Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, avoid hesitations and odd word choices (e.g. “brave fresh air”), and add one specific supporting detail. Keep answer within 3–4 sentences and use linking words if needed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often visited with my family to breathe the fresh air and enjoy the colorful flower beds. Those visits felt relaxing and left me with many happy memories.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and clearer phrasing: start with a direct topic sentence, use present simple for habits, and give one specific reason with a linking word. Reduce filler words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go every Saturday and Sunday because walking there helps me relax and clear my mind. For example, I like sitting under the large oak tree and reading a book.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct grammar: use infinitive after 'would like' (would like to see), choose precise vocabulary (make the air fresher, places to exercise or relax), and provide one specific benefit. Keep sentences compact and linked.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they would make the air fresher and provide safe places for children to play. For instance, new parks with playgrounds and benches would encourage families to spend time outside.

Sugerencia: Be more specific and show personal preference: even if you don't have a particular park in mind, describe the type of park you'd like to visit and why. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and correct small grammar issues (e.g. 'it doesn't matter').

Ejemplo: I don't have a particular park in mind, but I would like to visit a large botanical garden in the future because I enjoy seeing rare plants and learning about different species. For example, a park with themed gardens and information signs would be ideal for a peaceful afternoon.

× I like going to the park, uh, to brave fresh air and uh, to view its beautiful scenery.

✓ I liked going to parks as a child because I could breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scenery.

The student mixes past and present: the question asked about childhood (past). Use past tense 'liked' and 'could breathe' to match timeframe; 'brave fresh air' is incorrect verb choice — use 'breathe'. Also use plural 'parks' or 'parks in general' to be consistent and 'enjoy' fits better than 'to view'.

× It's extraordinary feeling of my childhood so.

✓ It was an extraordinary feeling from my childhood.

Original has awkward word order and tense mismatch. Use past tense 'was' for childhood, and correct noun phrase 'an extraordinary feeling' with preposition 'from'. Remove filler 'so'.

× Yes I do, I still went to park, uh, every Sunday and Saturdays because I've been wandering in.

✓ Yes, I do. I still go to the park every Sunday and Saturday because I enjoy walking there.

The student mixed present 'do' with past 'went' and incorrect plural 'Saturdays' and awkward perfect continuous 'I've been wandering in'. Use simple present 'go' for habitual action, singular 'park' with article 'the park', 'every Sunday and Saturday' or 'every Sunday' and replace 'wandering in' with 'walking there' or 'strolling there'.

× The park is both for me to my eyes and my heart.

✓ The park is good for both my eyes and my heart.

Incorrect prepositions 'for me to my eyes and my heart' should be rephrased to 'good for both my eyes and my heart' to convey benefit. Keep parallel structure 'both ... and ...'.

× Beautiful scenery, trees.

✓ It has beautiful scenery and many trees.

Fragment lacking verb. Convert to complete sentence by adding 'It has' and connecting items with 'and'. This makes the sentence grammatical and clear.

× Yes, I would like seeing many in the parks in my city because the parks can't make the city air more fresh and also it's a good place for people to play and wonder.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because parks can make the city's air fresher and they are good places for people to play and relax.

After 'would like' use the infinitive 'to see', not the -ing form. 'Can't make the city air more fresh' is incorrect modality and adjective order — use 'can make the city's air fresher'. 'Wonder' is the wrong verb for recreational activities; use 'relax' or 'stroll'. Also fix article and plural agreement.

× I think it's a important.

✓ I think it's important.

Article 'a' with uncountable adjective 'important' is incorrect. Drop 'a' to form correct adjective predicate 'it's important'.

× I don't have an actual name of the parks where I want to go because I think parks are the same.

✓ I don't have the name of a specific park I want to visit because I think parks are similar.

Use singular 'the name of a specific park' rather than 'an actual name of the parks'. 'Want to go' can be 'want to visit' for clarity. 'Are the same' is informal; 'similar' is better.

× I go to the parks just for walking around and viewing the trees, flowers and also it's never mind which part I go.

✓ I go to parks just to walk around and look at the trees and flowers, and it never matters which part I visit.

Use infinitive 'to walk' after 'just', not gerund only. Replace 'viewing' with 'look at'. 'It's never mind which part I go' is ungrammatical — use 'it never matters which part I visit' and ensure verbs and subjects agree.