Tidiness— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản và tránh tiếng ồ ồ (filler). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng thì và động từ chính xác (ví dụ: "I like to keep things tidy"), rồi nêu lý do ngắn gọn và một ví dụ cụ thể. Hạn chế lặp từ (clean, tidy) bằng cách dùng từ đồng nghĩa (neat, organized). Cụ thể: tập nói thành 2–3 câu; mỗi câu không quá dài; loại bỏ các âm tiết như "umm" và sửa lỗi chia động từ (my mom wants).

Ejemplo: I enjoy keeping things tidy because it helps me feel more relaxed. My mom expects me to keep my room clean, so every weekend I organize my desk and put away clothes. This routine makes it easier to find things and study effectively.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng thì quá khứ phù hợp khi nói về thói quen trong quá khứ (used to / would / past simple). Tránh lặp fillers và sửa cấu trúc câu (e.g., 'my clothes are in my desk' → 'my clothes were in my drawer'). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng về thói quen cũ, sau đó thêm chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ vựng chính xác (corner, drawer, tidy, put in order).

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to keep my room very tidy when I was a child. Every weekend I would clean every corner, make the bed, and fold my clothes into my drawer. That habit taught me to be organized and responsible.

× Umm 'cause my mom want me to umm, keep my room clean.

✓ Umm 'cause my mom wants me to keep my room clean.

The subject 'my mom' is singular so the verb should be 'wants' (third person singular). Use the simple present 'wants' to show habit or requirement. Suggestion: practice adding -s for he/she/it in simple present.

× So every weekend I have to clean my house and umm, make sure everything in my room is clean and tidy.

✓ So every weekend I have to clean my room and make sure everything in it is clean and tidy.

'Clean my house' is too broad for context; 'room' matches earlier mention. Also 'in my room is clean and tidy' is wordy; 'in it' is concise. No tense error but precision improves clarity.

× Yes, absolutely. I mean, every weekend I have to clean every corner in my room.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I mean, every weekend I had to clean every corner of my room.

Question asks about past habit ('Did you use to... as a child?'), so use past tense 'had to' to indicate obligation in the past. Also preposition 'of' is correct: 'corner of my room'.

× Uh, when I wake up, I have to uh, put everything in order like uh, my pillow, my blanket and umm, my clothes are in my desk.

✓ Uh, when I woke up, I had to put everything in order, like my pillow, my blanket, and my clothes in my desk.

Because this describes past routine as a child, change present 'wake up/have to' to past 'woke up/had to'. Also 'my clothes are in my desk' is awkward; 'my clothes in my desk' fits list structure. Use commas to separate items.

× ...my clothes are in my desk.

✓ ...my clothes in my desk.

If listing where items are placed, use a parallel structure without 'are'. For past routine, 'my clothes in my desk' follows 'had to put everything in order, like ...' Alternatively, use 'in my drawer' if more natural. 'In' is correct preposition but sentence needed rephrasing.