Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct tense and articles (e.g., "When I was a child, I loved going to the park"). Keep answers concise (max 4–5 sentences) and add one clear supporting detail using a linking word. Replace vague phrases with specifics (which park, how often).

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I loved going to the local park with my parents and friends. For example, on most weekends we played football and games like hide-and-seek, and sometimes we swam in a small pond nearby. Those visits helped me stay active and made my childhood memorable.

Sugerencia: Correct verb forms and reduce redundancy. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason using a linking phrase (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid confusing time expressions—use "on weekends" or "at the weekend."

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I am very busy during the week. Therefore, on weekends I visit a nearby park to relax and refresh myself.

Sugerencia: Make sentences grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a direct opinion sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Avoid repeating words and incorrect tense forms.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because the two parks near my home in Dhaka become very crowded on weekends. For example, with more parks available, people could spread out and enjoy quieter, more refreshing visits.

Sugerencia: Clarify time expressions and correct verb forms. Give one specific park name and one reason using linking words (e.g., "because" or "so"). Remove irrelevant or confusing sentences ("I was playing next weekend"). Keep answer within 3–4 clear sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, in the future I would love to visit the Safari Park in Ghazipur because I have heard it is quiet and very natural. For instance, I plan to go there with my friends to see wildlife and enjoy a peaceful day outdoors.

× When I was child I loved going to park with my parents and friends.

✓ When I was a child, I loved going to the park with my parents and friends.

Missing definite and indefinite articles and singular noun form: 'a child' requires the indefinite article 'a' before a singular count noun; 'the park' refers to a specific place commonly used with 'the'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× The weekends we often played football and hide and seek.

✓ On weekends we often played football and hide-and-seek.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'weekends' and hyphenate 'hide-and-seek' as a compound noun. Also use plural 'weekends' without 'the' for habitual action. This fixes preposition and sentence structure.

× Also we swim in the ponds.

✓ Also we swam in the ponds.

Past tense context: the previous sentence describes childhood activities in the past, so 'swim' should be in the past tense 'swam'. This matches tense consistency.

× Yes, I like to going parks now 'cause I was so busy in my daily life when I was.

✓ Yes, I like going to parks now because I was so busy with my daily life before.

Use the infinitive or gerund correctly: 'like going' (not 'like to going'). Add preposition 'to' before 'parks'. Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause'. Use 'was so busy with my daily life before' to complete the comparison to past; original fragment 'when I was' is incomplete.

× When I was a weekend that's time for a refreshment, I like to go into the park.

✓ On weekends that is my time for refreshment; I like to go to the park.

Use 'on weekends' for habitual time, not 'when I was a weekend'. 'Time for refreshment' needs no article and sounds more natural as 'my time for refreshment'. Use 'go to the park' rather than 'go into the park'. Use present tense 'like' for current habit.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city cause in where I lived in Dhaka there are only two parks so that was so crowded in the weekend.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city because where I live in Dhaka there are only two parks, so they are very crowded on weekends.

Replace 'cause' with 'because'; change 'in where I lived in Dhaka' to 'where I live in Dhaka' for present relevance. Use plural 'parks' and plural pronoun 'they'. Use 'on weekends' for habitual time and 'very crowded' instead of 'so that was so crowded' to fix tense and structure.

× So if there are available parks more than then it was quite refreshing.

✓ So if more parks were available, it would be quite refreshing.

Use conditional structure: 'if more parks were available' (subjunctive/past for hypothetical) and result clause 'it would be' instead of past 'it was'. Remove awkward 'more than then'.

× Yes, I when in the future I'd love to going to a safari park.

✓ Yes, in the future I'd love to go to a safari park.

Place 'in the future' at the start and use correct verb form 'go' after 'would love to' (not 'going'). Remove extraneous 'when'.

× I sometimes hear about it that was so quiet and natural.

✓ I've sometimes heard that it is very quiet and natural.

Use present perfect 'I've heard' for experiences and correct clause 'that it is' to describe current qualities. Replace 'so' with 'very' for formality.

× It's it's located in Ghazipur.

✓ It's located in Ghazipur.

Remove repeated 'it's'. Sentence is fine with single 'It's located in Ghazipur'.

× I was playing next weekend.

✓ I am planning to go next weekend.

'I was playing next weekend' mixes past tense with a future time; use 'I am planning to go next weekend' or 'I will go next weekend' to express future intention.

× I would love to going with my friends.

✓ I would love to go with my friends.

After 'would love to' use the base verb 'go', not the '-ing' form. This fixes verb form error.