Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Reduce repetition, correct grammar (past tense and verb forms), and keep answer concise (max 4–5 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "and").

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents because it was a chance to get exercise and play games with neighborhood children, so I made many friends there.

Sugerencia: Fix tense consistency and reduce filler words. Use one clear reason and support it with a specific detail and linking word. Keep sentences fluent and grammatical.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I often feel stressed from work, so visiting a park helps me relax and enjoy nature for half an hour each day.

Sugerencia: Be concise and correct noun phrases (e.g., "parks as an outlet") and reduce hesitation. Provide a specific benefit or example of how more parks would help the city and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would provide extra green space for families to exercise and for children to play, which would improve residents' health and make the city look more attractive.

Sugerencia: Use formal contractions and correct names ("Central Park" not "New York Central Park"). Avoid slang like "wanna" in the test. Give one clear reason and a specific detail about what you want to do there.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit Central Park in New York because I have seen it in many films; I especially want to walk around the lake and see the famous bridges and statues in person.

× Yes, I really enjoy go to the park when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I really enjoyed going to the park when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present-tense verb 'enjoy' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'enjoyed' and the gerund 'going' after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: use past tense for actions completed in childhood and use 'enjoy' + verb-ing (enjoyed going).

× I really enjoy go to the park when I was a child, especially with my parents, and I think it's a great time to stretch my legs and have some exercise.

✓ I really enjoyed going to the park when I was a child, especially with my parents, and I think it was a great time to stretch my legs and get some exercise.

Again, the time frame is past so verbs should be past tense ('enjoyed', 'was'). 'Enjoy' requires a gerund 'going'. Also 'have some exercise' is unnatural; use 'get some exercise'. Use consistent past tense for clarity.

× Plus I can get to know some kids at my age, so it's pretty good.

✓ Plus I got to know some kids my age, so it was pretty good.

The clause refers to past experiences, so 'can get to know' should be changed to past 'got to know'. Also 'kids my age' is standard word order. Maintain past tense for consistency.

× Yes, of course. I still enjoy going to parks these days because, umm, it's I feel pretty pressured when I was at work or at school.

✓ Yes, of course. I still enjoy going to parks these days because I feel pretty stressed when I'm at work or at school.

This sentence mixes tenses and has extra words. For current habits use present tense 'I feel'. Replace 'pretty pressured when I was' with present 'when I'm' or 'when I am'. 'Pressured' is less natural here; 'stressed' fits better. Also remove redundant 'it's'.

× So I think going to park is like an outlet to me.

✓ So I think going to the park is like an outlet for me.

Missing article 'the' before 'park' (article error) and incorrect preposition 'to me' — 'for me' is idiomatic. Structure should be 'going to the park is an outlet for me'.

× I have time to see the green.

✓ I have time to see the greenery.

'The green' is nonstandard here; use 'greenery' or 'the green spaces'. Also if speaking generally, 'I get to enjoy the greenery' or 'I have time to see the green spaces' is clearer.

× I like to see more parks emerge in my city because, uh, like I said before, I really enjoy park as a outlet and uh, having more parks me means having more greenery and open space in my city.

✓ I would like to see more parks established in my city because, as I said before, I really enjoy parks as an outlet, and having more parks means more greenery and open space in my city.

Multiple issues: 'I like to see' is awkward for future desire—use 'I would like to see'. 'Parks emerge' is odd; 'parks established' or 'more parks' is better. 'I really enjoy park as a outlet' needs plural 'parks' and 'an outlet' with article. Remove extraneous 'me'. Maintain consistent grammar and word order.

× Yes, of course I the park I wanna go may be the New York Central Park because I have seen the Central Park in many TV series so I'm really looking forward to seeing it in person and enjoy the great scenery.

✓ Yes, of course. The park I want to go to may be New York's Central Park because I have seen Central Park in many TV series, so I'm really looking forward to seeing it in person and enjoying the great scenery.

Many errors: missing punctuation and articles. Use 'The park I want to go to' and 'New York's Central Park' or 'Central Park in New York'. Avoid informal 'wanna'—use 'want to'. Use gerund 'enjoying' after 'looking forward to'. Remove redundant 'the' before 'Central Park' in some contexts. Ensure correct possessive or name form and verb forms.