Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, fix grammar and word choice, and include one clear supporting reason. Avoid fillers and repetition; use one linking phrase to connect reason and example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. Keeping things tidy shows good organization and reduces stress, so I always arrange my clothes and desk neatly. For example, I put books on shelves and label folders so I can find things quickly.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and vocabulary, and give a specific contrast with supporting details linked clearly.

Ejemplo: Not really — I was messier as a child than I am now. As a child I often left toys and clothes on the floor, but now I tidy up daily so I can find items like schoolbooks faster.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement describing your method, use correct grammar, and provide concrete, specific actions with linking words to show cause and effect.

Ejemplo: I keep my study space tidy by using shelves and labeled boxes for notebooks, books and certificates, so everything has a place. Also, I clear my desk each evening to keep distractions away and stay organized.

Sugerencia: Give a clearer stance, avoid vague generalizations, and support your opinion with specific reasons and an example; use linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I think it depends, but generally being tidy is important because it improves efficiency and reduces stress. For instance, tidy students can find study materials quickly, while very untidy people may waste time searching for things.

× Of course, yes.

✓ Of course.

This is a stylistic redundancy rather than a grammar error; saying both 'Of course' and 'yes' is repetitive. Use one affirmative response to be concise.

× It's like a good type of indicator of the good organization.

✓ It's a good indicator of good organization.

The original has awkward structure and extra articles. Simplify by using 'a good indicator' and remove the unnecessary 'type of' and extra 'the'. This creates a natural noun phrase. (Grammar problem type: sentence structure errors.)

× Uh, it's a basic ma manner that, uh, you keep your things organized.

✓ It's a basic manner of keeping your things organized.

The original has word order and incorrect words ('ma'). Rephrase to 'a basic manner of keeping' to correct structure and clarity. (Grammar problem type: sentence structure errors.)

× For example, uh, I do keep my things tied in my room tidy because it makes me feel.

✓ For example, I keep my things tidy in my room because it makes me feel comfortable.

Several issues: 'tied' is incorrect (should be 'tidy'); word order needed adjustment; sentence ends incomplete ('feel' requires complement). Add 'comfortable' to complete the idea. (Grammar problem type: sentence structure errors.)

× To be honest, I was more of a tired person when I was child compared to now.

✓ To be honest, I was more of a messy/tidy? person when I was a child compared to now.

The original uses 'tired' which seems contextually wrong; likely intended 'messy' or 'untidy'. Also missing article before 'child' (should be 'a child'). The tense 'was' is acceptable for past, but correct noun and article are needed. (Grammar problem type: present tense issue / sentence structure errors.)

× Because it makes you more organized and it makes you quickly find something easily.

✓ Because it makes you more organized and helps you find things quickly and easily.

'Makes you quickly find' is incorrect word order and collocation. Use 'helps you find' or 'allows you to find' and place adverbs ('quickly/easily') after the verb. Also pluralize 'something' to 'things' for generalization. (Grammar problem type: incorrect use of prepositions/adverb placement.)

× No, I have private bookshelves where I keep my personal belongings like a notebook or books or my certificates.

✓ I have private bookshelves where I keep personal items such as notebooks, books, and certificates.

Starting with 'No' is inappropriate here (question asked 'How do you keep your work or study space tidy?'). Remove 'No'. Use plural nouns and 'such as' for examples, and prefer 'personal items' for natural phrasing. (Grammar problem type: sentence structure errors.)

× Uh, it's is it makes you more organized type of person.

✓ They help you be a more organized person.

The original is ungrammatical and repetitive ('it's is it makes'). Replace with a clear subject 'They' (bookshelves or the previous system) and verb phrase 'help you be a more organized person.' (Grammar problem type: sentence structure errors.)

× Actually depends on what kind of person you are.

✓ Actually, it depends on what kind of person you are.

Missing subject 'it' for the impersonal construction 'It depends'. Add comma after 'Actually' for clarity. (Grammar problem type: sentence structure errors.)

× For example for the lazy persons, keeping something tidy or spaced tidy is more for think they hate or someone who loves more organized type of style.

✓ For example, for lazy people, keeping things tidy or organized is something they tend to dislike, while people who like organization prefer a tidier style.

Multiple problems: 'persons' should be 'people'; 'spaced tidy' is incorrect; awkward structure 'is more for think they hate' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to contrast lazy people and organized people, fix plural forms and word choice. (Grammar problem type: subject-verb agreement/sentence structure errors.)