Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and shorter sentences, and add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect pronouns/articles.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. For example, I often sat on wooden benches while my parents walked, and I watched people jogging or doing yoga. Also, I used to play cricket with neighborhood children in the open field.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and a brief example. Use simple correct grammar and avoid repeating the same phrase.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, especially in the morning because the air is fresh and peaceful. For instance, I go jogging there three times a week and often meet coworkers who walk their dogs.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, combine short related ideas using linking words, and provide a specific reason or example. Correct article use and phrasing (e.g., “a fresh atmosphere” → “a fresher environment”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide a healthier environment. For example, additional parks would give people more places to exercise in the mornings and relax with their families in the evenings.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer (Yes/No) with a clear reason, correct word choice, and concise supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid unclear phrases like “pitch it” or repeated words.

Ejemplo: No, I don't have a specific park I want to visit because there is a small garden at my house where I relax. Besides, there is a public park five minutes from my workplace, so I can go there whenever I want.

× As I like to go in the parks because in the parks I need our seats very much and in the morning time the people goes for the jogging, some people's doing yoga and some child's playing games like cricket, football, soccer and I love the park very much.

✓ I liked going to parks because I needed a place to sit, and in the morning people go jogging; some people do yoga and some children play games like cricket, football, and soccer, and I loved the park very much.

Errors: incorrect prepositions ('go in the parks' -> 'going to parks'), wrong possessive and plural forms ('people's doing' -> 'people do'; 'child's playing' -> 'children play'), singular/plural and verb agreement ('the people goes' -> 'people go'), tense inconsistency (mixing present and past). Suggestion: use 'going to' for visiting places, use plural nouns for multiple people/children, use base verb with plural subjects, keep tense consistent (past for childhood memory).

× Yes, I still like to go the park because I love the atmosphere in the morning time. I still go for the jogging in the morning time.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to the park because I love the atmosphere in the morning. I still go jogging in the morning.

Errors: missing preposition 'to' after 'go' ('go the park' -> 'go to the park'); awkward preposition 'for' in 'go for the jogging' -> 'go jogging'; unnecessary phrase 'time' after 'morning'. Suggestion: use 'go to' + place, use 'go jogging' without 'for the', and omit redundant words for natural phrasing.

× As I would like to see much more parks in my city in the future. Because it gives us fresh atmosphere in the morning and evening time. It gives us fresh air as well. It gives us natural moment.

✓ I would like to see many more parks in my city in the future because they give us a fresh atmosphere in the morning and evening. They also provide fresh air and a natural environment.

Errors: incorrect quantifier 'much more parks' -> 'many more parks' for countable nouns; sentence fragments ('As I would...' and 'Because it gives...') should be combined; incorrect singular/plural agreement ('it gives us' -> 'they give us'); awkward phrase 'natural moment' -> 'natural environment'. Suggestion: use 'many' with countable nouns, ensure subject-verb agreement, and combine fragments into complete sentences.

× No, I don't think I have to pitch it much more parks in the future because in my house there is one small garden. I would like to spend much more time in in that garden and from the distance of 5 minutes I have the one park in my company.

✓ No, I don't think I need many more parks in the future because my house has a small garden. I would like to spend more time in that garden, and there is a park near my workplace about five minutes away.

Errors: incorrect verb choice 'have to pitch' (nonsensical) and wrong pronoun 'it' unnecessary; incorrect quantifier 'much more parks' -> 'many more parks'; awkward phrasing 'in my house there is one small garden' -> 'my house has a small garden'; repetition 'in in'; unclear 'from the distance of 5 minutes I have the one park in my company' -> 'there is a park near my workplace about five minutes away'. Suggestion: use 'need' instead of 'have to pitch', use 'many' for countable nouns, remove redundant words, and express location naturally.