Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Speak more clearly and organize your answer: start with a direct topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details. Avoid fillers (uh, like) and correct grammar (past tense, plural nouns). Use linking words (for example, and then) to make your response coherent. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. After school I often went with my friends to play basketball and run around to burn off energy. We also played games on the grass and sometimes had snacks together, so parks were a fun part of my childhood.

Sugerencia: Be concise and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence in present tense, then give a specific routine and reason. Reduce hesitations and use linking words (for example, because, so) to explain why you go. Aim for 2–3 fluent sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I like the relaxed atmosphere and meeting friends there. I usually go every evening after work to exercise or chat with friends, which helps me unwind.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear reason with specific details. Use correct vocabulary (environment, trees, oxygen) and grammar (singular/plural, verb agreement). Use one linking word (because, since) and a concrete example or result. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide green space for people to relax. For example, more trees would mean cleaner air and more places for families to exercise and picnic.

Sugerencia: Give a specific future plan or example and avoid vague repetition. Use correct verb forms (want to, have been) and name one or two places you would like to visit. Use linking words (for example, such as) and explain why you want to visit them in 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit famous parks in other countries, such as Central Park in New York or Hyde Park in London, because I have never been there. I want to see their landscapes and experience how people relax in those large urban parks.

× Of course, when I was young, I must go like, uh, I usually go with my friend after, uh, finish thing finished at the school, I go hang out with my friend like pitch basketball and sometime we go into land and burning out energy and we do something.

✓ Of course, when I was young, I would often go to the park; I usually went with my friends after finishing things at school. I hung out with my friends, played basketball, and sometimes we ran around to burn off energy and did other activities.

The original sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect modal and verb forms (must go, go with my friend, finish thing finished). Use past tense consistently for childhood routines (would often, usually went, finished). Replace 'must go' with 'would often go' to indicate habitual past. Use plural 'friends' for consistency and correct verb forms: 'finished things', 'played', 'ran', 'did'. Use clearer vocabulary 'burn off energy' and split into shorter clauses for readability.

× For sure, I'm still like in love with, uh, going to the park and enjoying the atmosphere there. And I enjoy the people here, people there and, and, and enjoy with my friend. I usually go every, every, uh, evenings after I finish.

✓ For sure, I'm still in love with going to the park and enjoying the atmosphere there. I enjoy being around people and spending time with my friends. I usually go every evening after I finish work or school.

The sentence contains redundant fillers and awkward phrasing ('like in love', 'enjoy with my friend', 'every, every, uh, evenings'). Use present simple for habitual actions (I'm still in love, I usually go). Use 'spending time with my friends' for correct verb-preposition combination. Use singular 'every evening' not plural 'evenings' with 'every'. Specify 'after I finish work or school' for clarity.

× For sure, because if you have more park, it's mean that we have like a good environmental and good environment and a lot of tea in the park so we can like have good oxygen is mean like really nice to see a lot of.

✓ For sure, because if you have more parks, it means that we have a better environment, and many trees in the parks provide good oxygen, so it is really nice to see many green spaces.

Errors include article and count noun usage ('more park' -> 'more parks'), verb agreement ('it's mean' -> 'it means'), incorrect word choice ('a good environmental' -> 'a better environment'), and misspelling 'tea' for 'trees'. Use plural 'parks' and singular 'it means'. Use 'many trees' and 'provide' to clarify the function. 'Many green spaces' is a natural collocation.

× I wanna like see a lot of park in another, another country that I never been there before.

✓ I want to see many parks in other countries that I have never been to before.

Use standard contractions or full forms ('wanna' -> 'want to') and correct countable noun pluralization ('a lot of park' -> 'many parks'). Use correct relative clause and verb tense 'have never been to' for present perfect to refer to experience up to now. Use 'other countries' not 'another, another country' for clarity.

× So like I live in Thailand, I go to Eltaville, a lot of park in Thailand, but I see some, a lot. I see some park in another country. It's really beautiful and good environment.

✓ I live in Thailand and have visited many parks there, but I would like to see parks in other countries because they are often very beautiful and have a good environment.

Original has tense inconsistency and awkward fragments ('I go to Eltaville', unclear place, repeated 'a lot'). Use present simple 'I live in Thailand' and present perfect 'have visited' to indicate experience. Use 'would like to see' for future desire. Use plural 'parks' and 'they are often very beautiful and have a good environment' for clear subject-verb agreement and correct adjective use.