Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and directly answer the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and unclear references (e.g. “her”) and correct grammar (use past tense consistently). Use a linking phrase to clarify your explanation.

Ejemplo: No, I didn’t have the chance to go to parks as a child. As a result, I often imagined visiting them and watching other children play; this became a small childhood dream I kept for years.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unfinished sentences and repeated phrases; describe what you do in the park and how it makes you feel.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. These days I go to relax and read because the quiet atmosphere and greenery help me de-stress and appreciate nature's beauty.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and support with specific reasons and examples. Use appropriate grammar (e.g. “children” not “children's”), avoid filler words like “umm,” and use linking words (e.g. “because”, “for example”) to make your point coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in my city because they provide safe places for children to play and spaces where families can relax together. For example, a new neighborhood park would encourage weekend picnics and outdoor activities for all ages.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer and then add a clear reason or an example. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrasing; use correct structure like “I don’t have a specific park in mind, but …” and mention what you would enjoy about visiting new parks.

Ejemplo: I don’t have a particular park I want to visit, but I’m happy to explore any well-maintained park I find. For instance, I would especially enjoy parks with walking trails and lakes because they are peaceful and good for photography.

× I never had the chance to go to the park when I was a child, but definitely I I would really love to go with her.

✓ I never had the chance to go to the park when I was a child, but I would really have loved to go there with her.

This sentence mixes past inability with a hypothetical desire; use past perfect/past conditional to express a missed opportunity. Remove duplicate 'I'. Use 'have loved' (or 'would have loved') to indicate an unreal past desire and 'there' to refer to the park. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It has become my fantasy growing up since I never had to experience to go there.

✓ It became my fantasy as I was growing up, since I never had the experience of going there.

The original uses awkward tense and an incorrect infinitive phrase. Use past simple 'became' and the gerund 'growing' with 'as' for time. Replace 'never had to experience to go there' with 'never had the experience of going there' for correct noun phrase and gerund use. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Yes, I would always love to go to the park even though I am not that young anymore.

✓ Yes, I always love going to the park even though I am not that young anymore.

'Would always love' is conditional or habitual in hypothetical contexts; here use present simple 'always love' for a general present preference and 'going' (gerund) after 'love' for activities. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Maybe I would go there not to play now, but to just relax and enjoy the calmness of the surroundings and enjoy the view of the.

✓ Maybe I would go there not to play now, but just to relax and enjoy the calm surroundings and the view.

Use parallel gerunds 'to relax and enjoy', remove redundant 'enjoy', and 'calmness of the surroundings' is better as 'calm surroundings'. Complete the noun after 'view' (e.g., 'the view') and avoid trailing 'of the.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, I would love to see more parks in our cities specially I know that this gonna help umm not just a children's but also all the adults to have spent more time with their family by sitting on the park.

✓ Yes, I would love to see more parks in our city, especially because I know that this will help not just children but also adults to spend more time with their families by sitting in the park.

Use singular 'city' to match speaker's city, replace informal 'specially' with 'especially' and 'this gonna' with 'this will'. 'Children's' is possessive and wrong; use plural 'children'. Use 'adults' not 'all the adults' for naturalness. Use infinitive 'to spend' (not 'to have spent') and plural 'families' and preposition 'in the park' for location. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Well, I don't have any specific uh place or parks to that I want to visit in the future because I am very happy to wherever I had the opportunity to visit a park anywhere I go.

✓ Well, I don't have any specific place or park that I want to visit in the future because I am happy to visit any park whenever I have the opportunity.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and confused. Remove filler 'uh', choose singular or plural consistently ('place or park'), use 'that' correctly as a relative pronoun, and rephrase the second clause with correct tense and word order: 'I am happy to visit any park whenever I have the opportunity.' Grammar problem type ID:26