Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense forms (use past simple: I loved).

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I especially enjoyed looking at the colourful flowers and playing on the slides, because those activities made me feel happy and playful.

Sugerencia: Use correct prepositions and verb forms, and organize ideas with linking words. Give one or two concrete reasons and mention frequency. Reduce hesitations and unnecessary fillers (uh, um).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they make me feel refreshed. For example, I usually go jogging there three times a week, and sometimes I meet friends to chat on weekends.

Sugerencia: Give a direct opinion then explain reasons clearly using linking words. Avoid vague or repeated fragments and address grammar (plural/singular, request vs recommend). Mention specific benefits of more parks to strengthen your answer.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe play spaces for children and improve air quality. For instance, more local parks would encourage families to spend time outdoors and help reduce pollution in our neighbourhoods.

Sugerencia: Be specific about which park or type of park you want to visit and explain why with clear grammar. Use linking words to add one supporting detail and avoid vague statements like “any park.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a botanical garden or a national park in the future because I enjoy discovering different plants and landscapes. For example, visiting a large botanical garden would let me see rare species and learn more about local flora.

× Yes I love love to go park when I was child and during my child I love to see flowers and I love to play on a slides and make nurturing mood.

✓ Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. During my childhood I loved seeing flowers and playing on the slides; it made me feel nurturing.

This sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly and has article and plural errors. Use past tense 'loved' for a past habit (tenses). Use 'parks' plural and 'a child' with the article. 'During my childhood' is the correct noun form. 'Playing on the slides' uses the gerund after 'loved' and correct plural. 'Made me feel' is past tense to match 'loved'. Suggestions: keep past tense consistent for childhood descriptions, use articles ('a child') and correct noun forms ('childhood', 'slides').

× Yes, I really like to go on parks because it feels it, it make me feel uh, fresh and uh, generally I will go on a park for jog and sometimes to meet my friends and chat with her. So yeah, thanks.

✓ Yes, I really like going to parks because they make me feel fresh. Generally I go to a park to jog and sometimes to meet my friends and chat with them.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and agreement. Use the gerund 'going' after 'like' for habitual actions. 'Parks' requires plural agreement so use 'they make'. 'It feels it, it make' is wrong—use 'they make me feel'. 'I will go on a park for jog' has wrong preposition and article: use 'go to a park to jog'. 'Chat with her' mismatches pronoun; use 'them' for plural 'friends'. Suggestions: use 'going' after 'like', ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct prepositions ('go to'), and match pronouns to their antecedents.

× Yes, I definitely recommend the government please make uh more and more parks in my near hometown because the children's wants to play uh, in parks. Uh, because uh, my uh, because where I am generally.

✓ Yes, I would definitely ask the government to build more parks near my hometown because children want to play in parks where I live.

The original misuses 'recommend the government please make' and has modal/request phrasing issues. Use 'would ask' or 'would recommend that the government build' followed by the base verb. 'Children's wants' is incorrect possessive and number agreement; use 'children want'. 'Near my hometown' is correct prepositional phrase; 'where I live' clarifies location. Suggestions: use appropriate modal/request structures ('ask the government to...', 'recommend that... build'), avoid unnecessary fillers, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, definitely. I would go in the future to any park because I feel refreshed and seeing more things which I not seen ever in my current life. So yeah, thanks.

✓ Yes, definitely. I will go to parks in the future because they refresh me and let me see things I have not seen before in my life.

Problems include tense inconsistency and incorrect verb forms. Use future 'will' for future plans. 'I feel refreshed' should be present-tense general effect, but better to say 'they refresh me'. 'Seeing more things which I not seen ever' mixes '-ing' and past participle incorrectly; use 'see things I have not seen before' (present perfect) to indicate experience up to now. Also use plural 'parks' and correct word order. Suggestions: use 'will' for future intent, use present perfect for experiences ('have not seen'), and avoid mixing gerund and past participle incorrectly.