Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your response more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers such as repeated 'like' and unclear phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I enjoyed watching dogs play and seeing other children ride bicycles, which felt lively and fun. Also, I often played games like hide-and-seek with my friends, which created many happy memories.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer, then explain reasons with coherent linking words. Remove hesitations and irrelevant remarks. Limit to 2–4 sentences and be specific about activities or constraints.

Ejemplo: I don't visit parks as often now. Mainly because I am busy with work and my friends and I typically choose cafés or malls when we go out, so parks are less of a priority.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give a clear reason and a linked extra idea. Be specific about why more parks would be good (e.g., recreation, green space) rather than vague statements about other countries.

Ejemplo: Not necessarily, because my city is small and already has only a few parks which I have visited. However, I would welcome more parks if they offered better facilities and green spaces for families and exercise.

Sugerencia: Give a specific example of a type of park you want to visit and explain why, using linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid repetition and be concise.

Ejemplo: I don't know many specific parks abroad, but I would like to visit parks with unique features, such as botanical gardens or large national parks, because they offer unusual plants and wildlife that I haven't seen at home.

× I did like going to parks as a child because from my experience, I liked seeing the dogs play, I liked watching the kids like bike or just play and I especially liked going there with my friends and just like playing anything like hide and seek, running in the garden.

✓ I liked going to parks as a child because, from my experience, I liked seeing the dogs play, I liked watching the kids ride bikes or just play, and I especially liked going there with my friends and playing games like hide-and-seek or running in the garden.

The original sentence uses awkward and incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'like bike') and excessive filler 'did like' which is unnecessary in simple past. Use 'liked' for past preference. Use the present participle 'riding' or the base form 'ride' with 'kids' requires 'ride bikes' or 'ride a bike'; 'like bike' is incorrect. Also improve parallel structure by making the list consistent ('seeing', 'watching', 'playing').

× I do not go to parks as often as I used to go there.

✓ I do not go to parks as often as I used to.

The phrase 'used to go there' is redundant; 'used to' already implies past habitual action. Keep tense consistency by using simple present for current habit ('do not go') and 'used to' for past habit.

× But yeah, I mean, I do not have anything against bikes.

✓ But I do not have anything against bikes.

Filler phrases 'yeah, I mean' are conversational and unnecessary in a concise answer. The sentence is grammatical but can be tightened for clarity and formality by removing fillers.

× It just I do not really have time nowadays to go to parks with my friends, but whenever we go somewhere, it is not the parks that we go to.

✓ I just do not really have time nowadays to go to parks with my friends; when we go somewhere, it is usually not to parks.

The original word order 'It just I do not' is awkward. Reorder to 'I just do not...' for correct sentence structure. Replace repetitive clause with a concise alternative 'it is usually not to parks' for clarity and naturalness.

× I believe that I have seen all the parks in my city because there are not many parks in my city since it is small, but I guess I would like to see parks in other countries.

✓ I believe that I have seen all the parks in my city because there are not many parks here since it is small, but I guess I would like to see parks in other countries.

Using 'in my city' twice is repetitive; replace the second instance with 'here'. Tense 'have seen' is acceptable for experience up to now. No major grammar error beyond repetition; adjusted for concision.

× I do not really have much knowledge about parks and about parks especially in other countries since I've seen all the parks in my country, well mostly all of them.

✓ I do not really have much knowledge about parks, especially parks in other countries, since I have seen almost all the parks in my country.

Combine repeated phrases to avoid redundancy. Use 'have seen' (present perfect) and 'almost all' instead of 'well mostly all of them' for clarity and correctness. This corrects awkward colloquial phrasing.

× But I guess I would like to see parks that are different or not like the ones that I've already seen.

✓ But I guess I would like to see parks that are different from the ones I have already seen.

Use 'different from' rather than 'different or not like'. Also use present perfect 'have already seen' for experiences up to now. Remove contraction for formality and clarity.