Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct grammar (go to the park → go to parks or the park), and add one specific supporting detail. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding a detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. Every weekend my parents took me to a nearby park where I could ride my bike and play games with other children, which helped me make friends.

Sugerencia: Improve accuracy and clarity: correct tense and collocations (I often go, sit under a tree, feel refreshed), avoid hesitations, and use a linking word to connect reasons. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are green and peaceful, and being there helps me relax. For example, I often go for a walk or sit under a tree to read, which helps me forget about work and feel refreshed.

Sugerencia: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary: use ‘parks’ and ‘city residents’ or ‘people in the city’, avoid filler words, complete your idea (reduce noise and pollution, improve wellbeing). Use linking words (because, therefore) and give a concrete example of where parks could help.

Ejemplo: Yes, definitely. I would like to see more parks in our city because city residents are busy and often exposed to noise and air pollution, so creating parks in residential areas could improve air quality and provide quiet spaces for relaxation.

Sugerencia: Be specific and grammatical: correct location phrasing (I live in Bangladesh or Thailand — clarify), remove fillers and repetition, use present simple/conditional correctly (I would like to visit Panchakati Park). Provide two specific features you want to see and why.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit Panchakati Park in the city center; I heard it is very large and has ponds, extensive green areas and a sky bridge, which would be great for photography and peaceful walks.

× I love to go to park.

✓ I love to go to the park.

Missing definite article 'the' before singular countable noun 'park'. Use 'the park' when referring to parks in general as a familiar place; alternatively use plural 'parks' or 'a park'. Suggestion: say 'go to the park' or 'go to parks' depending on meaning.

× every weekend my parents took me to the park so I could run and play freely in the bike and also met lots of people.

✓ Every weekend my parents took me to the park so I could run and play freely on the bike and also meet lots of people.

Two issues: verb sequence and preposition. 'met' should be base form 'meet' after 'could' (modal-like ability in past uses base verb). Also 'in the bike' is incorrect preposition; use 'on the bike'. Start sentence with capital letter. Suggestion: use 'could meet' and 'on the bike'.

× Sure, I still enjoy going to parks because they're green and peaceful and being there helps me relax.

✓ Sure, I still enjoy going to parks because they're green and peaceful and being there helps me to relax.

Missing particle 'to' with 'help' + infinitive ('helps me to relax') is preferred for clarity. Alternatively use 'helps me relax' without 'to'. Suggestion: use either 'helps me relax' or 'helps me to relax'.

× I'd often go for a walk or say enter a tree to read, which helps me forget about work and feel refresh.

✓ I often go for a walk or sit under a tree to read, which helps me forget about work and feel refreshed.

Several issues: 'I'd often' (would) is awkward; use 'I often' for habitual present. 'say enter a tree' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'sit under a tree'. 'feel refresh' uses adjective wrong form; should be past participle adjective 'refreshed'. Suggestion: use 'I often ... sit under a tree ... feel refreshed'.

× Definitely it should be.

✓ Definitely it should be, or Definitely it should be so.

Sentence fragment and unnatural placement. More natural: 'Definitely, it should be' is awkward; better to say 'Definitely — it should be' or 'Definitely; I think there should be more parks.' Modal 'should' needs clearer subject and complement. Suggestion: rephrase to 'I definitely think there should be more parks.'

× I would like to see more paras in our city because non cities people are busy with their daily activities and too much noise and pollution.

✓ I would like to see more parks in our city because non-city people are busy with their daily activities and there is too much noise and pollution.

Multiple issues: 'paras' is misspelling of 'parks'. 'non cities people' is incorrect; likely 'non-city people' or 'people outside the city' but context unclear — could be 'city people' vs 'country people'. Also phrase requires 'there is too much noise and pollution' to state existence. Suggestion: use 'parks' and 'there is too much noise and pollution' or clarify 'people in the city are busy'.

× I think having a part in different uh places of the city can uh reduce the uh.

✓ I think having parks in different parts of the city can reduce noise and pollution.

Sentence is incomplete and contains wrong words: 'part' should be 'parks' or 'a park' and 'places' needs plural 'parts'. The final 'the uh' is unfinished; complete thought as 'reduce noise and pollution'. Suggestion: specify what can be reduced and use 'parks in different parts of the city'.

× Uh, yes, currently I'm living in the Thailand in Bengal, so I'll like to, uh, go to like to the Panchakati Park, which which is located in the city center, but it was quite huge and there are ponds as well as like the so many green places and the sky bridge.

✓ Yes, currently I'm living in Thailand in Bengal, so I'd like to go to Panchakati Park, which is located in the city center; it is quite large and has ponds as well as many green areas and a sky bridge.

Preposition and article errors: 'in the Thailand' should be 'in Thailand'. Use 'I'd like' (would like) for polite desire. Remove duplicate 'like to'. 'Panchakati Park' needs no 'the' unless official name requires it. Use 'quite large' not 'quite huge' for register. 'there are ponds as well as like the so many green places' is ungrammatical; use 'has ponds as well as many green areas'. Suggestion: simplify and correct prepositions/articles and remove fillers.