Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be consistent with tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar mistakes (e.g., 'liked', 'for walks' or 'before work').

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks with my dad when I was a child. We usually went early in the morning for walks before he went to work, and I remember feeding the ducks and playing on the swings.

Sugerencia: Avoid contradictory phrases and be concise. Give a clear topic sentence about current habits, then explain reasons and frequency with linking words. Remove confusing short sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I can't go early in the morning anymore because of work. Instead, I visit a nearby club park a few times a week in the evenings, which helps me relax after work.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating the same information. Start with a direct opinion, then give a concise reason and one specific suggestion or consequence using a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would — my small city has very few green spaces, so more parks would improve residents' health and provide places for families to relax.

Sugerencia: Be specific and complete your sentence. Give one or two examples of parks or features you want to see and explain why, using linking words to connect ideas. Avoid vague endings.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a list of parks I want to visit in other cities, such as the botanical garden in City A and the riverside park in City B, because I want to enjoy their diverse plants and peaceful walking paths.

× Yes, I like going to parks as a child with my dad.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child with my dad.

The question asks about a past habit ('as a child'), so the student should use the past tense 'liked' rather than the present 'like'. Use past tense for actions or states that occurred regularly in the past. Suggestion: Use 'liked' for past routines (e.g., 'I liked going to parks when I was a child').

× We went to parks early in the morning when I was a child for work almost every day.

✓ We went to parks early in the morning almost every day when I was a child because of my father's work.

The original sentence has awkward word order and an unclear phrase 'for work'. The past tense 'went' is correct, but the reason should be linked to the subject (father). Clarify by specifying whose work and reposition time phrase to the end or use 'because'. Suggestion: Place time/manner phrases clearly and specify the agent of 'work' (e.g., 'because of my father's work').

× Yes, I still like going to parks now, but I cannot do it early morning these days.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks, but I cannot go early in the morning these days.

The verb 'do it early morning' is unnatural; use 'go early in the morning'. Also 'now' is redundant with 'these days'. Keep present simple for a current preference and present modal 'cannot' for inability. Suggestion: Say 'cannot go early in the morning these days' for natural expression.

× So I have a membership of a club where I go often.

✓ So I have a membership to a club that I go to often.

Use 'membership to' or 'membership of' is possible but 'membership to a club' and 'go to' are more natural. Also 'where I go often' is awkward; 'that I go to often' fixes word order. Suggestion: Use 'membership to a club that I go to often' or 'I am a member of a club that I visit often.'

× No, but not regularly.

✓ No, I don't go regularly.

Answer fragment 'No, but not regularly' lacks a clear subject and verb; converting to a full sentence clarifies meaning and matches the question about frequency. Suggestion: Provide a full sentence like 'No, I don't go regularly.'

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city, but I live in a small city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city, but I live in a small city.

No grammatical error detected that matches the provided list; sentence is correct. (No correction needed.)

× We don't have many parks in my city.

✓ We don't have many parks in my city.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches subject-verb agreement and article use. (No correction needed.)

× Yes, there are parks that I want to visit in future and I have a list of them in different cities in my country that I want to visit and enjoy their green spaces with some sort of.

✓ Yes, there are parks that I want to visit in the future, and I have a list of them in different cities in my country that I want to visit and enjoy for their green spaces and amenities.

Missing article 'the' before 'future' and sentence is repetitive and incomplete ('with some sort of' is unfinished). Also punctuation and coordination need fixing. Use 'in the future' and complete the idea (e.g., 'green spaces and amenities'). Suggestion: Use 'in the future' and avoid repetition; make the final phrase complete (e.g., 'enjoy their green spaces and facilities').