Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak with correct grammar and clearer vocabulary, keep answers concise (up to 5 sentences), and organize ideas with a clear topic sentence plus specific supporting details. Avoid filler sounds (“uh”) and pronunciation errors (e.g., pork → park). Use linking words (for example, moreover, because) correctly and ensure verbs agree with subjects.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were places to meet other kids and make friends. For example, I often played games on the grass and enjoyed chatting with classmates. Moreover, parks gave me a break from the stresses of school, so they felt relaxing and fun.

Sugerencia: Be careful with pronunciation and tense consistency; say ‘parks’ and use past vs present clearly. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific contrasting details using linking words (however, but, although). Reduce hesitations and correct small grammar issues (I could easily communicate with them).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still like going to parks, but I preferred them as a child. When I was younger, I usually went with friends and could easily socialize; however, now I often walk alone, which is more peaceful but less sociable.

Sugerencia: Use accurate vocabulary and avoid confusing words (“kit to the background”, “parts” instead of parks). Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons with appropriate linking words (for example, because, for instance). Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they benefit everyone, from children to the elderly. For instance, parks provide places for relaxation and exercise, encourage social interaction, and make the city greener and more attractive.

Sugerencia: Improve tense and article use (visited several parks, Miyazaki), correct word choice (stress not straight), and be specific about what you like. Use one clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details with linking words (for example, because, so). Reduce hesitations.

Ejemplo: Yes — my favorite is Green Park in Miyazaki, Japan, which I have visited before. I like walking among the trees there because it helps me forget daily stress and recharge, so I hope to return with friends or my partner in the future.

× Well, yes, of course I'm love going to pork when I was a child because I like, just like all the children, they were uh, the times and chance for me to meet other kids and make friends.

✓ Well, yes, of course I loved going to parks when I was a child because, like all children, they were times and chances for me to meet other kids and make friends.

Errors: 'I'm love' mixes present auxiliary with base verb (present tense) while the context is past; 'pork' is a mispronunciation/typo for 'park'; singular/plural and article issues with 'parks' and 'children'; awkward phrasing 'they were uh, the times and chance' should be 'they were times and chances' or better 'they were times and opportunities'. Suggestion: Use simple past 'loved' for past habits; correct nouns 'parks', 'children'; simplify phrase to 'they were opportunities for me to meet other kids and make friends.'

× Moreover, I also enjoyed playing games on the grass, light talk or high in sick.

✓ Moreover, I also enjoyed playing games on the grass, chatting, or riding a bike.

Errors: 'light talk' and 'high in sick' are incorrect collocations/typos. Likely intended 'light talk' = 'chatting' and 'high in sick' = 'riding a bike'. Use parallel gerunds after 'enjoyed' (playing, chatting, riding). Suggestion: Keep parallel structure and use correct verb phrases (chatting, riding a bike).

× Uh, and it's also gave me the chance to escape from the grueling school day.

✓ Uh, and it also gave me the chance to escape from the grueling school day.

Error: 'it's also gave' mixes present contraction 'it's' with past verb 'gave' (tense and auxiliary error). Correct past simple 'it also gave'. Suggestion: Match tense and avoid contractions that conflict with verb form; use 'it also gave' for past context.

× Uh, to be honest, I really love POTS, but I prefer going to park as a child, not now because, uh, when I was a child I used to go to with friends and I can easily get in the communicate with all those.

✓ Uh, to be honest, I really love parks, but I preferred going to parks as a child, because when I was a child I used to go with friends and I could easily communicate with them.

Errors: 'POTS' and 'park' typos/capitalization; tense inconsistency: comparing past preference to present requires past form 'preferred'; modal/ability: 'can' should be 'could' for past ability; awkward 'get in the communicate with all those' should be 'communicate with them'. Suggestion: Use consistent tense for comparisons, correct plural 'parks', and use 'could' for past ability; simplify pronoun to 'them'.

× Uh, now I usually walk alone, which is more peaceful and relaxing, but less social.

✓ Uh, now I usually walk alone, which is more peaceful and relaxing but less social.

Minor punctuation issue: comma before 'but' is unnecessary in this short clause. Sentence is otherwise grammatically correct. Suggestion: Remove the extra comma for smoother flow.

× Yes, of course, Park not only benefit me but also benefit everyone from the kit to the background to the elderly who love working together with their friends.

✓ Yes, of course, parks not only benefit me but also benefit everyone, from children to adults to the elderly who enjoy spending time with their friends.

Errors: 'Park' should be plural 'parks' to match general statement; verb 'benefit' with plural subject is correct, but original omitted plural; 'kit to the background' are incorrect words—likely 'kids to adults' or 'children to adults'; 'working together with their friends' is awkward for parks—use 'spending time with their friends'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements and common collocations 'children' and 'adults', and more natural verbs like 'enjoy spending time'.

× Uh, so adding more parts could provide more opportunity and atmosphere for relaxations, exercise for people who love working out, and they could also make the city look greener and more attractive.

✓ Uh, so adding more parks could provide more opportunities and environments for relaxation and exercise for people who love working out, and they could also make the city look greener and more attractive.

Errors: 'parts' should be 'parks'; countable nouns need plural 'opportunities'; 'atmosphere for relaxations' is unidiomatic—use 'environments for relaxation'; maintain parallel noun forms. Suggestion: Use correct nouns and plural forms and natural collocations: 'parks', 'opportunities', 'environment for relaxation'.

× Well, I have visited several park from Vietnam to Japan, but my favorite one is the Green Park in Mizazaki, a beautiful province in Japan.

✓ Well, I have visited several parks from Vietnam to Japan, but my favorite one is Green Park in Miyazaki, a beautiful prefecture in Japan.

Errors: 'park' should be plural 'parks' after 'several'; place name spelled incorrectly 'Mizazaki' should be 'Miyazaki' and province in Japan is 'prefecture' not 'province' (though 'province' may be understood); article 'the Green Park' can be 'Green Park' depending on name. Suggestion: Use plural after 'several' and check proper nouns and correct regional term 'prefecture'.

× Uh, I often go there to relax and walk among the trees and it helped me to forget daily straight and recharge, Uh, so I hope in the future I will have more chance to visit here with my friends or my partner.

✓ Uh, I often go there to relax and walk among the trees and it helps me forget daily stress and recharge, so I hope in the future I will have more chances to visit there with my friends or my partner.

Errors: Tense inconsistency: 'I often go' (present habitual) should pair with 'it helps' (present), not 'it helped' (past). 'daily straight' is a typo for 'daily stress'. 'more chance' should be plural 'more chances' or 'more opportunities'; 'visit here' should be 'visit there' when referring to a place previously mentioned. Suggestion: Keep present tense for habitual actions, correct typos, and use plural 'chances' or 'opportunities', and consistent deixis ('there').