Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and directly answer the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and reason), then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid vague comparisons and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child because they were a rare place for my family to relax. For example, I remember visiting a small garden once a month where I could play on swings and run around with my cousins.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then expand with a specific reason or recent habit. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'although' and avoid repeating previous phrases word-for-word.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks; however, there are few public parks near me. As a result, I usually visit small community green spaces on weekends to get fresh air and stretch my legs.

Sugerencia: This is a solid response. Improve by using more precise vocabulary, a linking word to connect ideas, and a concrete example of benefits. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide quiet places for adults to relax and safe spaces for children to play. For instance, a well-designed park could include benches, walking paths and a playground, which would encourage families to spend time outdoors.

Sugerencia: Answer more directly and try to add a brief plan or preference even if you don't know specific park names. Use conditional language correctly and avoid filler phrases like 'I will let you know.'

Ejemplo: I don't know any specific parks right now, but if possible I would like to visit a large botanical garden or a seaside park in the future because I enjoy nature walks and photography.

× Growing up, I love the idea of going to a park, but unfortunately here in our place in the Philippines, we don't have much public parks as it was in other countries.

✓ Growing up, I loved the idea of going to a park, but unfortunately here in our area in the Philippines we didn't have as many public parks as in other countries.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. 'Growing up' refers to the past, so verbs should be past tense ('loved', 'didn't have'). Also 'much public parks' is incorrect: use 'as many public parks' for countable plural nouns. 'Our place' is better as 'our area' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, of course. But like what I've said, unfortunately here in the Philippines we don't have parks.

✓ Yes, of course. But as I said, unfortunately here in the Philippines we don't have many parks.

Mixes present perfect ('I've said') with simple past context; 'as I said' fits better. Also 'we don't have parks' is acceptable but more natural to say 'we don't have many parks' to indicate scarcity.

× Yes, of course I would like to see more parks in our city as it will help people to have a place where they could sit and relax for awhile and for kids to enjoy outdoors activities.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to see more parks in our city, as they would give people places to sit and relax for a while and allow children to enjoy outdoor activities.

Several issues: 'it will help people to have a place' is awkward—use plural 'they would give people places'. 'Awhile' should be two words 'a while'. 'Outdoors activities' is incorrect; use adjective 'outdoor activities'. 'Kids' is informal; 'children' is more standard. Also modal/tense: 'would' fits polite hypothetical desire.

× I don't think I know some parks that I would love to visit in the future, but if there will be, I will let you know.

✓ I don't know of any parks that I would like to visit in the future, but if I hear of any, I will let you know.

The original has awkward structure 'I don't think I know some parks' and incorrect future clause 'if there will be'. Use 'I don't know of any' and conditional 'if I hear of any' to express possibility. 'Would love' changed to 'would like' to match neutral tone, though 'would love' is acceptable.