Part 1
Examinador
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Candidato
Did you like going to parks as your child?
Examinador
Do you still like going to parks now?
Candidato
Do you still not going to parks now?
Examinador
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Candidato
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Examinador
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Candidato
As in any park you want to go to in the future.
Did you like going to parks as a child?
Puntuación: 35.0Sugerencia: 你的回答没有真正回答问题,而是以错误的方式重复了考官的问题。需要学会直接用第一人称回答(I / Yes / No),并补充一两句具体细节。保持简短(不超过5句),使用连接词来组织内容。比如先给出主题句,然后用原因或回忆来支撑。
Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I often went to the local park with my parents to play on the swings and feed the ducks, which made weekends very enjoyable.
Do you still like going to parks now?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 你的回答仍然是重复或错误地改写考官的问题,没有给出个人观点或细节。请直接回答(Yes/No)并说明原因或频率,使用简单的连接词(because、so、but)。保持答案自然且不啰嗦。
Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and great for jogging; I usually visit one or two times a week.
Would you like to see more parks in your city?
Puntuación: 30.0Sugerencia: 你又一次只是重复了问题,未提供任何个人意见或理由。应直接表达愿望(Yes/No/I think)并给出具体原因或期望(比如位置、设施或用途),并用连接词让句子更连贯。
Ejemplo: Yes, I would, because more parks in residential areas would give people easy access to green space for exercise and relaxation.
Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?
Puntuación: 28.0Sugerencia: 你的回答仍是对问题的重复或疑问式转述,没有提供明确的计划或偏好。应直接说出想去的公园(或类型)并给出原因或时间安排,使用连接词(for example、because、so)使回答更具体。
Ejemplo: I would like to visit the botanical garden next spring because it has rare plants and a large greenhouse that I’ve wanted to see.
× Did you like going to parks as your child?
✓ Did you like going to parks as a child?
原句中使用了不正确的物主代词“your child”。考官的问题是在问“作为一个孩子时你是否喜欢去公园?”,应使用短语“as a child”表示“作为孩子”。“your child”意为“你的孩子”,与原意不符。建议:用固定表达“as a child”来表示在自己童年时期。
× Do you still not going to parks now?
✓ Do you still go to parks now?
原句在语法结构上混用了助动词“do”与现在分词“going”,且插入否定“not”位置不当,导致句子不合格。考官原问“你现在还喜欢去公园吗?”,学生想表达肯定或疑问应使用一般现在时:Do you still go to parks now? 如果要表达否定应写:You don't go to parks now, do you? 建议:在一般现在时的疑问句中用“do/does + 主语 + 动词原形”,不要和动名词连用,也要把否定放在助动词后(if needed)。
× Would you like to see more parks in your city?
✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?
该回答与考官问题重复,句子语法正确但作为回答不合适。如果想回答可说:Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.(想要更多公园)或 No, I think there are enough parks.(不需要)建议:在回答时用完整句子并与问题语气一致。
× As in any park you want to go to in the future.
✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future? 或 Yes, there are some parks I want to go to in the future.
原句结构不完整,缺少谓语,像是片段而不是完整回答。考官的问题是“未来有没有想去的公园?”,学生应回答完整句:当反问重复问题时可用疑问句形式“Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?”,或陈述回答如“Yes, I want to visit the botanical garden in the future.” 建议:确保句子包含主语和谓语,回答完整。