Parks— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions, and add one or two specific details with linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I used to visit more than twice a week, and I often played games like tag and hide-and-seek with neighborhood friends. Those outings are some of my fondest childhood memories because they were full of laughter and freedom.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and repetitions, and organize the answer: give a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific details about frequency and reasons (e.g., seasons, activities).

Ejemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, although not very often. When I have free time, I usually go for walks to enjoy the trees and plants, especially in spring and autumn because the weather and colours are beautiful.

Sugerencia: Be direct and reduce filler words. Use linking phrases to explain reasons and give one specific example of how parks differ to support your view.

Ejemplo: I don't think more parks are necessary in my city. There are already enough, and each one has a different character — for example, one park is quiet with ponds while another has sports facilities — so I choose based on my mood.

Sugerencia: Clarify your main idea and avoid repetition. State a clear topic sentence about wanting to visit parks abroad, then give a specific example of a park or country and explain why you want to visit it.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit many parks abroad. For instance, I want to see Japan's Kenroku-en because I admire its traditional landscaping and seasonal beauty, and I think walking there would be a unique cultural experience.

× Yes, I love to go to the park.

✓ Yes, I loved going to the park.

The question asks about liking parks as a child (past). The original uses simple present 'love', which is incorrect for past reference. Use past tense 'loved' and gerund 'going' to show habitual past action. Suggestion: match tense to time frame: 'loved going to the park.'

× When I was a child I I used to go to the park more than twice a week and play some tags or or hide and seek or something like that.

✓ When I was a child, I used to go to the park more than twice a week and play tag or hide-and-seek.

There are repetition errors and awkward pluralization. 'I I' and 'or or' are simple repetitions (speech disfluency). 'Used to' correctly indicates past habitual action. 'Tags' should be 'tag' (the game name is uncountable here) and 'hide and seek' is conventionally hyphenated as 'hide-and-seek'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestion: remove duplicated words and use standard game names.

× I still remember it.

✓ I still remember it.

This sentence is correct: present tense 'still remember' appropriately expresses a present memory about past events. No change needed.

× Yes, I like to go to 1st now, but it's not but it's not often when I it's not often when I when I have some free time I go to the park and enjoy some enjoy some trees and plants and especially in autumn and spring I really enjoy to walk.

✓ Yes, I like to go to parks now, but I don't go often. When I have some free time I go to the park and enjoy the trees and plants, and especially in autumn and spring I really enjoy walking.

Multiple issues: '1st' appears to be a typo; it should be 'parks' or 'the park'. Repetition 'but it's not but it's not' and 'when I it's not often when I when I' are disfluencies. Use present simple 'like' for general present preference and 'don't go often' for frequency. 'Enjoy some enjoy some trees' is duplicated; use 'enjoy the trees and plants'. After 'enjoy' we typically use gerund for activities: 'enjoy walking' not 'enjoy to walk'. Suggestion: remove repetitions, correct typos, use gerund after 'enjoy' and add articles where needed.

× Well, not I don't think so, because there's I think there is enough perk in my city and each each pack has different character character and and depends on my mood. I change where to go. So I don't I don't think it is necessary to increase the park.

✓ Well, no, I don't think so, because I think there are enough parks in my city and each park has a different character, and depending on my mood I choose where to go. So I don't think it is necessary to add more parks.

Multiple problems: 'there's' (there is) is singular but 'parks' is plural — use 'there are'. 'perk' and 'pack' are typos for 'park'. Repetition 'each each' and 'character character' are disfluencies. Use 'a different character' (singular) and 'depending on my mood' (preposition + noun) instead of 'depends on my mood'. 'Increase the park' is unnatural; use 'add more parks'. Suggestion: fix subject-verb agreement with 'there are', correct typos, remove repetitions, and use natural collocations.

× There's many park, there are many parks I want to go, but I want, but I like to go to parks in abroad.

✓ There are many parks I want to visit, but I like to go to parks abroad.

'There's' (there is) with plural 'many park(s)' is incorrect — use 'there are many parks'. 'Park' should be plural. 'In abroad' is ungrammatical; the correct phrase is 'abroad' without a preposition. 'Want to go' is better as 'want to visit' for places. Suggestion: use 'there are' for plural, pluralize 'parks', and remove 'in' before 'abroad'.

× For me, I like to travel abroad and the park near my city mark different mark different parks from different countries.

✓ For me, I like to travel abroad, and parks in other countries are different from the parks near my city.

The original has unclear pronoun references and word order: 'the park near my city mark different mark different parks' is ungrammatical repetition. Rephrase to compare parks abroad with local parks: 'parks in other countries are different from the parks near my city.' Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct comparative structure 'are different from'.

× So I want to see and walk around real park.

✓ So I want to see and walk around real parks.

'Real park' is missing an article or pluralization. Since the speaker refers to parks in general, plural 'parks' is appropriate. Also 'walk around' is fine. Alternatively, 'a real park' works if referring to one. Suggestion: use plural 'parks' or include an article: 'a real park'.