Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответ нужно сделать более естественным и грамматически правильным: используй прошедшее время (I liked), исправь порядок слов и убери лишние повторения. Добавь одно-два конкретных подробных предложения (например, чем вы занимались в парке) и используй связку для плавного перехода.

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child. I lived very close to it, so I often went there to play on the swings and ride my bicycle. Also, I used to meet my friends there every afternoon, which made it a very happy place for me.

Sugerencia: Фраза неестественна и содержит много пауз и грамматических ошибок. Используй простое настоящее или настоящее продолженное для текущей ситуации (I don't go / I am very busy). Дай одно связное объяснение и, при необходимости, краткое примерное расписание. Избегай междометий и повторов.

Ejemplo: Not really — I don't go to the park much now because I am very busy. I am a student and I also work part-time at the market, so I usually study in the evenings and work on weekends. As a result, I rarely have free time to visit parks.

Sugerencia: Ответ короткий и правильный, но можно расширить его связным обоснованием. Добавь причину и пример (например, для отдыха, спорта или улучшения экологии), используя связующее слово (because / so / therefore).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for relaxation and exercise. For example, new parks could include playgrounds and walking paths, which would encourage people to spend more time outdoors and improve community health.

Sugerencia: Ответ запутанный и грамматически неверный. Сформулируй цель по-английски ясно: назови конкретное место или тип парка, объясни почему и добавь подробность о том, что ты хочешь там сделать. Употребляй правильные формы глаголов и избегай лишних повторах.

Ejemplo: I would love to visit famous American national parks in the future, such as Yellowstone or Yosemite, because their landscapes are amazing. I am especially interested in hiking the trails and seeing the wildlife, and I would also like to try activities like skiing if the park offers winter sports.

× Yes, of course I like going to park.

✓ Yes, of course I liked going to parks.

The student is recalling childhood (past), so the verb should be in the past tense 'liked' rather than present 'like'. Also 'park' needs an article or plural; in this context 'parks' fits better when speaking generally about going to parks as a child. Suggestion: use past tense for past habits and use plural or 'the park' as appropriate.

× When I was a child I go to the a lot in the park because I live near in the park.

✓ When I was a child I went to the park a lot because I lived near the park.

The main clause refers to the past, so 'go' should be past 'went', and 'live' should be past 'lived' to match time. Remove the extra article 'a' and the preposition error 'near in' — correct is 'near the park'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent for past-time descriptions and use 'near the park' for location.

× No, I don't going to the park because, uh, I'm a students, I have a lot of lessons.

✓ No, I don't go to the park because I'm a student and I have a lot of lessons.

After 'do not' the base form 'go' must be used, not 'going'. 'Students' should be singular 'student' to match 'I am'. Also combine clauses with 'and' rather than comma splice. Suggestion: use correct auxiliary + base verb structure and correct noun number.

× I uh, and also I, I have a job. Uh, I, uh, I do, I'm doing, uh, at the market.

✓ I also have a job. I work at the market.

Use simple present 'work' to describe a habitual or current job, not the awkward 'I do, I'm doing'. 'Have a job' is fine but follow with a clear verb: 'I work at the market.' Suggestion: choose one clear present form (simple present for routines) and avoid filler words.

× Yes, of course I would like to see more parks in my country.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to see more parks in my city.

The examiner asked about parks in your city; 'country' changes the meaning. Grammar is fine but content should match the question. Suggestion: answer with 'city' to stay relevant.

× I want to Americans dream parks because there are, it's very, there is a, it's very interesting for me and I want to, uh, I want to playing American ski, uh.

✓ I want to go to American dream parks because they are very interesting to me and I want to try American skiing.

'I want to Americans dream parks' is ungrammatical; use 'go to American dream parks'. 'There are' followed by 'it's very' is redundant; use a clear subject 'they are'. 'I want to playing' should be 'I want to try ...' or 'I want to play' but for skiing use 'try American skiing'. Suggestion: use 'go to' for visiting places, match plural subjects and verbs, and use infinitive 'to try' after 'want'.