Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và chứa nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + brief reason), sau đó thêm 1–2 câu bổ sung với chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: hoạt động bạn làm ở công viên, ai đi cùng bạn). Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 và dùng từ vựng đơn giản nhưng chính xác.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because my parents often took me there on weekends. I enjoyed playing on the swings and feeding the ducks in the pond. Those visits were a highlight of my childhood.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời hiện tại lộn xộn, nhiều lỗi từ vựng và ý không rõ ràng. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + short reason), sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể và liên quan (ví dụ: tập thể dục, dạo bộ với gia đình, đọc sách). Sử dụng các liên từ đơn giản để kết nối ý (because, so, and). Tránh từ ngữ không phù hợp hoặc không liên quan.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and good for exercise. I often walk or jog there with my family, and sometimes we have a small picnic. The fresh air helps me relax after a busy week.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không phát triển. Luôn trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do. Bạn có thể đưa ra ý kiến khen hoặc lo ngại (ví dụ: cần thêm không gian xanh cho sức khỏe, hoặc lo ngại chi phí). Thêm một ví dụ hoặc kết quả để làm câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide places for people to exercise. For example, a new park near my home would be great for morning walks and for children to play safely.

Sugerencia: Lặp lại 'I don't know' nhiều lần là không hiệu quả. Nếu bạn không chắc, hãy đưa ra một ý kiến tạm thời hoặc nói về loại công viên bạn muốn thăm (ví dụ: có hồ, vườn hoa, khu vui chơi). Cung cấp 1–2 chi tiết hỗ trợ và một liên kết đơn giản để giữ mạch suy nghĩ (for example, because, such as).

Ejemplo: I am not sure about a specific park, but I would like to visit a park with a lake and walking trails. For example, a park with a botanical garden would be nice because I enjoy seeing different plants and relaxing by the water.

× Red, I like going to bed at a till.

✓ When I was a child, I liked going to the park.

The original sentence has incorrect words and order that do not form a coherent meaning. 'Red' is unrelated, 'going to bed at a till' is ungrammatical. Replace with a clear subject and verb in past tense to match the examiner's question about childhood habits: use 'When I was a child, I liked going to the park.' Use past tense 'liked' for a past habit.

× That's either attitude. I love going to bath because I could play on the screen, it's like with my face and we often have family business there.

✓ I still enjoy going to parks now because I can play on the playground, relax with my family, and spend time together.

The original contains many incorrect words and structures: 'That's either attitude' and 'going to bath' are incorrect. 'Could' suggests past possibility; here present tense 'can' is appropriate. Replace 'play on the screen' with 'play on the playground' and 'have family business there' with 'spend time together with my family'. Maintain present simple for current preferences.

× I also enjoy peeing outdoor in inspiring nature which makes the past few existing and realistic.

✓ I also enjoy being outdoors in nature because it feels refreshing and real.

The original uses inappropriate vocabulary ('peeing' is wrong word and informal) and wrong preposition 'outdoor' (should be 'outdoors' or 'outdoorS'). Additionally the clause 'which makes the past few existing and realistic' is meaningless. Use 'being outdoors in nature' and describe the feeling with 'feels refreshing and real' to convey the intended meaning.

× I don't know.

✓ I'm not sure.

While 'I don't know' is grammatically acceptable, in this context 'I'm not sure' is a more natural spoken response to a question about preference. No tense change is required; both are present tense. Suggest using 'I'm not sure' to sound more idiomatic.

× I don't know. I don't know. I don't know. I don't know.

✓ I'm not sure which specific parks I will visit in the future.

Repeating 'I don't know' is grammatical but unhelpful. Provide a single clear sentence in future context: 'I will visit' or 'I might visit' fits questions about future plans. Here 'I'm not sure which specific parks I will visit in the future' uses future tense 'will visit' and is more informative.