Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ; trả lời trực tiếp hơn với câu chủ đề rõ ràng; dùng thêm 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi thì (ví dụ: 'as a child' và 'I used to').

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to go almost every weekend with my friends, where we played football and climbed trees, which was great fun.

Sugerencia: Sửa lỗi lặp từ và trật tự, sử dụng các liên từ hợp lý để nối ý (e.g., 'but', 'so', 'although'); tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu và dùng cấu trúc phủ định đúng. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất hoặc hoạt động khi đến công viên.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks, but I’m very busy with my studies, so I can only visit them on my free days. When I go, I usually take a walk or read under a tree to relax.

Sugerencia: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc và gọn gàng; tránh liệt kê lộn xộn và lỗi từ vựng ('having more Christmas' không đúng nghĩa). Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., 'bring the community together', 'safe space for exercise'). Sắp xếp ý theo logic: lý do — lợi ích cụ thể — ví dụ ngắn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would provide safe places for children to exercise and make friends, and they would also help bring the community together by offering spaces for local events.

Sugerencia: Chú trọng phát âm từ quan trọng và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh; sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng sai ('resorting', 'many stop'); nên nêu lý do cụ thể và các hoạt động muốn làm ở đó. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu, rõ ràng và có liên từ nếu cần.

Ejemplo: I would love to visit Hyde Park in London. I’ve heard it has a large lake and beautiful open spaces, and I’d like to walk around the lake and relax or have a picnic there.

× Yes, because in I as a child I have a lot of friends so I can go to the park that then I can play with my friends.

✓ Yes, as a child I had a lot of friends, so I could go to the park and play with them.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. 'in I as a child' is ungrammatical; use 'as a child'. Because the question is about past habit, use past tense 'had' and 'could'. 'that then I can play with my friends' is redundant and awkward; connect ideas with 'and' and use 'them' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: simplify structure and match past tense for childhood experiences.

× Absolutely yes. But now in now I'm so busy for studies so I cannot go to the park. I often go to the park when I have a free day to not to do nothing.

✓ Absolutely. But right now I'm so busy with my studies that I cannot go to the park. I often go to the park when I have a free day and nothing else to do.

Errors include redundant words ('now in now'), incorrect preposition 'for studies' (use 'with my studies'), and double negative 'to not to do nothing'. Use 'right now' or 'at the moment' and 'so... that' to link cause and effect. Replace double negative with 'nothing else to do'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'I often go'.

× Yes I would because I enjoy to see kids playing, playing with their friends, park, give kids a safe place for exercise and making friends and having more Christmas would also improve the social society.

✓ Yes, I would, because I enjoy seeing kids playing with their friends. Parks give children a safe place for exercise and making friends, and having more parks would also improve the community.

Incorrect verb pattern 'enjoy to see' should be 'enjoy seeing' (verb + -ing). The original mixes items without clear structure and uses incorrect nouns ('park' instead of 'parks', 'Christmas' instead of 'parks' or similar). Use parallel structure for list items and correct noun choices: 'children' and 'community'. Also correct 'having more parks' instead of 'having more Christmas.'

× Oh my gosh, I want to go to the Hyde Park in London, England because I resorting that park have a large lake with wind and many stop in there.

✓ Oh my gosh, I want to go to Hyde Park in London, England because I remember that the park has a large lake, windy areas, and many stops.

Multiple issues: unnecessary article 'the' before 'Hyde Park' (use no article for named parks), incorrect verb 'resorting' (probably intended 'remember'), subject-verb agreement 'park have' should be 'park has', and awkward phrase 'many stop in there' should be 'many stops' or 'many places to stop'. Use correct prepositions and verb forms. Ensure subject-verb agreement for 'park has'.