Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and gives personal experience, but has grammatical errors, redundancy and awkward phrasing. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, correct tense and concise supporting details. In English (Bangladesh): Start with one clear sentence about liking parks, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (activities, who with) using linking words like "and" or "so". Avoid repeating similar ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents and friends, where we played games and ran around. Sometimes my relatives joined us and we had picnics, so those visits were always fun and memorable.

Sugerencia: Good idea but sentence structure, tense and word choice need correction; avoid repetition. Use one clear topic sentence stating you still like parks, then give concise reasons with linking words like "because" and "so". Use correct verb forms and fewer fillers.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they provide fresh air and a pleasant environment that helps me relax. So whenever I find some spare time, I like to visit a nearby park to relieve stress and refresh my mind.

Sugerencia: The content is relevant and gives reasons, but grammar, article use and awkward phrasing reduce clarity. Be specific and concise: one topic sentence then two clear reasons with linking words like "because" and "also." Use plural/singular correctly and avoid wordy phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe spaces for both young and older people. Also, more parks would encourage outdoor activities and improve residents' wellbeing.

Sugerencia: You give a plan and reason, which is good, but correct tense, word order and conciseness are needed. Start with a clear topic sentence about your plan, then give a specific reason and finish with a brief note about arrangements. Use smooth linking words like "because" and "so."

Ejemplo: Yes, I'm planning to visit a large park near my city soon. I heard it has a beautiful, peaceful environment, so my friends and I want to go there to enjoy nature and relax for a day.

× Yes, I used to go to park with my parents and friends as well who did a lot of activities there.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the park with my parents and friends, who did a lot of activities there.

You need the definite article 'the' before 'park' when referring to a specific place you regularly visited. Also add a comma before the relative clause 'who did a lot of activities there' to improve sentence clarity. Suggestion: Use 'the park' for specific parks and include commas for nonrestrictive clauses.

× Especially I played with my friends and enjoyed the quality time.

✓ I especially played with my friends and enjoyed quality time.

The sentence is about past habitual actions, so past tense 'played' and 'enjoyed' are correct; the issue is word order and unnecessary article 'the' before 'quality time'. Move 'especially' before the verb and remove 'the'. Suggestion: Place adverbs like 'especially' before the main verb and use 'quality time' without 'the' in general references.

× Sometimes I enjoy there with my relatives as well where we did picnic.

✓ Sometimes I enjoyed being there with my relatives, where we had picnics.

The original mixes present 'enjoy' with past 'did'. For childhood habits use past 'enjoyed'. Use 'being there' rather than 'enjoy there'. 'Did picnic' is incorrect; use 'had picnics' or 'went on picnics'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use natural collocations: 'enjoyed being there' and 'had picnics'.

× Definitely I prefer to go to park because the park provide fresh air and charming environment which will help me to which helps me to get refresh and I can and relieve my stress.

✓ Definitely I prefer to go to the park because the park provides fresh air and a charming environment, which helps me to get refreshed and relieve my stress.

Use 'the park' with the definite article. Subject-verb agreement: 'park' requires 'provides'. 'Charming environment' needs an article 'a'. Remove redundant phrasing 'which will help me to which helps me to'. Use 'get refreshed' and 'relieve my stress' for natural expression. Suggestion: Ensure articles are used, match verbs to singular/plural subjects, and avoid repeated clauses.

× So in our find any spare of time I'd like, I'd like to go to park.

✓ So whenever I find any spare time, I'd like to go to the park.

The original is ungrammatical and word order is wrong. Use 'whenever I find any spare time' for the condition, and add 'the' before 'park'. Suggestion: Use correct conditional phrases ('whenever I find') and include articles.

× Of course, I prefer a lots of park in my city because whenever administration established a huge number of park, it will help to improve the air quality as well as provide more space for the younger people as well as the older people to spend the quality time.

✓ Of course, I prefer lots of parks in my city because whenever the administration establishes a large number of parks, it helps improve air quality and provides more space for young and old people to spend quality time.

Use plural 'parks' with 'lots of'. 'A lots of' is incorrect. Add 'the' before 'administration' if speaking of a specific body; use present tense 'establishes' for habitual actions. Use 'large number of parks' and plural 'parks'. Simplify 'younger people as well as the older people' to 'young and old people' and drop 'the' before 'quality time'. Suggestion: Match number (singular/plural), use correct quantifier forms ('lots of', 'a large number of'), and keep tense consistent.

× Yeah, I I'm planning to visit a park beside my city.

✓ Yes, I'm planning to visit a park near my city.

Use 'near my city' or 'just outside my city' rather than 'beside my city'. 'Yeah, I I'm' has a repetition and informality; use 'Yes, I'm'. Suggestion: Avoid repetitions and prefer standard prepositions like 'near' or 'outside'.

× I heard that the park is very big and it's provide excellent environment for the people.

✓ I heard that the park is very big and it provides an excellent environment for people.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it' requires 'provides'. Add the indefinite article 'an' before 'excellent environment'. 'For the people' is better as 'for people' in general statements. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and articles with countable nouns where needed.

× So I along with my friends planning to visit very soon and try and enjoying the beauty of the park.

✓ So my friends and I are planning to visit very soon and try to enjoy the beauty of the park.

Word order and verb forms are incorrect. Use subject 'my friends and I' and the progressive 'are planning'. Use 'try to enjoy' rather than 'try and enjoying'. Suggestion: Use correct subject order, auxiliary verbs for progressive forms, and 'try to + base verb' structure.