Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on grammar (verb forms, plural/singular), concise structure, and clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked with simple connectors (for example, "because" or "and"). Avoid repetition and aim for 3–4 sentences total.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I spent a lot of time there playing with my friends and my toys, and my parents often took photos of us. Looking at those photos now makes me feel happy and energetic because they remind me of carefree times.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions for routines. Give a direct answer (yes/no), then add specific reasons with linking words. Keep sentences short and avoid confusing words or names.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks. I usually go in the mornings or evenings to jog and do yoga because I want to stay active. I also enjoy meeting friends there and I feel more relaxed when I reconnect with nature.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give clear reasons with specific examples. Correct countable nouns and plural forms. Use linking words like "because" and "for example". Propose a concise recommendation at the end.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we only have one main park and it is often overcrowded in the mornings. This makes visits uncomfortable for many people. I would suggest the local government build several small parks in different neighborhoods so everyone has easy access to green space.

Sugerencia: Be specific about the park and why you want to visit it. Use coherent linking words and avoid repetition. Keep answers to 2–4 clear sentences: a topic sentence plus one or two reasons with examples of facilities or activities.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the nearby City Park because it has many facilities such as a gym, a club, and a playground. I am especially interested in the gym and outdoor fitness areas to improve my physical health. It also seems like a good place to meet friends and relax in the evenings.

× Yes, I like to going park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks.

Original uses incorrect verb pattern 'like to going' and missing preposition/article. Use either 'like to go' or 'liked going'. Because the question asks about childhood (past), use past 'liked'. Also 'park' should be plural 'parks' or 'the park'; 'going to parks' is natural. Suggestion: choose correct verb form ('liked' for past) and 'going to parks'. Note: Grammar problem types applicable: 6 (Present tense issue) and 5 (Past tense issue) but primary is verb form error (8) and subject-verb agreement (27).

× When I was a child, I spent quantity of time with my friends, with my, with playing with my toys.

✓ When I was a child, I spent a lot of time with my friends, playing with my toys.

Use of 'quantity of time' is unnatural; replace with 'a lot of time'. 'Spent ... with playing' is incorrect structure: use 'spent time doing something' -> 'spent a lot of time playing'. Remove extra filler words. Maintain past tense 'spent'.

× Apart from that, my father, my parents took several pictures while playing with my friends and I.

✓ Apart from that, my parents took several pictures of me playing with my friends.

Incorrect pronoun case 'playing with my friends and I'; after a preposition or as object use 'me'. Also 'my father, my parents' is redundant; use 'my parents'. Use 'pictures of me playing with my friends' for clear meaning. This is a pronoun and sentence structure correction (12,26).

× Whenever I see it, I feel very fun and energetic because that time was so so good for me and this experience cannot be memorable memorable.

✓ Whenever I see them, I feel very happy and energetic because that time was very good for me and the experience is unforgettable.

'Feel very fun' is incorrect; 'feel happy' or 'have fun' are correct. 'See it' should refer to 'them' (pictures). 'So so good' is informal; use 'very good'. 'Cannot be memorable memorable' is ungrammatical; use 'unforgettable' or 'is a memorable experience'. Maintain present tense 'feel' when seeing photos but describe past as 'was'.

× Jessie like to still going to buy playgrounds now because I most because I want to share quality of time with my friends in the park.

✓ Jessie still likes to go to playgrounds now because she wants to spend quality time with her friends in the park.

Subject-verb agreement: third person singular 'Jessie' requires 'likes' not 'like'. 'to still going' mixes infinitive and -ing; use 'still likes to go' or 'still goes'. 'Buy playgrounds' is incorrect—likely 'go to playgrounds'. 'I' changed to 'she' to match subject 'Jessie'. Use 'spend quality time' rather than 'share quality of time'.

× Apart from that mostly in the evening and morning time I go for their Yogi yogging and doing some yoga class in there because I want to stay active with and also when I go park.

✓ Apart from that, mostly in the mornings and evenings I go jogging and take yoga classes there because I want to stay active, and also when I go to the park it helps me reconnect with nature.

Incorrect prepositions and word choices: 'in the evening and morning time' -> 'in the mornings and evenings'. 'I go for their Yogi yogging' is unclear; use 'I go jogging'. 'Doing some yoga class in there' -> 'take yoga classes there'. 'When I go park' requires 'go to the park'. Reorganize sentence for clarity and parallel structure.

× It helped me to reconnect with nature.

✓ It helps me reconnect with nature.

Tense consistency: earlier sentence about present habits should use present simple 'helps'. Original 'helped' shifts to past; keep present to match 'I go jogging' and 'I want'. Also remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps' (both forms acceptable but 'helps me reconnect' is concise).

× Yes, I like to see more park in the city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city.

'See more park' should be plural 'parks' or 'more of the parks'. Also use conditional 'would like' for polite preference. Maintain correct count noun form (1).

× Most nowadays in my in my city there are only one one park where people can go.

✓ Nowadays, in my city there is only one park where people can go.

'There are only one one park' mixes plural verb with singular noun and repeats words. Use 'there is only one park'. Fix word order and remove duplication. (Problems 1 and 3).

× There have many people.

✓ There are many people.

Incorrect verb form 'have' with existential 'there'; use 'there are'. Also original lacks subject-verb agreement (3 and 27).

× Most of the people go for a morning and meeting.

✓ Most people go in the morning to meet each other.

Awkward phrasing 'go for a morning and meeting'; use 'go in the morning to meet' or 'go for morning meetings'. Fix adverb placement and noun choice.

× At that time the park is full of crowded and some of people feel uncomfortable and unpredictable because of the crowded places.

✓ At that time the park is very crowded and some people feel uncomfortable and unsafe because of the crowds.

'Full of crowded' is incorrect; use 'very crowded'. 'Some of people' -> 'some people'. 'Unpredictable' is not appropriate here; 'unsafe' or 'uncomfortable' fits. Use 'crowds' as noun. Improve collocations.

× So I recommended to government and convey and also community member to create more and more park in my city.

✓ So I would recommend to the government and community members that they create more parks in my city.

Awkward structure: use 'recommend to someone that...' or 'recommend that the government create...'. Include articles 'the government' and plural 'community members' and plural 'parks'. Use conditional 'would recommend' for politeness.

× Yes, I want to go in my nearby City Park because in their park have many facilities like club, gym and also playground where people people can enjoy the reeling happening of life with their friends and share community of time with their close ones.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the nearby City Park because it has many facilities like a club, a gym and playgrounds where people can enjoy life with their friends and spend time with their close ones.

Multiple errors: 'go in my nearby City Park' -> 'go to the nearby City Park'. 'their park have' -> 'it has'. Add articles 'a club, a gym'. Duplicate 'people'. 'reeling happening of life' is unclear; 'enjoy life' is natural. 'share community of time' -> 'spend time together'. Fix singular/plural and pronouns.

× Apart from that, I want to go there because of the gym and also in other facilities which were related to physical fitness.

✓ Apart from that, I want to go there because of the gym and other facilities related to physical fitness.

Use 'related to' not 'which were related to' to keep sentence concise and maintain present relevance. Remove unnecessary 'in' and past tense 'were' since the facilities still exist.

× Mostly people go there in evening time and uh, because they want to reconnect with nature.

✓ Mostly people go there in the evening because they want to reconnect with nature.

Simplify 'in evening time' to 'in the evening'. Keep present simple 'go' for habitual action. Remove filler 'uh'.

× I also.

✓ I also do.

Original is a fragment 'I also.' which lacks a verb. Complete sentence like 'I also do' or 'I also go there' to convey intended meaning. Ensure full clause with subject and verb.