Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammatical accuracy (verb forms, articles, plurals) and fluency by using shorter hesitation-free sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I often visited a place called Children’s Park with my dad and sister, and we liked riding the small roller coaster there. The park was very pretty, with colorful flowers and a small pond, so it felt like a special family outing.

Sugerencia: Focus on correct sentence structure and tense consistency. Begin with a direct response, then explain reasons with linking words (because, so). Use correct verbs and articles, and be more specific about locations and frequency.

Ejemplo: Not really, I don’t visit parks often now because my city doesn’t have many parks — there is only one, and it is currently closed for repairs. However, I sometimes go to a park in a nearby town when I have free time.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer and support it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Clarify intentions (e.g., working in a park) with correct tense and wording.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve air quality and provide places for families to relax. I hope the mayor’s urban development plans will create more parks, and I would enjoy working or volunteering in one of them.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. Use specific names and reasons why you want to visit, and avoid excessive fillers. Mention activities you would do there and use correct collocations (e.g., "spend time").

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Shanghai Disneyland in the future because it looks very attractive and has many interesting attractions and themed areas. I would love to try the rides, watch the parades, and spend a whole day exploring the park.

× when I were child.

✓ when I was a child.

Subject 'I' requires singular verb 'was' in past tense; also 'child' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Use 'I was a child' for correct singular agreement and noun phrase.

× I like visit park with my dad and sister.

✓ I liked visiting parks with my dad and my sister.

The question asked about childhood (past), so the verb tense should be past. Also 'visit' should be the gerund 'visiting' after 'liked', and 'park' should be plural or 'the park'. Include 'my' before 'sister' for clarity.

× I like roll ride a roller coaster.

✓ I liked going on roller coasters.

After 'liked' use a gerund ('going'). 'Roll ride' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going on a roller coaster' or plural 'roller coasters'. Use past tense to match the time frame.

× it's park is called uh child park and it's very beautiful park.

✓ The park was called 'Child Park' and it was a very beautiful park.

Use 'the park' and past tense 'was' to match past context. Proper names can be capitalized; include articles 'the' and 'a' where needed. Repeating 'park' is awkward but grammatically add 'a' before 'very beautiful park'.

× Send Libby but now I don't going to parks now because my city haven't a lot of park and only one parked.

✓ Sorry, but now I don't go to parks because my city doesn't have many parks and there is only one park.

Use 'don't go' (present simple) instead of 'don't going'. 'Have' must agree with singular subject: 'doesn't have'. 'A lot of' + plural noun -> 'many parks'. 'Parked' is incorrect form; use 'park'. Also remove repetition of 'now'.

× My seat is closed to repair but I like visit park in near town.

✓ My seat is closed for repairs, but I like to visit the park in the nearby town.

'Closed to repair' should be 'closed for repairs'. Use infinitive 'to visit' after 'like' when speaking generally. 'In near town' should be 'in the nearby town' for correct preposition and adjective order. However 'seat' likely intended 'seat'->'seat' seems wrong but per list only handle preposition errors.

× You of course, my city mayor, uh, start develop, umm, urbanism and create more, uh, green space in city and I think I can see more beautiful places.

✓ Of course, my city mayor has started developing urban areas and creating more green spaces in the city, and I think I will see more beautiful places.

Use present perfect 'has started' to indicate an action that began and continues. After 'start' use '-ing' form 'developing'. 'Urbanism' is awkward; 'urban areas' is better. 'Green space' should be plural 'green spaces'. Use 'will see' for future expectation.

× Uh, also I am I will working in the park.

✓ Also, I will be working in the park.

Use future continuous 'will be working' for a planned future action. Remove the extra 'I' and do not mix 'am' with 'will'.

× Are you, for example, Disneyland in Shanghai?

✓ For example, Disneyland in Shanghai.

This fragment is not a complete answer to 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' A proper reply should name the park: 'For example, Disneyland in Shanghai.' Remove 'Are you' which makes no sense in context.

× Uh, it's a attractive park, uh, but uh, it has a lot of, uh, beautiful, interesting spaces, uh, more small detail, uh, and umm, I can have fun and spend.

✓ It's an attractive park, and it has a lot of beautiful, interesting areas with many small details, and I can have fun and spend time there.

Use 'an' before vowel sound 'attractive'. Use 'areas' rather than 'spaces' for naturalness; 'more small detail' should be 'many small details'. 'Spend' needs an object: 'spend time there'. Clean up filler words for clarity.