Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите более грамотно и избегайте повторов; используйте простые прошедшие формы и уточняющие детали. Исправьте ошибки согласования и число, уберите лишние слова и повторения.

Ejemplo: Yes, I used to enjoy going to parks when I was a child. I often fed ducks by the lake and ran around the playground with my friends.

Sugerencia: Сократите паузы и заполнители (uh), используйте связные предложения и правильную грамматику (например, 'I am walking' или 'I walk'). Дайте одну-две конкретные причины и пример активности в парке.

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually listen to music and take a walk there, and sometimes I call my friends while sitting on a bench.

Sugerencia: Исправьте артикли и число (one park), улучшите структуру: начальное утверждение + причина. Добавьте конкретную деталь — например, какие удобства вы хотели бы видеть в новых парках.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. There is only one park near my house, so I would like more parks with playgrounds and seating areas so people can relax and exercise.

Sugerencia: Избегайте заполнителей и повторов, используйте точные прилагательные (например, 'great' вместо 'grey test'), и правильные фразы ('go there', 'one of the most famous parks'). Дайте короткое объяснение, почему вы хотите туда поехать.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit Central Park in New York because it is one of the most famous urban parks, and I want to see its lakes, trails and historic landmarks.

× I used to like to go to parks when I was a child. I remember I feed ducks near the lake lakes and I run.

✓ I used to like going to parks when I was a child. I remember I fed ducks near the lake and I ran.

The verbs 'feed' and 'run' should be in the past simple form ('fed', 'ran') because the student is referring to completed actions in the past. Also, 'used to like to go' is acceptable but 'used to like going' is more natural. Remove the duplicate word 'lakes' and use 'the lake' for specificity. Suggestion: use past simple for completed past events and proofread for repeated words.

× I still like, uh, going to parks, uh, now, uh, because I usually listen to music, then I go somewhere, especially parks, and I also like to talk to my friends on the phone. Then I are walking.

✓ I still like going to parks now because I usually listen to music and then go somewhere, especially parks, and I also like talking to my friends on the phone. Then I walk.

The clause 'I are walking' is grammatically incorrect: subject 'I' requires the verb 'am' for present continuous ('I am walking') or simple present 'I walk'. Here simple present 'I walk' fits the habitual context. Also reduce filler 'uh' and use gerund forms consistently ('going', 'talking'). Suggestion: use simple present for habits and match subject and verb form.

× Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because now I have only one parks near my house and I usually go to there.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because now I have only one park near my house and I usually go there.

'One parks' mixes singular and plural; use singular 'park' after 'one'. Also 'go to there' is incorrect; use 'go there' without 'to'. Suggestion: ensure number agreement between numerals and nouns and avoid extra prepositions when using 'there'.

× I would like to go to the Central Park in New York in the future. I think, uh, it uh, is one of, uh, the most, uh, grey test parks in the world and I would like to go to there.

✓ I would like to go to Central Park in New York in the future. I think it is one of the greatest parks in the world and I would like to go there.

Do not use the definite article with proper names like 'Central Park' unless part of the name requires it; use 'Central Park' not 'the Central Park'. 'grey test' appears to be a mispronunciation of 'greatest'. 'go to there' is incorrect; use 'go there'. Suggestion: use the correct name form and correct adjective 'greatest'; remove extra 'to' before 'there'.