与动词第三人称单数形式"makes"一致；"came concentrate"是错误搭配，应为动词不带过去式的原形"concentrate"；"feel less stressful"用法不当，"stressful"描述事物使人有压力，应用"stressed"描述人的感受。建议复习主谓一致、动词形式和形容词/情感形容词的正确使用。

× To some extent, yes. Keeping tidy can make people feel more comfortable and less stressful.

✓ To some extent, yes. Keeping tidy can make people feel more comfortable and less stressed.

"less stressful"用法不当，同上，应该用描述人感觉的"less stressed"。这里动词时态无误，但形容词选择需改正。建议区分表示事物特性的形容词（stressful）与表示人状态的形容词（stressed）。

× They can find the things they need quickly and save their time.

✓ They can find the things they need quickly and save time.

短语"save their time"在一般表达中常说"save time"，不需要所有格"their"；使用"their"并非严格错误但显得累赘，去掉更地道。建议学习常用固定搭配，如"save time"。

× But I don't think everybody should keep perfectly.

✓ But I don't think everybody needs to keep everything perfectly tidy.

原句中"keep perfectly"搭配不当且信息不完整，应该明确保留对象，如"everything perfectly tidy"，并且用"needs to"比"should"在这里更自然，表述建议或必要性时可用不同模态动词。建议将语句补全以明确所指并使用恰当动词搭配。