Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Clarify tense and sentence structure, reduce repetition, and give one clear reason with a brief supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and limit to 2–3 concise sentences. For example, start with a topic sentence (Yes, I liked going to parks as a child.) then add a brief supporting detail (I usually went with my mother on weekends because it was a pleasant family routine.).

Ejemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often went with my mother on weekends because we enjoyed walking and she liked to teach me about plants.

Sugerencia: Use present simple for habits and be concise. State your current feeling, give a reason, and explain the limitation briefly. Avoid filler words and repeat forms. Try: topic sentence (Yes, I still like going to parks.) + supporting detail (They help me relax) + constraint (but I rarely visit because I’m busy with work/studies).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks because they help me relax. However, I rarely visit now because I am busy with work and have little free time.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then provide a specific reason and a short consequence. Correct word choice and reduce hesitation. Use linking words like because and so to organize ideas. For example: (Yes, I would like more parks in my city because current parks are far from my home, so I have to drive to visit them.).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the existing ones are far from my neighborhood, so I often have to drive rather than walk to enjoy them.

Sugerencia: Name the park, give 2–3 specific activities and one reason why you want to visit. Use correct grammar (it has / there are) and complete the final phrase. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like for example or such as.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit Solomon Penny Park because it has many activities. For example, there are dance classes, walking trails and outdoor learning events, so it seems like a fun place to spend a weekend.

× Yes, I like go going to park when I was a child because in the weekend I I I have to wait by butter for is that he's learning.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child because on weekends I had to wait by the barber while he was learning.

Issues: incorrect tense and verb forms. 'like go going' should be 'liked going' to match past-time reference 'when I was a child' (present -> past). 'to park' needs the article 'the park'. 'in the weekend' should be 'on weekends' for habitual past actions. 'I have to wait by butter for is that he's learning' is ungrammatical and likely intended 'I had to wait by the barber while he was learning' — use past simple 'had to' and past continuous 'was learning' to describe an action in progress. Suggestion: choose consistent past tense for childhood habits and use correct preposition 'on' with 'weekends' and correct nouns and word order.

× I went to park with my mother.

✓ I went to the park with my mother.

Missing definite article. 'park' referring to a specific place requires 'the park'. Also verb tense 'went' is correct for past. Suggestion: include 'the' before place nouns when referring to a specific location.

× Yes, I want to. I want to go to park because it's it made me relax, but now I don't have time.

✓ Yes, I want to. I want to go to the park because it makes me relax, but now I don't have time.

Mixed tenses and article omission. 'go to park' needs 'the park'. 'it's it made me relax' mixes present and past; use present simple 'it makes me relaxed' or better 'it makes me relax' to express general effect. Maintain present tense for current desire. Suggestion: keep present simple for general truths and include 'the'.

× Yes, I like to see more park because now the park is so far from where I, where I live and where I but uh, if I, when I, I want you to park, I, I have to use my car and.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks because the park is far from where I live, so if I want to go to a park I have to use my car.

Errors: article and plural usage. 'see more park' should be 'see more parks' (plural) to mean additional parks. Redundant phrases removed and sentence restructured for clarity. 'the park is so far from where I live' is fine with 'the'. 'if I want to go to a park' uses indefinite article 'a' for a non-specific park. Suggestion: use plural when talking about more of something and structure conditional sentences simply.

× I want to go to Solomon Penny Park because it have many activities to do, for example dancing, walking, learning and sitting on the.

✓ I want to go to Solomon-Penny Park because it has many activities to do, for example dancing, walking, learning, and sitting.

Subject-verb agreement and sentence ending. 'it have' should be 'it has' (third person singular present). Removed trailing 'on the' which is incomplete. Added comma before last item in list for clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and complete list items; use hyphenation if park name includes hyphen.