Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and add one specific detail to support your answer. Use one linking word if adding a reason. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. They were perfect places to make friends and run around, and I especially enjoyed playing football with other kids on weekends.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence and then a clear, specific reason. Remove hesitations and repeated phrases. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' to connect idea and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Not really. Because I'm busy with my studies and campus work, I rarely have time to visit parks, so I usually spend my free time studying or resting at home.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear opinion, then give a specific reason and one concrete example. Avoid vague phrases and filler. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' correctly and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would provide quiet places to relax and exercise; for example, a small neighborhood park near my home would make it easier for residents to meet and socialize.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then a brief explanation. Avoid repeating the same idea and correct awkward phrasing. If you have no plans, say so clearly and offer a reason or a possibility for the future. Keep it to 2 sentences.

Ejemplo: I don't have plans to visit any specific park at the moment because I don't have much free time. However, if I get a break from studying, I might visit the nearby park since it's peaceful and close by.

× So yes, I was like to, uh, go to the parks when I was young.

✓ So yes, I liked going to parks when I was young.

The student used 'was like to' which is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is a habitual past preference, which requires past tense of 'like' plus gerund: 'liked going'. Use 'going to parks' (no article for plural). Suggestion: use 'liked going to parks' for clear past habit.

× Uh, as of now, I don't like to go to the parks, uh, because, uh, I already got stuck in my studies and all around my work activities of school or campuses.

✓ Right now, I don't like going to parks because I am already tied up with my studies and other school or campus activities.

Use of 'as of now' is okay but wordy; 'don't like to go to the parks' should be 'don't like going to parks' to express general preference. 'I already got stuck' is incorrect tense and phrasing; use present continuous 'I am already tied up' to show ongoing situation. Also use 'other' instead of 'all around my'. Suggestion: say 'I am tied up with my studies and other school activities.'

× So I don't have much time to visit, uh, green space or park, we can say so.

✓ So I don't have much time to visit green spaces or parks.

Singular 'park' after 'green space' is inconsistent; when speaking generally use plural 'green spaces or parks'. 'We can say so' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and remove filler phrases.

× For example, if a new mole parks, uh were introduced near my uh city, so we can go and meet new people and interact with people.

✓ For example, if new small parks were introduced near my city, we could go and meet and interact with new people.

Multiple issues: 'mole parks' seems to be mispronounced 'small parks'. Use plural 'parks' and plural verb 'were introduced' for hypothetical past-style conditional; better to use 'would' or 'could' for possibility. Remove redundant 'so' and duplicate 'meet new people and interact with people' -> 'meet and interact with new people.' Also remove article before 'city' when speaking generally. Suggestion: 'If new small parks were introduced near my city, we could meet and interact with new people.'

× So it was good.

✓ That would be good.

In context the student is speaking about a hypothetical future improvement (introducing parks). Using past 'It was good' is incorrect. Use conditional 'That would be good' to express anticipated positive result. Suggestion: use 'would' for hypothetical outcomes.

× As of now I don't have any future plan to go any particular park or any ground.

✓ At the moment I don't have any plans to go to any particular park or ground.

'Any future plan' is wordy; 'plans' plural is natural. 'To go any particular park' needs 'to go to any particular park.' Use 'at the moment' or 'right now.' Suggestion: 'I don't have any plans to go to any particular park.'

× But nearby my parks are very good and relaxing.

✓ But the parks near me are very nice and relaxing.

Phrase 'nearby my parks' is ungrammatical. Use 'the parks near me' or 'nearby parks.' 'Very good' is acceptable but 'nice' or 'pleasant' is more natural. Suggestion: 'The parks near me are very pleasant and relaxing.'

× So as of now I don't have any assets planned to go to any particular park.

✓ So for now I don't have any plans to go to any particular park.

'Assets planned' is incorrect word choice; use 'plans'. 'As of now' can be 'for now.' Also 'any particular park' is fine but ensure 'plans to go to' includes 'to'. Suggestion: replace 'assets planned' with 'plans'.