Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但存在时态和语法错误、重复和冗长。建议：1) 保持现在/过去时的一致性（若问现在习惯，用现在时）；2) 删去多余短语以更简洁；3) 用连词使句子更流畅；4) 改正冠词和形容词搭配错误。示例句式可控制在3句内。

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy having a clean, tidy room because everything in order makes me feel comfortable and proud. Keeping things neat helps me relax and focus.

Sugerencia: 回答重复之前内容且有语法错误与口语填充词。建议：1) 避免重复“as I said”类短语，直接回答；2) 用正确的过去时和动词形式（e.g. ‘it cultivated good habits’）；3) 去掉停顿词如 ‘uh’；4) 用一两句补充具体例子（例如整理玩具或书本）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I used to tidy my room every weekend, putting toys in boxes and arranging my books on the shelf. Doing that regularly cultivated good habits and made me feel proud.

Sugerencia: 回答不够明确，有重复与不自然疑问句，语法和词汇使用不当。建议：1) 直接说明方法（归类、储物、定期清理）；2) 使用正确表达（e.g. ‘avoid the desk becoming messy’）；3) 避免把问题反问给考官；4) 给出具体细节（如用标签、抽屉分隔）。

Ejemplo: I keep my study space tidy by using shelves and storage boxes to separate books, stationery and papers. I also clear my desk every evening and label drawers so I can find things quickly.

Sugerencia: 观点明确但表达混乱，代词和句子结构错误，句子冗长且重复。建议：1) 用一到两句清楚表达理由；2) 注意代词一致（he/their → they）；3) 用更自然的连接词（because, so that）；4) 提供具体结果或例子（节省时间、更高效率）。

Ejemplo: Yes, I think being tidy is important because it saves time and reduces stress. If you keep things organised, you won't waste time searching for items and can focus on more important tasks.

× Yes, when I was a child I liked a clean and tidy room and a home, so when I see everything in order I will feel really comfortable and really a proud of myself.

✓ When I was a child I liked a clean and tidy room and home, so when I saw everything in order I felt really comfortable and really proud of myself.

这是过去时态的使用问题。句子开头用了“When I was a child”，表示过去的时间状况，后续动作也应使用过去时态。原句中“when I see... I will feel”使用现在时和将来时，与过去时间不一致。建议把“see”和“will feel”改为过去时“saw”和“felt”。另外“a proud of myself”中“a”多余，应删除。

× Yes, that's exactly what I said just now. I used to clean in my room and make it tidy as a child. When I see everything in order, I will feel really comfortable and really proud of myself. It, uh, cultivate my habits.

✓ Yes, that's exactly what I said just now. I used to clean my room and keep it tidy as a child. When I saw everything in order, I felt really comfortable and proud of myself. It cultivated my habits.

存在多个时态和动词形式问题：1) “clean in my room” 应为“clean my room”；2) 前面用“used to… as a child”表示过去习惯，后句应使用过去时（see → saw，will feel → felt）；3) “It, uh, cultivate my habits”中主语是单数“It”，动词应使用过去式“cultivated”。建议保持过去时一致，修正动词形式和去掉多余填充语。

× Sometimes I I will buy a new shelf to take something on it to avoid the desk become mass and I will divide it the uh space.

✓ Sometimes I will buy a new shelf to put things on it to prevent the desk from becoming messy, and I will divide the space.

问题涉及动词用法和固定搭配：1) “to take something on it” 不自然，应使用“to put things on it”表示把东西放在架子上；2) “avoid the desk become mass” 语法错误，应为“prevent the desk from becoming messy”（避免桌子变得凌乱）；3) “divide it the uh space” 语序错乱，改为“divide the space”。建议使用正确的不定式结构和固定介词搭配“prevent...from doing”。

× I will divide it the uh space. What should I put in so I will make my space clean?

✓ I will divide the space. I decide what to put where so I can keep my space clean.

原句代词和句子结构不当：1) “divide it the uh space” 中的“it”多余且位置错误，应直接说“divide the space”；2) 第二句的问句不合上下文，且“so I will make my space clean” 逻辑和时态不自然。建议改为陈述句，使用清晰的指示词“what to put where”并使用“can keep”表示能保持整洁。

× As far as I'm concerned, obviously I do. I will recommend someone to sort their things in order so that he wouldn't spend a lot of their time to solve it so they have a lot of time to do other things to avoid wasting time and finding others.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, obviously I do. I would recommend that someone sort their things in order so that they won't spend a lot of time dealing with them and will have more time for other things.

存在情态动词和代词不一致的问题：1) 用于建议时更合适的结构是“would recommend that someone do something”或“would recommend someone to do something”，此处用“would”比“will”更礼貌；2) 原句代词“he...their...they”混用，需统一为“they”；3) “spend a lot of their time to solve it” 不自然，应为“spend a lot of time dealing with them”；4) 去掉冗长重复部分。建议使用一致的代词和正确的固定表达，并用“won't”表示否定可能性。