Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: This is a very strong answer. You respond directly, use a natural personal story, and support your opinion with specific details and a clear result. The linking word “because” effectively explains why the memories were special. To make it slightly more concise and natural, replace “learn to ride a bike” with “learn how to ride a bike” and avoid repeating “ride” and “cycled” too closely.

Ejemplo: Definitely. When I was a child, I often went to the park with my dad to learn how to ride a bike. Those afternoons were special because he was patient and encouraging, and I still remember how proud I felt when I finally cycled on my own.

Sugerencia: You give a clear opinion and explain it with your work situation, but the answer contains some unnatural phrasing and repetition. “Even I would really love to go” should be “Although I’d love to go,” and “I work around the clock” may sound exaggerated unless you truly mean that you work almost continuously. Combine the short sentences and add a realistic contrast, such as going to a park briefly at weekends.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, although I rarely have time nowadays. As a freelancer, I have a demanding and irregular schedule, so I usually work during the day and relax at home in the evening. However, I sometimes visit a nearby park at weekends to get some fresh air.

Sugerencia: Your opinion and main reason are relevant, but the answer includes hesitation, grammatical errors, and repeated words. Say “Ho Chi Minh City is a highly polluted area” rather than “it was highly air polluted area,” and use “future generations” or “local residents” instead of “the generation or local people.” Develop the answer with one specific benefit, such as shade, space for exercise, or cleaner air.

Ejemplo: Absolutely. I’d like to see more parks in Ho Chi Minh City because the city is quite polluted and densely populated. More green spaces would improve air quality and give local residents, especially children, a safe place to exercise and relax. They could also provide shade and make the city more pleasant.

Sugerencia: This is a clear and well-organized answer with a direct explanation and a future possibility. The linking words “because,” “so,” and “but” make the response coherent, and it stays within the five-sentence limit. To improve the content, mention one possible type of park or a specific location instead of ending with a general reference to “recent ones.” Also, “keep up with new park openings” is natural, but “find out about newly opened parks” may be simpler and more precise.

Ejemplo: I don’t have a specific park in mind yet because I’m quite busy with work at the moment. However, I’d like to visit a newly opened park with plenty of trees and walking paths, perhaps somewhere on the outskirts of Ho Chi Minh City. I’ll look for one when I have more free time.

× I work around the clock, so even I would really love to go to the park.

✓ I work around the clock, so even though I would really love to go to the park, I do not have enough time.

Even is not sufficient to connect the two contrasting ideas. Use the subordinating conjunction even though to show that the speaker wants to go to the park but lacks time.

× Absolutely, especially in Vietnam and in Ho Chi Minh City where we at umm, it was highly air polluted area.

✓ Absolutely, especially in Vietnam and particularly in Ho Chi Minh City, where the air is highly polluted.

The speaker is describing the current condition of the city, so the present-tense verb is is needed instead of the past-tense verb was.

× Absolutely, especially in Vietnam and in Ho Chi Minh City where we at umm, it was highly air polluted area.

✓ Absolutely, especially in Vietnam and particularly in Ho Chi Minh City, where the air is highly polluted.

Air polluted is not the natural adjective phrase in this context. Use highly polluted to describe the air. Highly modifies the adjective polluted.

× Absolutely, especially in Vietnam and in Ho Chi Minh City where we at umm, it was highly air polluted area.

✓ Absolutely, especially in Vietnam and particularly in Ho Chi Minh City, which is a highly polluted area.

A singular countable noun such as area requires an article. Use a before highly polluted area. The relative clause which is also makes the sentence structure clearer.