Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答要更自然、简洁并且语法正确。避免拼写和用词错误（例如 “have up my clothes” 和 “spray a little screen on my brain” 不通顺）。应先给出主题句，然后用1–2句具体细节支持，使用连接词使语意连贯，且总句数不超过5句。可以说明什么时候整理、如何整理以及整理的好处。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like to keep things tidy. I live in a dormitory, so I make my bed every morning and put my clothes in a laundry basket instead of leaving them on the bed. Doing this helps me feel calmer and more focused when I study.

Sugerencia: 回答需更清晰并修正语法与不相关的词汇（例如 “Amirtha to play Green Party” 无意义）。应直接回答并提供具体细节（什么时候、怎样做、是谁督促），使用连接词使句子衔接自然，句子不宜过长。

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My mother encouraged me to keep my room tidy, so every Friday I cleaned my room and washed my clothes by myself. She would check my room afterwards to make sure everything was in order.

× Yes, I like to have things tidy.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy.

原句中動詞搭配不當。英語中常用 keep something tidy/clean 表示保持整潔，have things tidy 不符合慣用說法。建議使用固定搭配 keep + 受詞 + tidy。

× For example, I live in a dormitory so I have up my clothes on my bed every night I make my bed and sometimes I spray a little screen on my brain which makes me feel relaxed.

✓ For example, I live in a dormitory, so I put my clothes on my bed every night, I make my bed, and sometimes I spray a little scent on my pillow which makes me feel relaxed.

句子包含多處錯誤： 1) 'have up my clothes' 用法不正確，應為 put my clothes up 或更自然的 put my clothes on my bed，這是介詞及動詞搭配錯誤（屬於「Incorrect use of prepositions」）。 2) 原句缺少標點和連接詞，造成句子結構混亂（屬於句子結構錯誤，但要求只改介詞類錯誤，這裡同時修正為更通順句子）。 3) 'spray a little screen on my brain' 完全不合語義，推測想表達在枕頭上噴香水或噴霧，應為 spray a little scent on my pillow（介詞與名詞使用錯誤）。 改進建議：學習常見動詞短語（put something on/put something up）和固定搭配（spray scent on sth），寫句子時注意使用標點分隔從句，使句子清晰。

× Yes I did when I worked hard and my mother always asked Amirtha to play Green Party.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was young I worked hard, and my mother always asked me to play or take part in the Green Party.

原句時態與代詞使用有問題： 1) 'Yes I did when I worked hard' 時態表達不清，應拆成兩句或用過去進行/一般過去描述童年情況，這裡將其改為 'When I was young I worked hard' 更清楚（屬於 Past tense issue）。 2) 'asked Amirtha to play Green Party' 中的 'Amirtha' 似乎是錯誤代詞或人名；若想表達『母親叫我參加』，應用 'asked me to take part in the Green Party'（屬於 Incorrect use of pronouns/word choice）。 改進建議：回顧過去時的正確用法，並確認代詞或人名是否正確，必要時把長句拆成短句以免時態混淆。

× So every Friday I cleaned my room and washed my clothes by myself and she used to check my room to make sure I have done a good job.

✓ So every Friday I cleaned my room and washed my clothes by myself, and she used to check my room to make sure I had done a good job.

此句涉及過去敘述應使用過去完成或一致的過去時： 1) 前半句使用過去式 cleaned, washed，表示習慣性過去行為，接著 'she used to check' 也符合過去習慣。最後子句 'to make sure I have done a good job' 應與主句時態一致，改為過去完成 had done，以表明在她檢查時該行為已完成（屬於 Past tense issue）。 改進建議：描述過去事件時保持時態一致，必要時用過去完成表示在過去某時已完成的動作。