Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Jawaban Anda singkat dan jelas tetapi terlalu singkat. Tambahkan kalimat topik yang sedikit lebih luas dan satu atau dua detail spesifik (mis. aktivitas yang Anda lakukan di taman atau alasan menyukainya) menggunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika perlu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I enjoyed playing on the swings and climbing trees. I especially liked going with my friends on weekends, which made those visits fun and memorable.

Sugerencia: Kalimat Anda tidak jelas secara tata bahasa dan makna. Jelaskan alasan secara langsung, gunakan struktur lengkap (subjek + predikat + objek) dan sebutkan waktu atau frekuensi jika relevan. Hindari fragmen seperti “it is a midnight for.” Gunakan kata penghubung untuk keterhubungan jika memberikan detail tambahan.

Ejemplo: Not really, because I rarely go to parks now since I usually go out at night and the parks are closed or unsafe then. If I had free time during the day, I would go more often.

Sugerencia: Ungkapan Anda perlu perbaikan tata bahasa dan pemilihan kata. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan jelaskan mengapa Anda ingin lebih banyak taman (manfaatnya). Sertakan kata penghubung untuk menambah detail contoh: because, so, and.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for relaxation and exercise. More parks would also make the neighborhood more pleasant and encourage people to spend time outdoors.

Sugerencia: Jawaban panjang tapi kacau dan berulang. Susun ulang menjadi kalimat tunggal jelas: katakan apakah Anda memiliki taman tertentu dan jelaskan kondisi yang membuat Anda tertarik (mis. rekomendasi teman atau kedekatan lokasi). Hapus pengulangan dan kata pengisi seperti 'uh'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have a specific park in mind, but I would be excited to visit any new park near my house if a friend or colleague recommended it. I usually try new places based on recommendations and convenience.

× Not now, because it is a midnight for.

✓ Not now, because it is midnight.

The phrase uses incorrect article and word order. 'Midnight' does not require 'a' and 'for' is unnecessary. Use simple present 'is midnight' to describe current time. Suggestion: say 'It is midnight' or 'It's late at night.'

× Sure. I happy to explore another plot.

✓ Sure. I'm happy to explore another park.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' and uses 'plot' incorrectly; 'park' is the correct noun in this context. Include the contraction 'I'm' or full form 'I am' before the adjective 'happy.' Suggestion: 'I'm happy to explore another park.'

× For no, I didn't have but I'm excited if uh, my friend or or my colleagues sell me or talking me about new park in near my house.

✓ No, I don't have any, but I'd be excited if my friend or colleagues told me about a new park near my house.

Multiple tense and word-choice errors: 'For no' is incorrect; use 'No.' 'I didn't have' is wrong tense; present simple 'I don't have any' fits. 'Sell me or talking me' is incorrect—use 'told me' or 'talked to me.' 'In near my house' should be 'near my house.' Also condition uses polite hypothetical 'I'd be excited if...' Suggestion: simplify to 'No, I don't have any, but I'd be excited if my friend or colleagues told me about a new park near my house.'