Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more natural and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., avoid repetition 'in in', use 'an apartment', 'we share a room'), and include one specific supporting detail. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I live in an apartment that I share with my husband, so I keep things tidy to make our small space comfortable. For example, I put items away every evening so the room looks neat for both of us.

Sugerencia: Answer in past tense and avoid repetition. Give one clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and keep the response concise (2–3 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I was a tidy child because I liked order and felt uncomfortable with clutter, so I often made my bed and put my toys back on the shelf after playing.

Sugerencia: This answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct topic sentence describing your routine, then one or two specific actions you take to stay organized (e.g., use trays, file folders, clean daily). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: I try to keep my study space simple and organized. For example, I use a small file folder for papers and put pens in a cup, and I clear my desk each evening so it's ready for the next day.

Sugerencia: Make the answer fluent and grammatical: state your opinion clearly, give a reason, and a short personal example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because clutter distracts me when I work or study. For instance, when my desk is messy I have to stop and tidy it before I can concentrate, so I try to organize my materials beforehand.

× Yes I do, I like to keep tidy because I live in in apartment with my husband sharing room for us so I have to keep things steady for my husband.

✓ Yes, I do. I like to keep things tidy because I live in an apartment with my husband and we share a room, so I have to keep things neat for him.

Preposition and article errors: 'in in apartment' has repeated preposition and needs the indefinite article 'an'. 'sharing room for us' is incorrect word order and missing linking words; use 'we share a room'. 'steady' is the wrong adjective for cleanliness; use 'neat' or 'tidy'. Also punctuation and clause linking improved for clarity. Suggestions: add missing articles, correct prepositions, use proper noun phrases ('we share a room'), choose appropriate adjective ('neat'/'tidy'), and use commas to separate clauses.

× Yes I do because I prefer to keep my room tidy as a child because I'm sensitive person especially cleaning room and I like to clean room such as.

✓ Yes, I did, because I preferred to keep my room tidy as a child. I was a sensitive person, especially about cleanliness, and I liked to clean my room.

Tense mismatch and article use: The question asked about the past habit ('Did you use to...'), so responses should be in past tense ('did', 'preferred', 'was', 'liked'). 'I'm sensitive person' lacks an article; use 'a sensitive person'. 'especially cleaning room' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'especially about cleanliness' or 'especially about keeping my room clean'. Also remove the incomplete fragment 'such as.' Suggestions: use past tense consistently for past habits, include articles before singular countable nouns, and rephrase awkward fragments into complete clauses.

× Uh, in my case I don't. Buy anything so I use this choose so I cream my.

✓ Uh, in my case I don't buy anything; I use what I have, so I clean my space.

Sentence fragments and word choice: The original contains fragments ('I don't.'), incorrect capitalization ('Buy'), and unclear words ('choose', 'cream') likely meant to be 'choose' and 'clean'. The structure is disjointed. Correction joins fragments into full sentences and replaces wrong words with likely intended words ('buy' and 'clean'). Suggestions: avoid sentence fragments, use correct verbs, and ensure sentences convey a complete idea.

× Yes I do. It is necessary to be tidy because if messy during working time or studying time.

✓ Yes, I do. It is necessary to be tidy because if I am messy while working or studying, I cannot concentrate.

Incomplete conditional clause and missing subject: 'because if messy during working time or studying time' lacks a subject and result clause. Add 'I am' and complete the result ('I cannot concentrate') to explain why tidiness is necessary. Also 'while' is more natural than 'during ... time.' Suggestions: always include the subject in conditional clauses and state the consequence clearly.

× In my case I don't consolidate my tasks or studying so I have to clean first read my desk.

✓ In my case I don't organize my tasks or study well, so I have to clean my desk before I can start reading or working.

Incorrect word choice and conjunction structure: 'consolidate my tasks or studying' is awkward; use 'organize my tasks or study'. 'clean first read my desk' is ungrammatical word order; clarify sequence with 'clean my desk before I can start reading or working.' Suggestions: use appropriate verbs ('organize'), order actions logically, and connect clauses with clear conjunctions ('before').