Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer grammatically correct, more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and long-run sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often rode my bicycle there with my father or sometimes my mother, and we would play with our cat near the trees. Because the park was close to our home, we went almost every day, which made it a special part of my childhood.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and word forms, link ideas clearly, and be specific about frequency or plans. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like however or although.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but I rarely find the time now because my days are very busy. In the morning I go to university and after that I work full time, so I can only visit parks on weekends. However, I plan to set aside at least one afternoon a week to walk in a nearby park.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like “I wait”. Give a reason and a specific benefit using linking words such as because or so. Be concise and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they add natural beauty and improve the scenery. More parks would give people places to relax and exercise, and they could help reduce pollution in busy neighborhoods.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific details (location, features, why you want to go) and correct grammar (e.g., "protected"). Use linking words like because or so that show reason and avoid awkward phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Barza Natural Park in the future. It is a large park near my hometown that hosts many wild animals and diverse habitats, so I want to see its wildlife and enjoy its trails. I hope the park is protected so it remains a safe place for animals and visitors.

× When I was a child, I like it, Going to the park is by bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, I liked it. I went to the park by bicycle.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child') so present tense 'like' and present passive-like phrasing are incorrect. Use past simple 'liked' and 'went' for completed past actions. Also split into two sentences for clarity.

× I used to go every day and every night with my father or sometimes with my mother.

✓ I used to go every day with my father, and sometimes with my mother.

The phrase 'every day and every night' is awkward; parks are typically visited during the day. If the intention was daily visits, 'every day' suffices. Also add a comma and conjunction for clearer coordination.

× We used to have a cat and play around with the cat in the park.

✓ We used to have a cat and used to play with it in the park.

Repetition 'cat' is stylistically weak. Use the pronoun 'it' to refer back to the cat. Use parallel 'used to' for habitual past actions.

× Yes I do. I like going to the parks now but I can't since I'm very busy and my schedule is very complex.

✓ Yes, I do. I like going to the parks now, but I can't because I'm very busy and my schedule is very complicated.

'Since' can mean 'because' but 'because' is clearer here. 'Complex' is acceptable but 'complicated' is more natural for schedules. Add commas and correct spacing/punctuation.

× At morning I'm going to the university, after university I'm going to the full time job.

✓ In the morning I go to the university, and after university I go to my full-time job.

Use 'in the morning' not 'at morning'. For habitual present routine use simple present 'I go'. 'Full time' should be hyphenated as 'full-time' when used as an adjective, and possessive 'my' clarifies ownership.

× So basically I will try in future to find more time to go into the park.

✓ So basically I will try in the future to find more time to go to the park.

Add article 'the' before 'future' and use 'go to the park' instead of 'go into the park' for natural phrasing. 'In the future' is the correct idiom.

× Yes, I wait and we hope that the government is building a more parks in the city since they give a very natural beauty, beauty to the city and it's very amazing scenery.

✓ Yes, we wait and hope that the government will build more parks in the city because they add natural beauty and create amazing scenery.

Multiple issues: combine subjects correctly ('we' instead of 'I wait and we hope'), use future 'will build' for planned projects rather than progressive 'is building', use plural 'parks' without 'a', and 'give a very natural beauty, beauty to the city' is redundant — use 'add natural beauty'. Also replace 'since' with 'because' for clarity.

× So we hope we can go to the many different parks in our city.

✓ So we hope we can go to the many different parks in our city.

Grammatically this sentence is acceptable; keep as is. 'Many different' correctly quantifies plural 'parks'. (Minor style note: 'the many' implies known parks; 'many' alone also works.)

× Yes. And specifically there's a natural park we call the Barza Natural Park.

✓ Yes. Specifically, there is a natural park we call Barza Natural Park.

'There's' is acceptable but expand to 'there is' for formality. Remove the redundant article before the park name and drop the repeated 'Natural' if the official name is 'Barza Natural Park'; use commas for clarity.

× It's a very big park and there's a lot of the wild animals there because it's the only park in our original area.

✓ It's a very big park and there are a lot of wild animals there because it's the only park in our local area.

Use 'there are' to agree with plural 'a lot of wild animals'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'wild animals'. 'Original area' is awkward; use 'local area'.

× So we are hoping it will be the protected.

✓ So we are hoping it will be protected.

'The protected' is ungrammatical. Use adjective 'protected' without 'the'. Also 'we are hoping' is fine, or 'we hope' is more natural.