Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats the examiner's question and contains a word error (“bath” instead of “parks”), so it doesn’t respond to the prompt. Aim to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences).

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because there were many playgrounds where I could climb and play with friends. For example, my local park had a big slide and swings, so I spent most weekends there with my cousins.

Sugerencia: You repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. Provide a direct response (yes/no or sometimes) and then give specific reasons or examples, linked with words like “because” or “however.” Keep it brief and natural.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. For instance, I often walk there in the mornings to jog and relax.

Sugerencia: Again you echoed the question rather than answering. State your opinion clearly and support it with a specific reason or consequence, using linking phrases such as “so” or “because.” Avoid repetition and keep answers concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe spaces for families. As a result, people would have more places to exercise and children could play outdoors more often.

Sugerencia: You repeated the examiner instead of answering. Name a specific park you want to visit and explain why using linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep it natural and include one or two supporting details.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit Central Park in New York because I’ve seen photos of its lakes and gardens. For example, I want to take a boat ride on the lake and walk through the famous trails.

× Did you like going to bath as a child?

✓ Did you like going to the bath as a child?

The student omitted the definite article 'the' before 'bath'. When referring to a specific place or a general activity like 'going to the bath', English usually requires the definite article. Use 'the bath' or better 'the park' depending on intended meaning. Suggestion: include the appropriate article ('the') before singular countable nouns when referring to a known place.

× Do you still like going to parks now?

✓ Do you still like going to parks now?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the present simple to ask about a habitual preference. No change needed.

× Would you like to see more parks in your in your city?

✓ Would you like to see more parks in your city?

The student repeated the phrase 'in your', creating redundancy. This is a sentence structure error (unnecessary repetition). Remove the duplicated words to make the sentence concise and grammatically correct. Suggestion: read aloud to catch repeated words and delete the extra occurrence.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

✓ Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?

This sentence is grammatically correct. It properly uses 'are there' and the infinitive 'to go to' to ask about future plans. No correction needed.