Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời rõ ràng và thân mật nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp (thì), chính tả và tính chính xác của từ vựng. Nên trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó dùng 1–2 câu bổ sung với chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ hoạt động, cảm xúc) và dùng liên từ hợp lý. Tránh lỗi như “buy” thay vì “bought” và bổ sung mệnh đề thời gian/miêu tả để câu tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my dad and sisters, and we would buy ice cream and sit together, chatting for hours. Those visits made me feel relaxed and happy because we spent quality time outdoors.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng tốt và cụ thể, nhưng cấu trúc hơi lặp và có vài lựa chọn từ chưa tự nhiên (ví dụ “find my true self” hơi chung chung). Nên mở đầu bằng câu khẳng định rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và thay đổi từ vựng để cụ thể hơn (ví dụ “unwind” thay cho “calm my nerves”). Giữ tổng số câu 2–3 để tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I often spend my spare time there listening to music or reading, which helps me unwind and clear my mind. Sometimes I simply sit and watch people, which feels very peaceful.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có lỗi chính tả (“pars” → “parks”) và lặp từ (“and the trees and the atmosphere”). Nên đưa ra thêm lý do cụ thể hoặc ví dụ lợi ích (ví dụ: không gian cho gia đình, thể dục), sử dụng liên từ để mạch lạc và thay đổi từ vựng để tránh lặp lại.

Ejemplo: Definitely. I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide clean air and green space for families. For example, new parks could offer playgrounds and walking paths for exercise and relaxation.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng cụ thể nhưng ngữ pháp và trật tự từ còn yếu (ví dụ thiếu chia động từ: “while enjoy” → “while enjoying”; câu cuối lủng củng “Told them about it”). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rồi mô tả 2–3 hoạt động bạn muốn làm, dùng dạng -ing sau "while" và tránh câu ngắn rời rạc. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (mùa lá phong, ví dụ) sẽ làm câu sống động hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit a maple park in Canada, especially in autumn when the leaves turn red. I imagine sitting there listening to music, taking photos of the colourful trees and chatting with my friends while we enjoy the scenery.

× We always buy ice creams and sit there talking with each other.

✓ We always bought ice creams and sat there talking with each other.

The context is past habitual action ('as a child, I always went'), so the verbs should be in the past tense to match. Use 'bought' and 'sat' to maintain consistent past narrative. Suggestion: when describing past routines, use past simple for all verbs describing that routine.

× I'd love to spend my spare time sitting at the park, listening to music and reading some books.

✓ I'd love to spend my spare time sitting in the park, listening to music and reading books.

Preposition and article choice: 'sit in the park' is more natural than 'sit at the park' when referring to being inside the park. Also 'reading some books' is acceptable but 'reading books' is more idiomatic here. Suggestion: use 'in the park' for location and omit unnecessary quantifiers.

× I also want to spend that time to calm my nerves and find my true self.

✓ I also want to use that time to calm my nerves and find my true self.

After 'want', the correct structure is 'want to do something' or 'want to use time to do something.' 'Spend time to' is unidiomatic in English; use 'use that time to' or 'spend that time calming my nerves.' Suggestion: replace 'spend that time to' with 'use that time to' or 'spend that time calming.'

× Definitely, I would like to see more pars in my city because I want to enjoy the fresh air and the trees and the atmosphere around me.

✓ Definitely, I would like to see more parks in my city because I want to enjoy the fresh air, the trees, and the atmosphere around me.

The word 'pars' is a typo for 'parks' (plural). Also add a comma for list clarity. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'parks' and use commas between list items.

× There are a lot of maples and I would like to sit at the park listening to music while enjoy the landscape around me, taking photos and chatting with my friends.

✓ There are a lot of maples and I would like to sit in the park, listening to music while enjoying the landscape around me, taking photos and chatting with my friends.

After 'while' a verb should be in the -ing form ('enjoying'), not base form ('enjoy'). Also 'sit in the park' is more natural than 'sit at the park.' Suggestion: use 'while enjoying' and 'in the park.'

× Told them about it.

✓ I told them about it.

This fragment lacks a subject and is therefore ungrammatical as a standalone sentence. Add the subject 'I' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: always include the subject in English sentences unless context allows ellipsis; here add 'I'.