Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Focus on correct grammar, clear topic sentence, and coherent supporting details. Start with a direct answer (e.g., 'Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.'), use past tense consistently, and avoid unclear phrases like 'Box' and 'On daily basis they will.' Add one or two specific details (who you went with, activities) linked with simple connectors (because, so, and).

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I usually went in the evenings with my grandparents because they liked walking there, and I met my old school friends to play games. We always agreed on a regular time to meet, so it became part of my routine.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and tidy up grammar. Use present simple for current habits and complete your description of why you feel relaxed. Use linking words like 'but' or 'or' correctly and avoid unfinished clauses. Provide one specific example of activities you do there.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks now. At weekends I often visit a park with a close friend to walk and chat, but sometimes I go with my grandparents because the peaceful atmosphere helps me relax and forget stress.

Sugerencia: Begin with a direct answer and give specific reasons. Use clear tense and structure: say 'Yes, I would like more parks' followed by two or three concise reasons using linking words such as 'because' and 'so'. Avoid vague statements like 'lot of development in the park still now.'

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide spaces for exercise, relaxation, and socializing. For example, new parks could encourage people to walk or jog, reduce stress, and give friends a place to meet.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer and add specific details about what attracts you to that park. Correct phrasing (e.g., 'I want to visit a park called...') and give examples of activities or features you expect there. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to visit a park called Beautiful Lake in Hoshiarpur, Punjab. My friend told me it has a large lake, walking paths, and playgrounds, so I hope to go there to enjoy boating and relax by the water.

× Box are my favorite place when I was child and at evening usually I prefer to go with my grandparents.

✓ Parks were my favorite places when I was a child and in the evening I usually preferred to go with my grandparents.

The sentence has plural/singular mismatches and article/timing issues. 'Box' seems intended to be 'parks' (plural) and must agree with 'places' (plural). 'When I was child' requires the article 'a child'. 'At evening' should be 'in the evening'. Tense consistency: the question asks about childhood, so past tense 'were' and 'preferred' are appropriate. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('parks' and 'places'), include articles ('a child'), correct preposition ('in the evening'), and keep past tense for childhood activities.

× There I met with my old school friends, we had set a time for the park.

✓ There I met my old school friends; we had arranged a time to meet at the park.

The original contains a run-on comma splice and awkward verb choice. Use a semicolon or split into two sentences to fix the run-on. 'Set a time for the park' is unnatural; 'arranged a time to meet at the park' is clearer. Maintain past perfect/simple past as appropriate ('had arranged' or 'arranged') for past habitual actions.

× On daily basis they will.

✓ On a daily basis they would come.

The fragment lacks a main verb and has incorrect tense/modal use. 'On a daily basis' needs a complete clause. For past habitual actions use 'would' or 'used to'. Adding 'come' (or the intended verb) completes the sentence: 'On a daily basis they would come.'

× In my leisure time or at weekends I like to visit park with my one of close friend, although sometimes still I prefer to visit with my grandparents as in that place I feel so relaxed and the environment is.

✓ In my leisure time or at weekends I like to visit a park with one of my close friends, although sometimes I still prefer to visit with my grandparents because I feel very relaxed there and the environment is pleasant.

Multiple article and noun number errors: 'visit park' requires an article 'a park'; 'my one of close friend' should be 'one of my close friends' (word order and plural). 'Although sometimes still I prefer' needs natural adverb order: 'sometimes I still prefer'. 'As in that place I feel so relaxed and the environment is.' is incomplete and awkward; use 'because I feel very relaxed there and the environment is pleasant.' This corrects article use, pluralization, word order, and completes the idea.

× Since childhood till now there are lot of development in the park still now and I also would like to see in future new parks as it is a part of daily routine of the people for working, relaxing mind and meeting with the friends.

✓ Since my childhood there has been a lot of development in the parks, and I would like to see new parks in the future because they are part of people's daily routines for working, relaxing, and meeting friends.

'There are lot of development' is wrong: use 'there has been a lot of development' (singular 'a lot' with mass noun 'development' and present perfect 'has been' to show change since childhood). 'Since childhood till now' is better as 'Since my childhood'. 'See in future new parks' should be 'see new parks in the future'. 'For working, relaxing mind and meeting with the friends' needs parallel structure and article fixes: 'part of people's daily routines for working, relaxing, and meeting friends.' This addresses 'there be' usage, tense/aspect, and article/plural issues.

× There is a park called Beautiful Lake which is located in Hushiarpur, Punjab.

✓ There is a park called Beautiful Lake, which is located in Hoshiarpur, Punjab.

The sentence is largely correct for 'there is' use, but the place name spelling was corrected to 'Hoshiarpur'. No grammatical 'there be' error, but attention to proper nouns is necessary. Keep 'There is' for existence of a single park.

× I really want to visit at that park as I heard something very interesting from my friend that the park had lots of thing for enjoyment.

✓ I really want to visit that park because I heard from my friend that the park has lots of things for enjoyment.

Errors include unnecessary preposition 'visit at' (use 'visit that park'), tense mismatch and incorrect past participle usage: 'I heard something very interesting' is acceptable, but 'that the park had lots of thing' should be present tense 'has lots of things' if the features still exist. 'Lots of thing' needs plural 'things'. Use 'because' for reason. Suggest keeping tense consistent and correcting noun pluralization and preposition use.