Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be grammatically correct, give a clear topic sentence, and add one or two concise supporting details. Use past tense for childhood and avoid run-on endings. Also use a linking word to connect reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went there when I felt sad because the quiet surroundings cheered me up, and I liked playing on the swings and running around with other children.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with proper tense and vocabulary, avoid unclear phrases (“called you the park”), and give a specific reason or two linked by a connector. Keep it natural and concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I go regularly to exercise and relax because the fresh air helps me clear my mind, and I sometimes meet friends there for a short walk.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion, use correct subject-verb agreement and articles, and add a concrete benefit with a linking word. Be specific about how parks help people connect.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. More parks would provide safe public spaces where families and neighbours can meet and exercise, which would help build community ties and improve people's well-being.

Sugerencia: Respond with a clear topic sentence naming the park, then add specific reasons linked by a connector. Avoid filler words like “Expand.” Use correct phrasing for facilities and visit intention.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a park in Pokhara sometime. It is known for its beautiful scenery and outdoor gym equipment, so I hope to go there to enjoy the views and try the fitness facilities.

× I do like to go when I was sad, even now I go to the park to exercise and.

✓ I used to like going when I was sad; even now I go to the park to exercise.

Mixes present and past incorrectly. 'I do like to go when I was sad' combines present 'do like' with past 'was'. Use 'used to' or make both clauses present. Also remove dangling 'and'. Suggestion: use 'I used to like going when I was sad; even now I go to the park to exercise.'

× Yeah, I called you the park for exercise and for Time Pass.

✓ Yeah, I come to the park to exercise and to pass the time.

'Called you the park' is incorrect; likely meaning 'come to the park'. 'For Time Pass' is nonstandard; use 'to pass the time'. Use correct verb and preposition: 'come to the park' and infinitive purpose 'to exercise' and 'to pass the time.'

× Well, it will be very nice for all the people if there is more park in my city because it's help to people connect to each other.

✓ Well, it would be very nice for everyone if there were more parks in my city because it would help people connect with each other.

Several issues: conditional sentence requires 'would' + past subjunctive 'were' for hypothetical. 'more park' should be plural 'more parks'. 'it's help' incorrect—use 'would help'. Use 'connect with each other' or 'connect to each other' depending on preference; 'connect with' is more natural.

× There is one park in Pokhara I think I will visit in my life. Expand.

✓ There is one park in Pokhara that I think I will visit in my life.

Missing relative connector 'that' to link clauses. Also 'Expand.' is extraneous. Keep sentence unified: 'There is one park in Pokhara that I think I will visit in my life.'

× It is very beautiful and fully equipped with a different gym equipment.

✓ It is very beautiful and fully equipped with different gym equipment.

'a different gym equipment' is ungrammatical: 'equipment' is uncountable, so do not use 'a' or 'different' with singular. Use 'different gym equipment' or 'various pieces of gym equipment.' Also 'fully equipped with different gym equipment' is clearer.