Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, kurangi pengisi (uh, umm) dan tambahkan detail spesifik. Misalnya jelaskan aktivitas yang kamu lakukan di taman dan alasan mengapa itu membuatmu bahagia. Latihan pengucapan dan jeda akan membantu mengurangi pengisi bicara.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because I could explore nature and play games. For example, I often climbed trees and chased my friends, which made me feel free and happy.

Sugerencia: Berikan jawaban langsung lalu tambahkan rincian kapan dan mengapa kamu pergi ke taman. Hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu dan gunakan kata hubung untuk kejelasan.

Ejemplo: I still enjoy going to parks occasionally, especially during holidays or weekends. I usually visit to relax, exercise, or have a picnic with friends.

Sugerencia: Jawab langsung lalu berikan alasan dan contoh spesifik tentang mengapa kota membutuhkan lebih banyak taman. Gunakan struktur kalimat yang lebih tepat dan kosakata yang relevan.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for recreation and improve air quality. For instance, new parks could offer playgrounds and walking paths for families.

Sugerencia: Berikan jawaban pasti atau jelaskan kondisi yang membuatmu ingin pergi ke taman. Tambahkan contoh konkret tentang jenis taman yang menarik bagimu untuk menunjukkan kemampuan berbicara yang lebih baik.

Ejemplo: I'm not sure about a specific park, but I would like to visit a botanical garden or a large city park in the future because I'm interested in seeing different plants and peaceful walking areas.

× Yes of course I I like going to the park because uh, I can explore then I feel happy uh, I see umm much umm, people uh, can umm.

✓ Yes, of course I liked going to parks because I could explore and I felt happy when I saw many people.

The speaker is talking about childhood (past), so present tense verbs like 'like', 'can', 'feel', 'see' should be changed to past tense ('liked', 'could', 'felt', 'saw'). Also 'the park' is changed to 'parks' to match general childhood visits and 'much people' is incorrect; use 'many people'. Combine fragments into clearer sentences.

× Umm MMM sometimes, sometimes, sometimes I like go to parks, uh, when I umm, holiday or after.

✓ Sometimes I like going to parks, for example during holidays or afterwards.

After 'like' the gerund form 'going' is required rather than the base verb 'go'. 'When I holiday' is incorrect; use 'during holidays' or 'on holidays'. 'Afterwards' fits better than 'after' here.

× Yeah, of course I like city more parks, but I think in my city there are two parks.

✓ Yes, of course I would like more parks in my city, but I think there are only two parks.

Original sentence has incorrect word order and missing articles. Use 'would like more parks' to express desire and 'in my city' at the end is fine; include 'only' to reflect limitation. Also 'city more parks' is ungrammatical; restructure the sentence.

× I don't know, uh. Umm, I think if there are I, I want to go.

✓ I don't know. If there are any, I would like to go.

Use conditional phrasing: 'If there are any' (parks) and 'I would like to go' expresses a future intention politely. Original mixes present and incomplete clauses and has awkward word order.