Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần sửa ngữ pháp cơ bản và cấu trúc câu để trả lời rõ ràng hơn; tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi đưa vào 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ địa điểm, hoạt động, thời điểm) để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Chú ý thì quá khứ khi nói về hồi nhỏ và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (fresh air, relax, play, walk).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often visited the small park near my home with my friends, where we played on swings and had picnics. The trees and open space made it a perfect place to breathe fresh air and relax after school.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng thì hiện tại đúng và tránh nói lắp; giảm từ thừa và sửa lỗi từ vựng (dusty street, unwind). Dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (exercise, read, meet friends) và kết hợp liên từ để mạch lạc. Hạn chế tiếng đệm như 'uh' và hoàn thành câu ý nghĩa (e.g. after work).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go there to escape the noisy, dusty streets of the city and to unwind after a long day at work. Often I meet friends for a walk or read a book under the trees.

Sugerencia: Cần diễn đạt ý rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (sức khỏe, không gian cho trẻ em, người già). Sửa ngữ pháp (have more parks, benefit elderly) và tránh lặp từ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích cho các nhóm người để nội dung súc tích và thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. More parks would provide clean air and safe spaces for children to play and for elderly people to exercise and socialise. For example, a neighbourhood park with benches and walking paths would encourage daily walks.

Sugerencia: Cần trả lời cụ thể thay vì nói chung chung. Nêu một hoặc hai công viên cụ thể hoặc loại công viên bạn muốn đến (national park, botanical garden) và lí do rõ ràng (scenic views, hiking, photography). Dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh tiếng đệm và lặp từ; giới hạn 2–3 câu bổ trợ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the national parks in my country in the future. For example, I want to go to the coastal national park to enjoy scenic views and fresh sea air, and also to a botanical garden to see different plants and take photographs.

× Yes, I like going to the park but don't as a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park as a child.

The speaker is referring to childhood (past), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'liked' not 'like' to match time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for habits in the past, e.g., 'I liked going to the park as a child.'

× I will go to the park to to break in the the fresh air and feel comfortable.

✓ I would go to the park to breathe in the fresh air and feel comfortable.

Repeats ('to to', 'the the') and incorrect verb 'break' instead of 'breathe' create sentence structure and word choice errors. Also tense/intent should match past habit (would) or past simple. Suggestion: remove duplicates, use 'breathe in' for fresh air and choose appropriate tense: 'I would go' or 'I went.'

× Feel comfortable to relax after working a long time.

✓ I felt comfortable and relaxed after working for a long time.

Fragment without subject/verb and wrong infinitive form. Convert to a full sentence with past tense 'felt' and 'relaxed' and include 'for' before duration. Suggestion: always include subject and main verb and use 'for a long time' to express duration.

× I often go to the park with my friends and it feels good.

✓ I often went to the park with my friends and it felt good.

Question asked about childhood, so actions should be past habitual. Use past simple 'went' and 'felt' to match timeframe. Suggestion: use past tense for habits in the past.

× Yes, I feel fascinated when I'm going to the park and when I go to the park, I can avoid the dusty, the dusty St. in the city.

✓ Yes, I felt fascinated when I went to the park, and when I went there I could avoid the dusty streets in the city.

Mixes present and past; question asks about now (Do you still like...), but sentence refers to experience in general — choose consistent tense. Also 'dusty St.' is awkward; use 'dusty streets.' Use past or present consistently. Suggestion: for general feelings now use present simple, e.g., 'I feel fascinated when I go to the park.' or for past use past tense.

× Uh, I always go to the park with my friends to wrap in the fresh air, uh, to relax and after a long time working at the.

✓ I always go to the park with my friends to breathe in the fresh air, to relax after working for a long time.

Wrong verb 'wrap' and incomplete ending 'working at the.' Use 'breathe in' and 'after working for a long time.' Preposition 'for' is needed to indicate duration. Suggestion: use 'breathe in the fresh air' and 'after working for a long time.'

× Yes, I think it's a good idea to happen have the more past in my country, my country, because I think in the park has many trees and fresh fresh dimension to the the old people, especially for the hmm.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good idea to have more parks in my country because parks have many trees and fresh air, which is beneficial for older people.

Many issues: 'have the more past' incorrect word choice; 'fresh fresh dimension' repeated and unclear. Use 'more parks' as correct quantifier and 'fresh air' as phrase. Also clarify benefit 'beneficial for older people.' Suggestion: simplify and use correct nouns and quantifiers: 'have more parks' and avoid repetition.

× Yes, I want to go to all the park in my country because I can, uh, enjoy the moment and the, the air in that and the people there are friendly or, or enjoyable.

✓ Yes, I want to go to all the parks in my country because I can enjoy the moments and the air there, and the people are friendly and pleasant.

'all the park' should be plural 'all the parks.' 'enjoy the moment' could be plural 'moments' depending on intent. 'enjoyable' describes activities; use 'pleasant' for people. Suggestion: match plurality of noun and choose appropriate adjectives.

× I think it is good idea to have time to.

✓ I think it is a good idea to have time to relax there.

Incomplete sentence missing object/complement. Add 'a' before 'good idea' and specify purpose 'to relax there.' Suggestion: complete the thought and include article 'a' and an infinitive phrase showing purpose.