Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Детальніше структуруйте відповідь: почніть з короткої прямої відповіді, потім дайте одне або два конкретні пояснення з прикладом. Уникайте граматичних помилок (наприклад, "parks that have" → "parks that had") та скорочуйте надмірні фрази, щоб триматися в межах 3–4 речень.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I preferred parks that had activities like trampolines and playgrounds because I liked active play more than long walks. For example, my favorite park had a big trampoline area where I spent hours with friends.

Sugerencia: Покращуйте чіткість і виправляйте помилки вимови/слововживання та граматики (наприклад, "parts" → "parks", "views changing" → "the views change"). Почніть з прямої відповіді, потім наведіть одну причину, використовуючи зв'язку (наприклад, "because").

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I prefer walking along streets. I find streets more interesting because the views change constantly and there are more shops and cafés to explore.

Sugerencia: Дайте пряму відповідь однією реченням, потім поясніть причину з прикладом; уникайте розірваних фраз і непотрібних пауз ("Uh"). Також замініть розмовні вирази на більш формальніші формулювання (наприклад, "not my cup of tea" можна зберегти, але пояснити причину).

Ejemplo: Not really — I wouldn't want more ordinary neighbourhood parks unless they offered something special. For example, I would visit new parks if they had amusement rides or rotating exhibitions that make them unique.

Sugerencia: Зформулюйте відповідь коротко і граматично правильно, уникайте узагальнень без підстав (наприклад, "every kids all around the world"). Додайте одну-дві деталі, чому це важливо для вас, та приклад плану поїздки.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Disneyland one day because it has been my dream since childhood. I want to go for the rides and parades, and I hope to visit it next year when I can take a longer holiday.

× Yes, I did like walking in parks when I was a child, but I preferred parks that have some kind of activities like trampolines or playgrounds because I was not into walking a lot.

✓ Yes, I liked walking in parks when I was a child, but I preferred parks that had some kinds of activities like trampolines or playgrounds because I was not into walking a lot.

The auxiliary 'did' with 'like' is unnecessary in a positive past-tense statement; use the simple past 'liked'. 'Have' should match the past timeframe, so use 'had'. 'Some kind of activities' is better as 'some kinds of activities' or 'some kind of activity' for agreement. Suggestion: use simple past consistently for past events: 'I liked... parks that had...'.

× I don't mind going to parts now, I can say that I enjoy it.

✓ I don't mind going to parks now; I can say that I enjoy it.

The word 'parts' is a typographical error for 'parks'. Also the comma splice should be fixed; use a semicolon or separate sentences. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'parks' and join clauses properly: 'I don't mind going to parks now; I can say that I enjoy it.'

× Uh, I prefer walking on the street where the views changing all the time, so it is more interesting for me.

✓ Uh, I prefer walking on the street where the views change all the time, so it is more interesting for me.

When describing a habitual or general situation in the present, use the simple present 'change' rather than present participle 'changing'. 'The views changing' lacks the correct verb form. Suggestion: use 'views change' to express regular or repeated action.

× I don't really like the idea of exploring all of the parks in my city, unless it's some kind of amusement parks or with some interesting exhibitions.

✓ I don't really like the idea of exploring all of the parks in my city, unless they are some kind of amusement park or have some interesting exhibitions.

The clause after 'unless' should agree in number with 'parks'. Use 'they are' for plural reference or change 'amusement parks' to singular 'an amusement park'. Also 'with some interesting exhibitions' is awkward; use 'have some interesting exhibitions'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel structure: 'unless they are some kind of amusement park or have some interesting exhibitions.'

× I would really like to visit Disneyland once because it was my dream since childhood and I think that every kids all around the world has ever dreamed of visiting Disneyland because it's really fun.

✓ I would really like to visit Disneyland once because it has been my dream since childhood, and I think that kids all around the world have dreamed of visiting Disneyland because it's really fun.

Use present perfect 'has been' to link a past desire to the present. 'Every kids' is incorrect: use 'kids' or 'every kid' (singular) and adjust verb accordingly. 'Has ever dreamed' is awkward; simple present perfect 'have dreamed' is better. Suggestion: use 'has been my dream since childhood' and 'kids all around the world have dreamed'.