Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatical, concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, avoid hesitation sounds, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if adding more than one detail.

Ejemplo: Yes. I liked going to the park as a child. I often went there with my parents and friends because it was close to our house, and we used to play on the swings and have picnics on weekends.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain the reason clearly with one concise supporting detail and avoid repetition and filler words. Use present simple for habits and a clear connector for reason (because/so).

Ejemplo: Not really. I rarely go to parks now because I have a busy schedule and I also need to focus on my health. However, my husband and I sometimes walk in a nearby green area at weekends.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid many fillers. Give a clear opinion and one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, so, therefore). Mention a concrete benefit of more parks to make the answer specific.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. I think the city needs more parks because many areas are densely built and green space is limited, so parks would help reduce heat in summer and give people places to relax.

Sugerencia: Make the answer specific and grammatical. State which park or type of park you want to visit and why, using a clear reason and a brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes. I plan to visit a large dog-friendly park near my neighborhood because I have a dog and want a safe place where he can run and socialize with other dogs.

× Yes, when I was child I often go to parks with my friends and my parents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I often went to parks with my friends and my parents.

Missing article 'a' before singular noun 'child' (singular/plural and article). Also tense consistency: question asks about childhood (past), so 'go' should be past 'went'. Suggestion: add 'a' and change 'go' to 'went'.

× Uh, there was a park close to my house.

✓ Uh, there was a park close to my house.

Sentence is correct in tense and structure; no change needed. Included for completeness but no correction required.

× Actually I rarely go to park, but my husband and I, I rarely go to parks because of healthy.

✓ Actually, I rarely go to the park, and my husband and I rarely go to parks because of health.

'Go to park' requires the definite article 'the' for a specific place type: 'go to the park' or plural 'parks'. The original also repeats subject awkwardly; remove repeated 'I'. 'Because of healthy' is incorrect collocation: use the noun 'health'. Suggestion: use 'the park' or 'parks' consistently and replace 'healthy' with 'health'.

× Actually, uh, yes, uh, because, uh, there are uh, a lot of buildings in the city and, uh, the weather is very hot in summer because of, uh, many buildings, uh.

✓ Actually, yes, because there are a lot of buildings in the city, the weather is very hot in summer.

Sentence contains many filler words and redundant phrases causing poor sentence structure. Remove fillers 'uh' and redundant clause 'because of, uh, many buildings' which repeats the idea. Combine clauses: 'because there are a lot of buildings' explains why 'the weather is very hot'. This improves clarity and fluency.

× Yes. Yes, I would go. I would like to go to park in the future because I have a dog and I often visited a lot of.

✓ Yes, I would like to go to the park in the future because I have a dog and I often visit parks.

Use future/conditional appropriately: 'I would like to' is fine. 'Go to park' requires 'the park'. The clause 'I often visited a lot of' mixes past tense 'visited' with unclear object; change to present habitual 'I often visit parks' to explain current habit and reason for wanting to go in future. Ensure nouns are explicit ('parks').